IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 83

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that some unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (e.g. working in a charity, improving the relationship of neighborhood or teaching sports to children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people suggest that volunteering works should be a mandatory part of the education. I strongly agree with this opinion as volunteer work can bring benefits to the young.

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Many criminals commit further crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

It is a well-known fact that many criminals engage in more criminal activities after they get released from jail. In my personal opinion, there could be a myriad of reasons for the convicts to involve themselves in committing such crimes. This essay will discuss the main reasons of this tendency and describe the possible effects of the problem.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Social competitions are becoming increasingly drastic these days, and hence the younger generations are required to strive hard for better lives. Some educational patterns focus on delivering the idea that nothing is impossible after trying your best. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this educational concept.

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It has been proposed that citizens should only consume food and drink products that have been produced in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been proposed by some individuals that the public should only consume food and drinks which have been produced in their home countries. I completely disagree with this statement because if people only consume food and drinks from their home countries, they will not get the tastes and nutrients of food and drinks of other countries, and those countries, which cannot grow food to meet their population needs, will suffer from scarcity of food.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

The diagram illustrates how the production of sugar from sugar cane. Overall, there are seven stages that require various tools and components during the process, whether it is mechanical or manual, from the sugar canes to becoming sugar.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In some companies, employees must wear uniforms at all times. The benefits of wearing uniforms at all times are service-users can easily recognise the staff and ask for services, and uniforms increase the commitment of staff towards their responsibilities. The drawbacks of wearing uniforms at all times are staff get bored wearing the same types of clothing every day, and they might not be able to clean their uniforms every day.

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The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

It is said that, online learning is unlikely to replace traditional learning in schools. This essay strongly agrees with the above mentioned statement for two main reasons. First, online learning requires expensive sources such as laptops and stable internet connection that are unavailable in many countries. Second, traditional sources are more reliable in terms of availability and health considerations.

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Some people say that the main environment on problem for our time is to loss of particulare species of plans an animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that environmental issues cause multiple problems. While it is a commonly held belief that the loss of special species such as flora and fauna is an essential ecological issue, there is also an argument that there are more crucial environmental problems. This essay will analyze this topic from both points of view and express my point of view. 64

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some people think that governments should invest more money in public trasnportation systems to reduce

As society continues to progress the issue of traffic has emerged as an issue, that must be addressed. To solve this problem, while some individuals contend that there are alternative strategies to reduce traffic frequency, however, I firmly believe that governments should allocate more funds to public transportation. As this will provide to reduce private vehicles , especially in urban areas and help to increase the quality of the air. This essay will examine the key arguments supporting my viewpoint and provide relevant ideas to justif it.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Different types of transportation should be recommended and global rules have to be introduced to control the car ownership and usage. It is indeed known that governments can encourage different forms of transport and international organizations can introduce laws to reduce car ownership and usage. I do agree with this view, because due to cars cities have become congested resulting in traffic and they make cities noisy. But it is important to acknowledge that people should still have a choice to use their car.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that professionals, like doctors and engineers must work in the country where they got trained. Meanwhile, others think they must have a choice to work in another country if they want to. A government has power to employ trained professionals to one of its departments and make them stay, but cannot force them. In my opinion, educated experts should have their own choice to whether they should work for their own nation or for a foreign nation.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is significant for humans to make tough decisions, both in their careers and their own lives. In my opinion, benefits of taking risks outweigh the limitations, but sometimes this is the opposite. Taking risks allow people to reach their goals faster especially in their careers, however sometimes taking a risk can be dangerous especially if it affects people personally.

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1.Some people believe that the increasing use of technology in education has both advantages and disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Technology has transformed education in may ways, offering significant benefits but also introducing challenges. In recent years, online platforms like Coursera and Udemy have made learning more accessible, while digital tools continue to change the way we teach and learn. However, there are concerns that increased reliance on technology might negatively impact interpersonal skills and educational quality.

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It is important for chidren to learn the differrnce between right or wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Interpersonal development is crucial for building positive relationsips and ensuring a harmonious society. Instilling discipline at an early age plays a vital role in teaching children proper etiquette and preparing them for future challenges. There are clear advantages to disciplining children early, the potential drawbacks must also be considered.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Many high-level positions in companies are filled by male employees although in many developed countries, more than 50 percent of workforce are female. Some people argue that companies should provide employment to a certain percentage of females in these positions. I completely disagree with this statement because this restricts companies to achieve their desired goals and fosters discrimination among men and women in the employment procedure.

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In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sports on television. Some believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sports themselves. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

There is a side of the world with continuous coverage of sports and activities on TV , many people think this discourages the youth from doing any aspects of sports by themselves . I strongly disagree with this statement for some reasonable reasons , in this essay, I will discuss the view and give my reasons .

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Animals are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

Animals are at risk of disappearing forever. Protecting only those which are resourceful to humans said by some people in my opinion is seems a little unreasonable.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Enhance future lifestyle is this a negative or positive development?

In recent years, parents put a huge stress on their children to achieve goals to be successful. This essay will mention the major cause of this phenomenon and the positive enhancement effect on children's lifestyles in future development.

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The intrnet has brought sea change in the way inforamtion is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. what are the most serious problems linked to the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

The importance of advanced technology increases connectivity globally, provides efficiency and serves an equal amount of challenges, which has always debatable and has now become more controversial with many people claiming that digitalization powered by internet services is hazardous, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over its potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate negative effects of this trend along with some remedies to solve this problem thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that children should be taught by parents until they can be impressive and brilliant people in their communities. In contrast, it seems that schools are the best institutions for this goal. I partially agree with the first statement, and I will discuss both aspects of guiding children by their parents or schools in the following paragraph.

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