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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Famous actors, musicians and sport players are often rewarded with substantial amount of money. Such pays are hardly unaccessible for company workers, or even leaders, but is known to be the norm for pop stars. Hence, I strongly agree that such entertainers are unfairly rewarded with extreme high pays, and also stating out how instead other forms of performers including classical musicians and theatrical members should recieve higher pay.

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Childood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsilbility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extend do you agree to this statement?

Obesity is undoubtedly increasing, nowadays, with a reported 66% of children in Australia are now overweight. People believe that, learning institutions must take action on what foods are given to their students and incorporate physical activities within the campus. I totally agree with this statement.

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There are those who feel that modern technology has had an overall positive impact on lives, but others feel its existence has been more of a negative influence. Discuss both sides essay and give your own opinion

With the influence of technology in our daily lives and the level of our dependency on modern devices, it is difficult to avoid technology today. While some people think that its existence has no positive impact on the users of technology, I agree with those who believe that it has a valuable impact on our lives.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both school and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Currently, the youth leads an unhealthy lifestyle that is detrimental to both their physical and mental health and their parents and this must be controlled by their parents and an educational establishment. In this essay, I will either agree or disagree with this statement. Firstly, I will explore the reasons why teenagers lead a sedentary lifestyle and secondly, I will criticize the lack of activity in schools.

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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while other thinks that it is essential for the human kind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Necessity of the researching of the space for the humanity is a very pressing dilemma nowadays for people. Even if there is a desire of a people's nature to discover new possibilities of the world, society is not able to spend money on unbeneficial science without any practical application.

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Some people say that physicaleducation classes are an important part of a child's education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The majority of schools devote most of the school day to academic classes but also set aside time for physical education and other nonacademic classes. However, not everyone agrees with this way of dividing up the school day. While there are people who think that school should only be about academics, others believe that physical education is also important, and I agree with this point of view. Some people feel that school should be all about academics. According to this point of view, children need to spend their entire school day learning math, science, literature, and history. Devoting time to these subjects is the best way to prepare children for their future university education and careers. If children enjoy playing sports, they should do it outside of school time. Other people, however, feel that physical education is an important part of a child's education. According to this point of view, physical education teaches children important skills such a...

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Other say that there are more important environmental problems

Nowadays,with the development of the world people come across a lot of difficulties related to the environment. Some people believe that today's most serious environmental problem is reducing plant and animal species.Others find that there are more significant threats associated with surroundings.This essay will explain both sideʼs views.

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More and more people are using computers and other electronic devices to acess information. So, printing of books, magazines and newspapers should not be done. Do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary world, advancement in technology has changed the way public acquire information. An ever- increasing number of individuals are utilizing electronic apparatus such as tablets, computers and laptops. Several individual opine that there is no need to print traditional hard copies of newspapers, books and magazines. I firmly believe that this statement does not hold much ground. This essay intends to discuss why it is necessary to print such material.

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Parents are unhappy with the increasing amount of violence in computer games such as TV programmes and leisure activities. How much harmful it can be on children and what can be done to solve this problem. Give relevant examples from your own experience.

In this modern era, where technology has become more and more to easily to access it was impacted the children. Amount of violence in computer games such as TV Programmes and leisure activities was influenced the child's to copy that. In my opinion it can develop the children to do a harm thing to each others.

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In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their aging members. Do you Agree?

In this contemporary world, old people living in evacuation houses is a ubiquitous concern and considered inappropriate , because in societies taking concern for them is an assumed family duty. This essay totally agrees with the given statement.

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Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Environmental protection is crucial for the city, some people believe that the government should take responsibility while others state that citizens should be responsible. This essay will investigate both views and agrees with the latter opinion.

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It is important for children to learn what is right and what is wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree? What sort of punsihment should be given?

Children are moulded according to their surroundings, and it is essential that they learn to differ between good and bad at a very young age. I partially agree with the idea of punishing them in order to teach a lesson; in fact, it should depend on the kind of mistake made. In this essay, I will outline how punishments can deter teenagers from doing a wrong act again and will explain some of the ways in which parents and teachers can punish kids.

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In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

In most countries the affordable alternative have been dominated by fast foods. This situation is threatening the public health in many countries, as intake of junk foods per capita has been rising. I absolutely agree for an urgent increase on taxes imposed on such goods, in order to effectively reduce numbers of chronic diseases, as well as an effect of nudging fast food industry to change their prospective.

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Some people say that too much time and resources are spent on the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree and disagree.

Whether the safeguard of wild animals and birds costs a fortune sparks controversy among the public. I strongly disagree with this statement from my perspective.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered that people have the opportunity to revolutionize certain aspects of their lives or just stick with their comfort zone. However, others believed new changes are meaningful and I argue that societies could challenge themself following the modernism day.

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In today's world, the pressure of modern life negatively impacting family life. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, people’s personal lives get pressurized by the modern norms of living. While I agree with this notion because competition and priority for fulfilling monetary needs have increased over the last few decades.

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alternative energy source that use natural power of wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal oil and the gas that we use to power our cities and transport

It is frequently believed that the production of green energy such as solar power wind power and wave power is unaffordable and complex. While the traditional energy sources like oil, gas and coal are cheaper for city and transportation purposes. I disagree with this belief. In this essay, I will explain that green energy is more productive and harmless to the earth.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A Healthy society is indispensable for the nation. One part of asociety believes that making additional sports centre will produce fit individuals while others oppose this opinion and state that it will only bring gradual changes without other effective steps. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss both the notions and my perspective.

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" There is the too much stress in the working place. What can employess and employers do about it "

Co-ordination coordination plays an important role for both staff and employers in the companies or institutions. whereas whole staff have to do a hard-working, they have to face a lot of physically and mentally problems and weight is the main problem in one of them.

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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There are many ways to make a relationship with unknown people, whether different country or gender. Music is a good tool that can be used in many situations for making a relationship. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement because music can deliver a speech to some people without an explanation. The song has listened with every gender and culture with the same rhythm.

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