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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certain people are of the opinion that due to the advent of supermarkets in some countries,small local enterprises will not be able to thrive, which will further lead to closure of local communities. I am a proponent of this theory and firmly believe that local businesses are vital to keep communities together and in its absence can cause its disintegration. Throughout this essay, I will provide reasons for my belief with substantiation.

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Some people believe that childhood is the best stage of happiness . While others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Number of people think that early years are most enjoyable years in individuals' lives. But others say that person has more fun during the other stages of life. Indeed, every stage has its own taste. So this esaay will discuss both views before getting on the conclusion.

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Some people believe that modern designs for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such spaces? Give your opinion.

Many people are of the opinion that availability of open areas are to be taken under consideration while designing educational institutes and office spaces. Throughout this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such a designing concept and provide my view on the same.

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The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or the same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work

Globally, the job market is going through a transition phase, the stipulates of working is changing and individuals cannot be reliant on the same work environment for their entire life. Throughtout this essay, I will not only discuss the reasons for these changes but will also suggest ways in which an individual can be better prepared for such a .

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modern scientist need specialist in certain fields not in others. some people think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Education is a primary requirement for building any career. However, there is a raging debate among people whether the government should opt to fund only the branches of education that are essential for society rather than financing less important subjects like literature and Arts. This essay will discuss this topic further.

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these days more and more younger people have to compete with older people for same jobs. what are the problems it causes? what is the solution.

Due to advancement in science and ,technology the health and physical strength of people are getting better and people live longer,so more and more seniors want to stay on the job providing tough competition for young individuals which create lots of problems for the newcomers in the market from social to financial and solutions may be complex. In next paragraphs will discuss both sides and flash more light on the topic.

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Government should spend money on Railways rather than Roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there is an intense debate whether the government should invest more money on railways or roads. To that extent, I am partly in agreement due to the following reasons.

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cities around the world are continuing to espand as people leave the countryside. some people prefer to live in the city while others prefer to live in the countryside.

metropolis around the world are continuing to span as people leave the countryside. Some people tend to live in the city while others prefer to live in the countryside. While some people, including me, think live in the city is better, others claim that living in the countryside is good.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been debated whether unpaid community benefit should be made a mandatory subject in the school curriculum. Although students who participate in community utility have many advantages. I disagree with the idea of making it mandatory. I will explain to you in subsequent paragraphs why I disagree with this statement.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been debated whether unpaid community service should be made a mandatory subject in the school curriculum. Although students who participate in community service have many advantages. I disagree with the idea of making it mandatory. I will explain to you in subsequent paragraphs why I disagree with this statement.

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It is often said that when people behave in an anti-social way society in general is to blame. What causes this behaviour? Who is responsible for dealing with it?

Actions that violate societal norms are common in our environments, and are contentious, with social, religious, political and cultural dimensions. This is because society usually blamed for such. This thesis will elucidate reasons for, as well as solutions to, anomalous behaviour.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Job changing is a debatable issue.Some people often believe that it is better to work for the same organization all the time whilst others think that changing jobs potentially offer more benefits.I completely agree with the latter statement.The below essay will discuss both views and provide a logical conclusion.

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

It is deniable that individuals are trying to keep up with latest trend, consequently, pupils believe that the current time is the most valuable time. As per my opinion, due to the advancement of technology, life has become more easier. However, past time was also the best moment as folks have much time for each other due to the least technology.

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It is importnat for children to learn the diffrence between right and wring at an early age. punishment is necessary to hekp them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

The ability to distinguish right and wrong is necessary for children. Any adolescent needs to learn some important life skills for a better and a succesful life. It is believed that punishment can be used as a helpful tool for teaching values to students. I strongly disagree with this because of many reasons.

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In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule?

In certain countries, smoking is restricted for individuals in places meant for the common people and in office buildings. I am a proponent of not allowing smoking in public places. Throughout this essay, I will explore the benefits of such an action along with substantiation for the same.

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Some believe that in the next 100 years most people will have a better life, while others disagree. What is your opinion?

In the present age , according to the help of advanced technology , there has been seen massive changes in lives . Therefore , some people believe that our lives will become better in the next 100 years whereas others come up with the contrasting view . In my humble opinion, I am in favor of the first view , and this essay will seek to examine the complex issue .

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Some employers involve their employees in their decision-making process. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many companies, when it is the time for decision-making procedures, only few of the employers allow their employee to participate. It is very important that staff working in the same organization should be given the opportunites because from the organizational point of view, it will bolster their good decision making and create the environment of coordination. So, my statement regarding employee participating along with their employer has more advantages than the disadadvantges.

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Some employers involve their emoplyees in their decision-making process. Do the advantages outwiegh the disadvantages?

In this democratic society, it is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that it is beneficial when employers allow their workers to participate in decision-making procedure. However there are some drawbacks. Regarding this, I strongly believe that the benefits overwhelm the drawbacks.

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It is a fact that people nowadays are under a lot of pressure and their lives are becoming increasingly stressful. What could be the possible reasons for this? What are some solutions to address this issue?

It is seen everywhere that the livelihood of people of current generations is becoming highly tensed. As the world has become more competitive, many stress out to become a success. But it is possible to overcome pressure by meditation and positiveness . In this essay, we will discuss the reasons for increasing the stressful lives of an individual and the methods to resolve them.

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Some people say history is important subject and other say science and technology.To what extent do agree or disagree.

The contemporary world is the world of science and technology, therefore, some subjects related to these are more important to learn compared to the subject of history.However, In my opinion, education related to science and technology is much more important than knowledge related to history.

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