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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Nowadays people around the world are spending more money on consumer goods like TVs and microwave ovens. Is this a positive or negative development?

Excess of anything cannot be good. In my opinion, this negatively impacts the consumers. In this essay, I would illustrate how consumer goods create an adverse impact on consumers.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

In the coming years, people won’t buy the newspapers or books which are printed because they will be able to read online without paying extra fees. From my point of view, I would argue this point because of several reasons.

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Should humans adapt to technology or should technology adapt to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In addition, my participation in different competitions like GESR innovative in MASR ELKHERE society, EBTEKAR, YOMKEN and made in Egypt has played an important role in enhancing my research and academic skills. Also, the main attributes of my experience were leading in student activities in my faculty, which concerned to implementation of scientific projects and activating the role of the student in collective action, responsibility and leadership. Also, I established a team called “Brainy academy”, which aim to teach children the concepts of science and consequently they entered various competitions like minesweeper international completion, which aims to make a robot to find the mines, which played a vital role in improving my leadership skills.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study aboard. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

As there has been an evolution in many sectors, one major development can be seen in the educational field as well. Nowadays, it has been seen that students prefer to undertake their university degrees abroad rather than in their host country due to more opportunities. There are certain advantages and disadvantages to this, which will be further illustrated in the rest of the essay with the explanation.

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In some countries young people have become richer, healthier and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

It has been observed that in many nations the youngsters are becoming wealthier, fitness enthusiasts and have longer life expectancy however they are miserable. In this essay, I shall discuss the few causes behind this and provide some measures to mitigate the situation.

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There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been observed that in recent days the usage of cars has been significantly raising across the world by individuals, which causes global cold to rise and has detrimental effects on the individuals' health.

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Digital communication technology, such as email. instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In today's era of digitalization, some people think that social media such as Facebook, and Instagram have taken over physical meetings with people. Also, communication improved between friends and families. I completely agree with this statement, and we are going to discuss more on this here.

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, although a nation is fully developed and economically stable, it also has poor people. However, every nation has its own strategies and ideas to deal with poverty. There are various causes behind increasing the rate of people all over the world such as overpopulation and unemployment, and providing free medical treatment along with free educational facilities will be helpful to tackle these issues. Further details will be discussed in the following paragraphs along with suitable examples.

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More and more people today are moving away from where their friends and family live. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

There are a number of people that would like to move to places that are far from their friends and family members, some people believe that it can benefit them while this essay will discuss both sides and state that the drawbacks outweigh the benefit.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In these modern days, foreign language learning has been very popular among the students around the world. Despite additional academic load, children will gain substantial benefits from picking up second language at early young age. In my opinion, studying non-native language at primary school could make students deep-rooted in it than learning it in later age although they could have lesser playtime.

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Parents of obese children shoul be punished for making them fat. Do you agree or disagree

It is argued that parents of obese children should be punished for no providing their children with a healthy lifestyle, and as a consequence they will get fat. This essay disagree with the statement because many parents will need help and advice on how they support their children development and they can also need economic support to have time to spend with their kids.

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In their advertising ,busines now-a-days usually emphasis that their products are new in some way Why is this? Do you think it is a poitive or negative development?

exaggerating new stock, advertising has always been appealing to new things. While most wise folks are affected by new affairs and appeal to them some other, including me, oppose these matters and do not pay attention to them. Both merit and demerit are elaborated on in my essay.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Undoubtedly knowing a foreign language can bring several benefits for individuals. Although some members of the society say that such literature is only useful when people travel or work in a foreign society, others think that there are other ways to make use of a foreign language. This has been a subject of debate in society.

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Some people say it is manufactures and supermarkets responsibility to reduce the amount of packaing of products they sell and others say it us consumers responsibility to avoid buying products with too much of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although people are not supposed to “judge a book by its cover”, in my opinion, it is inevitable that the appearance of something will influence what people desire. Hence, packaging of a product becomes one of the most essential aspects to boost a product’s popularity. However, using excessive packaging may lead to the waste of materials used. Thus, I believe it is necessary to be reduced. In order to do so, I believe both manufacturers and buyers play an important role on this.

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Some people think that government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects to make progress. Do you agree or disagree?

As researchers from various scientific fields solve today’s most urgent problems through innovations, governments are encouraged to provide more capital in science education than other specialities to advance. This essay agrees with that idea because our world is increasingly shaped by science and technology, and thus the need for future innovative scientists will increase. Besides that, science develops young learners’ abilities to ask critical and technical questions and, at the same time, develops their organisational and research skills.

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it is too expensive to look after and repair old buildings. this money should be spent on buildings on building modern buildings instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Society, without any doubt, is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindsets of people. It is often argued that people must take care and furnish ancient buildings, whilst others think that money should be spent on constructing new buildings. Although it is crucial to construct the latest building, I firmly believe that money should be spent to look after historic buildings.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.

Children's health are increasingly deteriorating by fatness throughout the world, even condition is pretty alarming among the world's most affluent western countries.There are a number of reason causing this problem and each problem needs to be dealt in a particular way.

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Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

For today the tourism sector has been developed by countries because of its great opportunity to develop some particular sphere. However, people are divided in their opinion regarding the pessimistic consequences of tourism migration on the targeted country.I partially agree with this view and I will explain more details in following paragraphs.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

Many people think that historical subjects are more vital than others. However half of the people say that, nowadays fashion subjects which science and technology are more significant than past subjects. In the paragraphs to ,come we shall see both the perspectives and I shall put forth my views.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

WHERE COLLECTED TAXES SHOULD BE SPENT HAS ALWAYS BEEN A CONFLICTED TOPIC. NOWADAYS SOME THINK THAT MONEY SHOULD BE SPENT ON RAILWAYS MORE THAN ON ROADS. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT AND THIS ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN WHY GOVERNMENTS SHOULD IMPROVE RAILWAYS.

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