IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1387

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The relatively recent development of games on phones, computers, and TV consoles is extremely popular with people all over the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such electronic games?

Whole crowd most using electronic stuff in present date because day by day development up a high level and every parson try to do essay job but now life individuals most spend free future in phones and watching Tv like one they are playing games it is a big effect on health. In my ,opinion i consider that disadvantages of this way community lose the helth and advantages of this public spend a short moment on games.

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You recently on a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe Competition and prize About the photograph Invite your friend.

I hope you are healthy and safe. Today I am writing this letter to inform you that, as you know at present I won a photography competition and my photo is going to be displayed in on exhibition and I want your presence there.

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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

Most of the parents send their children to extra classes and tuitions which are mostly available after school or during weekends. In my opinion, children do not have enough education in school, extra lessons are compulsory to provide better them better understanding in each subject and allow notes exchange between students.

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With increasing populations and ever growing urban centres, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

It is a fact that people feel a deep delight and good sensation when they face a natural and beautiful view. Besides well-being, there are a bunch of benefits that are possible to list and prove how important it is to make urban plans to properly distribute society, which is rising on an exponential curve, without destroying nature.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Being a good parent is a teachable role that has been viewed as a schools' responsibility to foster. Schools are providing an environment where not only can we learn from teachers but also can learn from our classmates and their families. I agree with the above-said view and will discuss the characteristics of a good parent and the rationales behind them in this essay.

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Most of the world’s poor live in countries where tourism is a growth industry. The issue is that tourism does not benefit the poor. How can the income generated by tourism benefit the poor? And how can we ensure that tourism does not destroy traditional culture and ways of life?

Indonesia especially the Province of Bali has been developing the tourism industry based on high-value culture from several decades long, and it is continuing as the main source of income for Balinese people. Altough tourism brings benefits for local citizen, in fact that most of the tourism industry owners are not a Balinese, therefore the local people will always as a viewer in their home land.

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Many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of their life. However, few actually achieve this. What solutions can you suggest?

These days many of us struggle to balance between our professional and personal life and only a few make it happen. In my opinion, having a healthy work-life balance is not impossible,,however it requires several steps to achieve it, and I will be covering some of those in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.

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Nowadays tourism often leads to environmental destruction. Why is this the case? What are the consequences? How to solve this problem?

To many countries tourists are big sources of income and of the great value. However, it is clear fact that host countries ought to give rewardable service to visitors from food and housing that means they take advantage of natural resources. This essay will discuss the detrimental influence that people especially tourists can have on our environment and provide how our community can regulate some rules to ease the forthcoming issue.

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Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Arguably, peasants are many times safeguarded by high taxes imposed by the local regime on farming goods coming from other nations. Personally, I strongly agree with the view since it is a way out to valorise the local products. Although the measure is public funds consuming. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people believe that dangerous criminals should spend the rest of their lives in prison, while others think that everyone deserves a second chance and that these offenders should be reintegrated into society. What is your opinion?

Generally speaking, criminalistic topic has always been in a spotlight of our society. Everyday we see on the news a wide range of crimes committed around the world, which fact has turned into biggest concern of the society. What to do with inmates once their sentence is finished? In front of this dilemma, on one hand there is opinion that dangerous criminals should been sentenced for live. On the other hand, there is a version of giving a second chance and reintegrate them into society. In the following paragraphs I will discuss the both sides of the argument until to draw a conclusion.

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In the present day, due to the advance of globalization and technology, the number of online shopping has become increasingly present in our society. Although some people strive to maintain the tradition, others claim this trend is inevitable resulting in plenty of advantages such as the lack of crowds. For this reason, the benefits of this development outweigh the drawbacks.

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The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language?

In the tourism industry, english is the most leading language to be spoken in the world. Many believes that due to this reason, someday English will become the only language which people prefer to speak globally. In my opinion, it has many benifits because English is the most convenient and spoken language but people should globalise their national language country wise.

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Some believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally and financially unable to look after themselves. Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely argued that senior citizens should be lawfully catered by younger family members whenever they become physically, mentally and commercially unable to provide themselves. However, I totally disagree with this statement and support my point of view in detail in the following paragraphs.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

In the cut-throat competitive era,most of people are too much busy in their work which leaves them less time to get themselves involve in some recreational activities.As far as my views are concerned,I conpletey believe that its disadvantages outweigh the advantages.However,I would like to cast light on my views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

In this contemporary epoch, the behaviours of young adults have changed with the advancement of technology. They like to spend more time with their friends rather than the family because of their changing personal preferences. While some people think that parents should impose some rules for their children to spend more time with their family, I do not believe this is the right way to make them stay at home, and this essay will depict the explanations to describe my opinion and the probable reasons behind this change.

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Some people think it is important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more importany to spend time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many opine that spending time extending a successful career is one of the most significant things. However ,some people claim that expending time with friends and families is more indispensable. From my point of view ,I believe we are living for developing our occupations and this is more crucial than spending hours with others.

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Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

Majority of the population of the world today has become over dependent on their mobile phones. Some schools have banned the use of cell phones by students on campus. In my opinion this rule will have a positive effect on children as it will not only improve their focus but also help them develop their social skills.

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Some believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically,mentally and financially unable to look after themselves.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era,younger people are becoming more aware of taking care of their older members,Some people claim that not only physically,mentally and financially but also what they have received from youngsters.I agree as much as disagree with the given statement.

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Many children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations that can be threatening for children. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision. How can these be tackled

Some people say that young people learn useful skills by playing

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that modern life today is becoming more expensive, so some families consider it necessary for parents to go to work. The question is, do the children in this family benefit from the income or do they feel they lack support due to the absence of their parents. I'll take a look at each of the presentations and give my own opinion in conclusion.

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