IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, when graduates get a job, there boss found they have lack in the basic interpersonal skills, like they don't have the right ability to work with others as a team. That is problem may have several reasons. However, in this essay, I will disuss this problem and find possible solutions.
I think in today's world, children are becoming more and more lazy compared with older generations, mostly due to the advant of technology. This makes them more unexperienced, which is not a good case. To prevent this, we can give kids some jobs to do while they are still in school to give them some experience. The best choise in my oponion, is comunity service.
Exploring external life on other planets is an issue that always catches people's attention. While some people argue that the government should invest in universe exploration and search for unknown life, others agree that human will need those resources more because of the environmental problems. Both opinions are meaningful, and for various reasons.
Some people believe that there must be a limited screen time to the young minds and instead motivate them to grab and read books. This essay will discuss why I agree on restrictions of exposure to the children on visual gadgets.
Because of the desire of earning more money, many people nowadays are willing to work in another cities or countries and living away from their friends and families. That looks like a small deal, but the truth is that issue can lead to a lot of arguement about the advantages and disadvantages, which also means the necessity of leaving home for a job. In my opinion, the advantages of that development will exist while disadvantages still there. They are in a balance.
Nowadays, There is a grow number of people change their occupation during their working lives, even some of those doing it for multiple times. I Personally believes that insufficent income and inappropriate job are the main reasons for individuals to swap careers. This is a possitive and normal way to stay alive, although it might sounds not professional.
In today's age, globalisation has certainly opened gate's that welcome new opportunities, growth and income, but at the same time it is argued by some individuals that this could also have some drawbacks. I believe, an increase in globalisation could lead to problems as well.
In modern times, many elderly parents are placed on home for the-aged, while some support this idea, other people believe that older people should stay with their children. This essay will discuss why I am aminable on the idea of the top-aging population residing at elderly homes.
In the last few years, there has been a huge spike in world travel due to various reasons such as tourism, work and abroad study. I would give my reasons on why it could potentially grow in the future.
In the last few years, western society witnessed an improvement in the percentage of overweight children by almost 20%. In this essay, I will discuss the main causes of obesity problem and how to solve children from this problem.
There is a message for children says they can achieve anything they want if they try enough, to helps them plan their way in life, for some culture it is a beneficial message. In this essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of send this idea to children.
At present days, most jobs replaced the handmade work by machines work, as it is rare to see a job works without machines. In this essay I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of handmade jobs and machines jobs.
There is no denying the fact that in the past few decades, some changes regarding its organization and member roles. While it is a commonly held belief that numerous changes happen , there is also an argument that to what extent do you agree or disagree with it. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, the shift from traditional to modern family structure. In other words, changes regarding more from extended to nuclear families, or even single parent. In addition, the transformation in the role of women- from homemaker to equal or primary breadwinner. For example, the changing role of fathers, taking on more caregiving responsibilities. On the other hand, the impact of technology on family dynamics,
Sport is essential for children life. Some people suggest that schools should totally care of this escape in children routine, while others believe schools are not obligated and they can just make sports as an option. This essay agrees with the first statement and disagrees with the second one, and will gave reasons.
During all the time, people are dreaming about living in a perfect society which is quiet difficult to achieve because of disagreement between different identities. In my point of view, people cannot agree with answering the question: "What is happiness?", because it might be the most important thing for forming a perfect society. It could be achieved by being honest to each other, but it is very hard to get for individual.
Spending taxes for health care by governments is a very discussed question for people, some think that it could be nessesary issue to spend more while others believe that there are more important priorities for taxpayers' money. In my opinion, its very important to stimulate health care properly, because it can help to be health care more qualified and cheaper, but it should not be forgotten that other tax spending priorities can improve life level which could lead to smaller amount of people needed health care.
There is no denying the fact that the internet has put everyone on the map and especially revolutionised the idea of shopping. This essay will discuss the side effects of this trend as well as if it is a reasonable solution.
It is considered that in the future people will use online apps for reading news, nobody will purchase printed newspapers and books. I agree with the statement, online news is no of the cheapest from of media, whereas in many schools and universities students are started using iPads and laptops for there studies.
Some specialists believe that it is better for kids to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
In the last decades the number of people studying at universities has dramatically increased. Many individuals believe that is a positive trend, as it growing up the level of education around the world, while others claim that the reason of this huge numbers because the quality of education has been lowering.However, in this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and provide my own opioion.
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