IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 137

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years many young generation frequently change their occupation. There are both pros and cons of this growing trend which will be discussed further in the following paragraphs before providing a personal comprehensive conclusion. I would claim to change jobs more advantageous than drawbacks.

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Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development To what extent do you agree or disagree? 250 WORD

According to my comprehension, it is impossible to ignore the impact of both teachers and parents for developing a child analytical ability, and social moral due child closely absorb and listen their sayings as well as curious about elders view on this world.

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The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Films are a part of the contemporary world which is frequently attached to a country's culture. Most films might be inspired from a common niche, ussually the US industry, while others don't. There has been a contentious debate over whether these productions must be fund by the government in order to preserve and expand our culture. Despite the direct relantion between culture and films, I am inclined to believe that the government must allocate the money in a different way. Even though it's an important heritage to protect, there are more problems what need to be solved by these institutions.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.

Nowadays, there are too many stuff that we can do alone or with a team. Some people belive that competition at work, at school or in daily life is really good thing. Whereas, others think, you must cooperate more to reach a great results.

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Punishment is the best approach to teach kids what is good and bad. Do you agree or disagree. What are the other options do teachers and parents need to follow, provide some examples

Some individuals believe that Punishment is the best technique to teach children to differentiate between good and bad. I disagree with this notion because I believe that punishment helps children to some extent but by encouraging kids towards sharing, effective communication, set particular examples and using time-out strategy are effectual techniques which parents and teachers should have to opt for the betterment of children.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes , cars and other products . What are the reasons ? Do you think this is a positive or negative outcome ?

•Nowadays all young children and adults prefer to buy vehicles and clothes such as Tesla and Adidas and no one likes to object to it . The reason is that many individuals earn a lot of money and they prefer to show off their power . In many experiences , there are many negative trends , which we will discuss in the next paragraph .

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Some people think frequent short vacations are good while others argue that long term locations are helpful.discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both and give opinion.

The contemporary world has put a lot of pressure on people when works are associated. Thus, either short-term or long-term vacations are necessary factors to refresh and boost employees' energy to be productive. Although a long-term holiday is more popular, in my opinion, a shorter one is a better option because it can be taken more often than a long period vacation.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain hogh levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree.

Most of the tin-packed products have high sugar contents, which is affecting the health of the people, so increasing the price of such foods and drinks may limit their use. I strongly disagree with this statement , because, increasing cost will not affect the public, they will still buy such products. Secondly, other local companies may start producing alternative drinks. I will explain my opinion with examples.

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It’s important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is essential to teach children to distinguish between what is right and what is wrong from their childhood.While ,some people believe that the only way to solve this complex matter is using a punishment system, in my opinion it isn't the best solution and might have a negative impact on children and other systems like learning by education would be more beneficial.

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The proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998

The share of income allocated by adults and children in the UK towards four typical expenditures in 1998.

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In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society?

It has been shown around the globe in recent time that seniors do not receive enough respect from younger people. The impacts from economy changes and technology development play a significant role that affects youngsters' mindset, and lacking of generosity and humbleness to older people can be a concerned issue in a society.

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Some believe that secondary school children should study international news like other subjects in school, while others believe that this is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowaday, various sectors in the whole world have been developed in positive ways so quickly in years, specifically in technology. These bring an assumption that as a human, we have to expand our sight to see what happened in world today. Some people believe that it must be begin at a very young age, particularly for secondary school childern. On the opposite, those believe that it just unnecessary thing and waste of times However, in my oppinion, childern must be prepared to face the real world by having a strong mental, critical thinking, open mind and wise perspective about the real world, which they can learn from international news.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern epoch, young people are under too much stress to become successful academically. Some individuals believe that non- academic courses such as physical education and cookery should be removed from school curriculum, hence students can focus on academic work. However some people refute with this. This essay will argue some possible reasons behind this in the impending paragraphs.

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Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons for long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer in such situations?

Nowadays, Numerous couples live in the long-distance relationships. Which can also be seen as a reason, there are more separations, fights and divorces. However, what are some causes that couples decide to live far away from each other? And are there some ways they can still feel closer and connected? I will try to discuss this in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is the fact that rural people, in many countries, migrate to cities, whereas the population of the village drops down. I absolutely believe that this is a negative development as it leads to unemployment in the village.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the advancement of technology has changed the way people work and get education. They were able to work or learn from home using online applications, which offer more affordable and easy acces. However, I believe that there is a huge drawback in this because people tend to get more distractions and more health problems

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Friendships that take place online are as not meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Through out the years friendships became evolve by using the social media platform, where people can communicate online. Which is for some, is not that worthwhile than spending time face to face in real life.

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Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining. What do you think are the main reasons for long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer in such situations?

Nowadays , couples live separately from each other due to some issues. Long distance relationships are very difficult to maintain. Some of the reasons are such as , career , job opportunities and financial issues.

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Governments and big companies should work together to reverse environmental damage, rather than expecting individuals to take responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Governments and huge companies ought to cooperate at work to reduce environmental detrimental better than expecting people to take responsibility. From my opinion, this essay agree with the first statement due to the probability that the governments and companies can change the environment easily, the nations and establishments have high effect on residents' awareness.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have dificulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

In recent times many people are complaining bout the difficulties to sleep. There are two major causes that make people suffer from the lack of sleeping which are drinking more coffee and Hrinking about the future. This essay will outline the main reasons and provide a logic solution.

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