IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 135

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discussion both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, studies showed that long-term consumption of unhealthy foods potentially be detrimental to one's well-being. Therefore, some individuals said teaching about a healthy habit is a method towards a healthy lifestyle. However, some people are opposed to such idea. I believe that the public should learn how to maintain a healthy eating habit to prevent getting sick.

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The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B. However, due to its impact on environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists, government should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some employers consider job candidates' social skills more important than their academic achievements. This statement raises a lot of questions and should be discussed whether those employers are correct or not.

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Countries with a longer average working day are more likely to be economically successful, but may suffer from negative social consequences as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these views?

There is no doubt, that many countries choose a long average working day. I agree, that the decision increases the possibility for a state to be more economicaly successful. However, I also will not argue that the phenomenon leads to negative social consequences, which will be described in this essay.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people have their interest on learning about different factors rather than focusing only on their studies, while some of them believe on getting higher percentage on their university degrees. In my opinion, both of these statements are partially true as getting extra knowledges can help individuals in future, in case they cannot do good on their study fields, and those knowledge can be beneficial for day to day life, nevertheless, concentrating on educational achievements will help them to master on their area of work.

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Some people think competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believes that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

A vast majority of people think that engaging in a competitive environment such as the workplace, educational centre, and in our everyday life is a good practise, while others think being in cooperative environment is better. In my opinion, I believe that a collaborative environment breeds a positive altitude, while competition promotes setback.

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Some students found some subjects such as mathematics, philosophy are difficult, so these subjects should be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Academic journey is essential for every student that raise a question which subjects a should student persue, some groups of people believe subjects such as mathematics and philosophy are difficult and should not be compulsory. Although I strongly disgree with this statement, this essay will explore the reasons behind these beliefs with specific examples.

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With the rise of the internet more and more people are getting their news from social media platforms. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present day, technology plays a significant role in our lives. Especially, people use a rise of internet to know the news of the world. In this essay, I will explore some merits and demerits of using news on websites.

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Some people think that national news is very important and we should be up to date with national news. However, some says international news is more important as we should stay up to date with that. Discuss both and give your opinion

In today's contemporary world, being familiar with the current affairs across the globe is considered an asset and keeps you on your toes regarding some key aspects. People often argue that they should be upto date about their nation's updates however, others think international level scoop is more vital. Both scenarios have their pros and cons, the former and latter will be discussed in this essay conisdering some key factors to shape an unbiased opinion.

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topic - In many countries more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

There are several nations show that most of their citizens consume huge amount of imported food from abroad rather than locally produced food. This is happening because of the quality of the food. While there are some measures that can be implemented on buying local grown food.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

Some individuals are excited to experience new subjects, while some others would like to stay in their safe zone and live usual lives. In this essay, the merits and demerits of both opinions as well as my own idea will be discussed.

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Young people have been gradually far away from reading stories since they have access to a huge range of stories online in the form of video games or movies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is argued that nowadays, adolescents have been playing video games and watching movies more than reading books about them.I totally agree with this since it is more convenient way to receive information and available.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

People are arguing whether history or Science and Technology is the most important subjects in school. In my opinion, every curriculum is important for us to know about, but history is the fundation among them.

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Many feel that the common educational system of teachers and students in a classroom will be replaced by the year 2050

Development in educational system occurs all the time. With a rapid rise in technology also brings about the changes in nearly every level of schooling system. In this essay, I will argue on a topic of why teachers and students being in classroom should not be replaced by the year 2050.

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The pictures illustrate the way how plastic bottles are being recycled. It is a plastic circle that never ends up.

The pictures illustrate the way how plastic bottles are being recycled. It is a plastic circle that never ends up. These are nine steps, shown on the diagram, from collecting bottles to producing daily routine products, provide convenient opportunities for humanity.

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The topic of this: Currently, most students are studying only mathematics and the world language, English. What do you think its advantages more than its disadvantages?

Nowadays, people argue that most students are studying only mathematics and the foreign language is English. This essay will discuss why I think its merits outweigh the demerits.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualifications. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People tend to take part in other classes rather than just learn their main subjects. While others think that they are wasting their time on campus. I completely disagree with the later opinion and support young people learn about other subjects.

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Female unemployment rates in the four countries of the UK.

The given graph compares England,Wales,Scotland and Northern Ireland in terms of how many females were unemployed from 2013 to 2014.

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In some countries, more and more parents have begun to teach their children at home rather than send them to school. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries, the number of parents that homeschooling their children have increased. While this will help the parents to monitor their offspring intensively, hence the kids will lose the opportunity to learn about social ability by befriending the same age group. Thus, this essay will discuss whether the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are reasons for this? How can people research this?

It is an undeniable fact that exploring the history of the one's own premises they live in increases day by day in a few regions. Nowadays, this trend of discovering is growing with the time. This essay intends to discuss reasons with satisfactory illustrations and soultion to discover properly before coming to a final conclusion.

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Nowadays, people travel to other countries for a holidays. Why people do so? is this a positive or a negative development for the countries they travel to?

These days,more and more people are having a trip in other nations.In other words,going to travel in holidays has risen dramatically in other countries.In this essay,I will address some reasons for going travel on holidays and also I will explain some positive and negative aspects of this decision.

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