IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 865

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and work tidy with everything organized and in the correct places, what is your opinion about it?

In the contemporary epoch there is an irrefutable debate among folks that keeping our indoor environment well-arranged, should be considered as a crucial matter. Explicitly, human being will have functioned more properly in a tidy house or office.Putting stuff on their own place could possibly open up new gates of reducing stress and being focus for each individual. This essay will elucidate the aforementioned circumstances in the subsequent paragraphs.

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In many countries people are living in a throw away society where things are used for a short time and throw away. what are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to?

Living in societies where inhabitants use objects as disposable has been the subject of debate in contemporary states. Time is the most reason for the usage short term of materials. however, by some approaches we can reduce this trouble that causes environmental pollution.

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing, whilst see it as something negative which should be avoided discuss both views and give your opinion

Adolescence is a time when independence and parental influence clash. Since teens is able to think on their own, they have to live with their parents who have some rules and expectations of them. Teenagers do not hold the same values and beliefs as their parents. Their goal is to have fun but their parents want them to keep safe. In this ,essay we will discuss both views and give our opinion.

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Some people believe that the increasing number of vehicles is one of the biggest problems facing cities, while others believe that cities have bigger challenge. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The dramatical proliferation in the number of cars is becoming a concern for many urban areas, which is reckoned to be the most serious problem that should be priority to alleviated, whereas opponents argue that there are others problems that should be more worried. In this essay, the details of both statements will be elaborated, and my perspective supporting the former views will be reached.

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A film can portray the culture and traditions of a country. What films have you watched that tell a specific story of a country? Use specific examples and details to support your response.

The cultural and traditional values of a country can be depicted by a videotape. I believe that this notion holds true as there are numerous motion picture that have achieved much success in doing so, a few of them are mentioned in upcoming paragraphs.

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In most countries, young people form a large proportion of those who are unemployed. Why this is the case, and what can be done to solve the problem?

Unemployment is becoming a major problem mainly in developing countries. By in large, youth is struggling with the lack of job opportunities. The following paragraphs will examine the cause of this issue which is of paramount importance and recommend some solutions.

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In some countries it is illegal to stop people applying for a job because of their age. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, in many countries, employers are not allowed to prevent individuals from applying for a job because of their ages. In my opinion, it is a negative development that can lead to child labour and avoid retirement.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

Nowadays it is widely spread among a young generation community to leave their country for some time to study, to work or to live abroad. Clearly, the cause of it is that young people are excited about getting to know different cultures, getting some new experiences and just creating some memories. In this essay, I will provide the advantages and disadvantages about moving abroad of studying and living abroad.

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Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession.What factor may have caused this situation and what in your opinion, should be done it.

University graduates are dreaming to get an occupation in line with their chosen profession. They hope by enrolling in university will help their professional career in the future. However, in reality it is hard for them to meet their professional expectations. In this essay, I will describe factors that may lead to this situation.

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In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree

It is common that most countries use people with light criminal offence to participate in public services. Even though some believe that every convict should sentenced to prison against their crimes, I would argue that it is essential to utilise them in communical activities for a greater benefit.

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In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The development of any nation directly depends on how perfectly new generations are trained. It is argued that infants shall act in a particular way and should not have full casual behaviour. This essay will discuss that minors have full freedom to behave childish way and not as an adult.

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In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?

It is common that in most countries that the government has the law of not sentencing association to prison, instead work in on community service in the neighbourhood for the community who committed a minor felony, and i strongly suggest this is the best move and I will support my statement in the paragraphs below

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The government should control the Internet to reduce cyber crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Cybersecurity is a challenging issue in the modern world. While I partly agree that to prevent internet violations ministry should take action to control the online platforms to ensure users’ safety online. However, it is also a responsibility of an individual to be careful about online fraud.

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In the past, many male leaders have led our society to conflicts and violence. The world would be better governed and more peaceful if it was ruled by women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are controversias heating a debate over which genders can be better world leaders. While history has shown that male leaders often produce bad results, can a world led by women become more tranquil? In my opinion, judging a person's leadership ability based on their gender can lead to erroneous judgments and above all, these two factors are not necessarily compatible with each other.

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Life nowadays is generally much more stressful than in the past. Give some reasons why people suffer more from stress nowadays, and say what they can do to reduce it.

These days, anxiety has increased in people more than a few decades ago. This is because the desire of bringing materialistic things has increased. For getting a luxurious lifestyle, people put so much pressure on them for earning money. The situation can be improved by achieving a work-life balance.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

More and more unwell people are hesitant to consult their family doctor and instead prefer optional remedies and procedures. In my opinion, they are taking a risk, and it is harmful to their health.

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Some people believe that, professional, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training, others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In resent days many schools of thought acknowledged that professional bodies should be united and encouraged to practice in different countries if the individual met with the countries criteria, even if not trained in thet particula cuntry. In my opinion I completely surgest that professionals in different areas should be given opportunity to show they skills by working in other countries, it also have barriers such as communication.

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Some people think that the best way to succeed in life is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of the debatable concepts of today's world is university education . A bunch of personages claim that the main reason for the succeed life is the university education is a just argument , howbeit there are some disagreement with it and say that it is not true . In this discourse , I will explicate both stances before presenting my opinion .

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In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an increasing trend of following a vegetarian diet in some countries. This essay will argue that the advantages outweigh the drawback because it is healthy, and protect animals and will explain why the argument against the vegetarian diet, which is the lack of nutrients, is not valid. The major benefit of a vegetarian diet is that it is very healthy for the body. Vegetables have a lot of good nutrients such as vitamins and fibres that are good for the human body. Moreover, consuming animal meat and fats for a long time will lead to heart disease. For example, according to the medical book “Gray’s Anatomy”, most heart failures are due to the blockage found in the heart’s arteries and the primary substance of the blockage is trans-fat, which is also found in animal meat products. Another benefit of being vegetarian is that it will save animal lives. People argue that animals have feelings just like human beings. In other words, they feel pain when they are cut or injured. The...

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some cities create new housing for their growing population by constructing a smaller number of high-rise buildings. other cities create more of low-rise building. which solution is better. in your opinion?

In order to tackle the problem of rapid population increase, the government has come out with two solutions; one is creating more high-rise buildings, and one is creating more low-rise buildings. Both solutions have merits and demerits, and I prefer the first solution. My reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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