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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development ? Huy Tran

In the Fourth Technological Revolution, scientists have researched and created robots operate with artificial intelligence. Nowadays, robots are gradually replacing humans to do housework and at the company. This seems to bring a lot of benefits but to me, it comes with a lot of harm. In this paragraph, i will provide the negatives that robots are replacing humans and give my point of view.

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Topic 13: Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unneccessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Some people think that children should spend all of their spare time with their families while others believe that it is unnecessary and even has negative effects. I personally belive that while spending free time with their families strengthens the bonding of children with their parents, chidlren should spend their free time on developing soft skills, which helps them to secure job in the future.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people forecast that cash may no longer be used to pay when people buy things from shops, and buyers might all use online banking or credit cards to pay for what they buy. I believe that it will be a must with the rapid development of technology, and I think that some people may feel disappointed with this trend because of some certain personal reasons.

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More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, technology is more and more developing to help improve people's life. Especially, artificial intelligence replaces humans in some jobs.. Although some restriction need to be addressed, I think this development is mostly beneficial.

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Good facilities can be found in cities, but not in the countryside. Therefore, new doctors and teachers should be sent to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that good facilities only can be found in urban areas not in rural areas. Therefore, doctors and teachers who are new should be sent to countryside. I completely disagree with this statement because new doctors and teachers have the right to work where they want, and services should not be restricted to one area rather should be distributed equally everywhere.

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to what extent has the internet made life more convenient? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Internet has been one the greatest invention of the humankind and changing our lives on daily basis. It has made people life easier. I completely agree with the statement. This essay will provide reasons to support the statement with examples from real life.

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Small businesses should avoid recruiting young woman who do not have their own family in order to avoid paying maternity leave later on. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that small business should avoid recruiting young females who do not have their own families in order to avoid paying maternity leave in their employment period. I personally disagree with this statement because every woman should have the right to create her own family and work at any age of her life.

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It is widely believed that transportation is the main source of pollution. While some believe governments should address this, others believe this is the responsibility of individuals.Discuss both sides of this

Many people think that transportation is the main reason for pollution on the earth,while a bit of them believe that the governments should take the whole responsibility for pollution ,however,the rest of them think that the individual have to care about that problem.In my opinion, I strongly agree that governments should be conscious of this problem , because it has the right to save the earth and to create rules that help develop the community in a better way.

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It is a good idea for people to continue work in their old ages, if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree.

The debate around working at older age continues to spark diverse viewpoints, with proponents and opponents firmly voicing their perspectives. I strongly agree with the stance that it is good for the elderly to continue work, which brings them mental and economic benefits, as substantial empirical evidence and comprehensive academic studies consistently support this position.

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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Exchanging students internationally for education is considered by teachers to be beneficial for adolescents. To my notion, this action is advantageous not only for education, but also for social conditions. In this essay, I am going to discuss the both sides, advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it causes equal opportunities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some individuals believe that the cutting-edge technologies impact the wealth gap negatively, others disagree with them. I firmly believe that advanced applications promote balance between the communities of different incomes. This essay will outline both sides, providing the arguments for and against the aforementioned statement.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possi le solutions can you suggest?

There are several reasons why some individuals tend to do negative things repeatedly after they get out of prisons. I think it might happen due to the lack of rehabilitation such as education or job training and get a discrimination from society, but there are also some solutions to reduce their intention to commit crimes again.

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The qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern world, people are all competing for their businesses on the field. Some might say that in order to be successful, they need a college education. While others, who might have made it without a degree would state otherwise. In this essay, I will explore both perspectives before continuing with my own opinion.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that competition, whether at work, at school and in daily life is good whereas others believe that people should try to cooperate more. So is competition a good thing? In my opinion, yes.

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As a result of tourism, some historical buldings and sites are being damaged beyond repair. What could be done to prevent this?

Nowadays, tourism is leading to adverse damage to historical landmarks and even makes them unrepairable. I believe exploring the causes of this problem can assist in finding a suitable solution to resolve it.

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Do you agree or disagree with the argument of have got to believe in yourself, even when no one else does. ? Write a short and well-organized essay in about 200 to 250 words to express your own argument(s) supported with relevant examples.

Having faith in yourself when nobody else does is essential to many people, meanwhile, there is an argument that contradicts this statement. I personally agree that people have to have much confidence in themself but in a realistic manner.

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Some people would that govermant should ban smoking in all public areas, even though this would affect some other people's freedoms.

In contemporary world, cigarette consumption is increasing day by day. Some individuals think that authorities should ban smoking in all public areas, even though this would affect some other people's freedoms. I strongly agree this idea since there are a lot of harmful effects of smoking to human health and the environment.

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Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?Find essays with the same topic

It is generally claimed by people that some kinds of sports, such as boxing, karate and marital arts in general directly transfere violence and can lead to a chaotic society where people portray intense aggressiveness. Hence, those individuals concur that they should be banned from TV and, therefore, from international sports events. I wholeheartedly subscribe to the idea that says we all are forced to live in a complex and imperfect reality. Thus, I can only partly agree with this statement.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree.

The debate around health problems caused by high sugar level food and drinks continues to spark diverse viewpoints, with proponents and opponents firmly voicing their perspectives. I strongly agree with the stance that the price of sugary products should be lifted to discourage people from consuming sugar, as substantial empirical evidence and comprehensive academic studies consistently support this position.

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Some people believe that plastic shopping bags damage the environment and their use should be prohibited. Other people insist that consumers should have the right to choose whether they want to use a plastic bag or not. Discuss both views and give your opinion

According to one part of community, usage of plastic bags has to be banned, because the usage of polystyrene harms the surroundings. The other part of society thinks that clients can have freedom to select between to use synthetic bags or not. In my opinion, plastic bags should be forbidden and replaced by environmentally and friendly alternatives.

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