IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1333

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher taxes on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Health problems, due to excessive eating of fast food, is reaching the peak in some countries. Govermnments should interfere to find a solution to such a problem, but I don't think that imposing high taxes on this kind of food would make any difference, because there are people who are rich and people who would still pay to satisfy their cravings, thererfore I do not think that this idea would solve the issue.

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Students do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past

Most people agree that children should respect their teachers, but personally, I believe that nowadays it seems the respect of children towards their teachers or even for their parents has decreased. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following assay.

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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in wich we live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that universe study is an unnecessary waste while the rest part believes that it is crucial for humanity to expand the knowledge in this field. In my opinion, there are more beneficial ways of spending resources on the Earth than in space.

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Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well.

someone believe that teenagers working in community in their free time should be unpaid because it can be a benefit for both teenagers and community, while other people think that should paying money to teenagers. From my perspective, I strongly agree with community should not pay money for teenager because they work in their free time.

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People spend less time at home than they used to. What are the reasons for this change and what are the effects on society and individuals?

It has been argued that nowadays people would rather spend time outside than stay at home. As far as I am concerned, the reasons for this issue are due to the increasing development of entertainment and outdoor activities. However, it may affect not only society but also individuals in some aspects. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and provide further information to substantiate my point of view.

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Developments on science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The bar chart demonstrates the proportion of businesses making e-commerce purchases by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. These industries include Manufacturing, construction, wholesale, retail and information and communications.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reason for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is argued that few persons pass most of the phase of their life where they were born. This essay will argue that benefits of living in the same city where they were birthed offsets the drawback entailed by this state of affair, as spending most of their time at the same location generally creates a bond between friends, as well as they are fully aware of the locality, which helps them to sustain.

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Today we can see excessive consumption of natural resources such as air, fresh water, oil, and so on. The usage is increasing at a very dangerous pace and is already reaching critical levels. What are the reasons contributing to this? What should be done to minimize the effects?

Nowadays, there is a considerable rise in terms of relying on natural resources including air, freshwater, oil etc. Due to the fact that this increasement occurs speedily, it becomes more hazardous day by day. I would like to mention some of its causes and possible solutions to prevent it.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who often change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that exploring your career path at an early age and keeping it would be more likely to lead to a satisfying working experience compared with changing jobs often. Although I agree that an early foster for career interest and developing it constantly would help people have higher achievement in their work, I think that for some specific cases to change is also crucial for success.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a well-known fact that technology has changed the living standard of people all around the world. Advancements in technology have not only made our lives easier but it also saved many lives. I completely agreed with the fact that the crime rate has decreased due to this.

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Some people think that museum should be an enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people. Others think the purpose of museum is educating not entertaining. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people believe that musems are place where every person, especially youngsters, enjoy and can last their time by observing items, while others claim that this place is a centre of education rather than disneyland. This essay will discusses both arguments and then I will give my own perspective.

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What are the pros and cons for children of watching television?

In today’s era of modern technology, watching television is very common indoor activity in today’s life. In many families it is obvious that children are interested in spending their time in front of television. But what ate the benefits of watching children’s television and what are some their drawbacks? I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusion.

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Globalization has both advantages and disadvantages. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Due to the Internet and the new technologies, getting in touch and staying informed about issues occurring across the ocean is not a big deal. Although internationalization contributes hugely to the current world, it can also cause serious issues. Globalization improves relationships between countries but increases the competitivity between countries in a continent. In my opinion, I think that globalization is necessary nowadays because of the stability it generates for developed countries.

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What are the merits and demerits of globalization on developing nations?

Gobalization defines performance of nation in each sector i.e economics, cultures, cross-border trade in goods and services, technology, and flow of investment. Further i will be elobrating merits and demerits of globalization in upcoming paragraph.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Reserach in todays teens suggested that in-person socialIsing are a matter of the past and online meeting are taking its place. In the essay I will presnt how social anxiaty and the COVID-19 padamic we are experiancing play a role in that, as well as, suggest ways to try and combat the issue by signing them up to extracuricular and jobs .

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Although successive waves of globalization and the massively advanced technology enhance a higher standard of living , every country in the world will likely be suffered prominent challenges regarding environmental pollution , the dense population and educational matters in upcoming years. Likewise, this threat will slightly differ according to circumstances. In this essay, possible issue in Myanmar which could be happened in the next ten years will be discussed in the following paragraphs , and then followed by alternative solutions.

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why? Who benefit from this, the community or these young people?

In this present-day world, it has to be said that a great many younger people from the affluent communities are helping the poorer communities by doing unpaid jobs: teaching and building houses.From this action,both youngsters and poorer society benefited;younger people get tax benefits from this charity work ,and underdeveloped countries get an education and free shelter.Apart from this, both groups get happiness and satisfaction.This essay will enunciate this theme in detail with appropriate examples.

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Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn wore about the importance of the natural world?

Majority of people do not appreciate natural surroundings and do not understand their significance. In this essay, I will discuss reasons of irresponsibility of people to our living world and the ways to make people notice the importance of natural world.

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Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a huge problem of hunger in different countries and people want to find solution of this problem. It is often argued that hunger could be solved by the development in the education, whilst other disagree and think that solution could be found in food aid. This essay agrees that the development in knowledge will lead to the answer of plenty problems. This essay will discuss both points of view.

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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such services.

In recent years, some people think that the translation of language applications will be more positive than negative to use. On the other hand, It will be some disadvantages such as the internet or phone to use. From my perspective, I believe that there are advantages more than advantages in these areas.

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