IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1468

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that hosting an international sport events is good for the country why some people think it is that discuss both views and state your opinion

People have different views about becoming a country host for an international sprots event. While there are some existing drawbacks of being a country host, I would argue that it does bring more benefits to the country hosting for an world-wide sport event.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This is the parents responibilty to give a good atticates to the child beacuse parents are spending more time with the child. Kid should be a respectfull member for the sociaty. However, The eduacational institute are equally responsble to provide the good atmosphere and education to the child. I strongly agree that the parents are more responsible to give a good upbringing to the child.

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

It is widely known that exercises are essential for human’s heath and mood. And as a result, some people think that it necessary to include physical education as a part of learning process in all schools.

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Some people think that the government should give financial support to artists such as musicians, painters and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is an argumentative notion heating the debate over the government coffers. While some people claim that it should be allocated to artists such as musicians, painters and poets, others believe it is a waste of money. Whilst this thinking is valid to some extent, I personally contend that there are far more problems that need to be prioritised.

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some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world, subject like science and technology are more important than History.

Nowadays, there is a huge debate over what subject should be thought in schools as the most important subject. While some people believe it must be History, others claim that it is not reasonable because we are living in a modern world and students should learn about more crucial fields like technology and science rather than history. This essay will take both these statements under examination and indicates the writer’s view in the end.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Parenting should taught in the school or not is a dilemma for some people. I believe that learning basic things about parenting should be a part of the education system. Young people must have adequate knowledge about how to treat toddlers and emergency skills for the same.

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There are many wild birds and animals living in the cities, and some people believe that these animals should be killed, while others think that they should be saved and protected. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many wild species have made urban areas their dwelling place. On one hand, there are people who opine that these animals should be killed whereas there are others of the opinion that they must be given adequate protection and must be preserved. This essay shall analyse both opinions. However, I believe that those animals which are extremely harmful to the people must be killed but only after attempting to protect them.

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Most countries want to improve the standard of living through economic development,however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people argue that improving the level of life depending on the fainancial revolution , while others say if that happening ,people will lost the communication skills. I disagree with that statement . Because,the changes in countrys` economic help humen to be widely interactive with sourronding environment and rich countries benefits from their economic improvement to boost peoples` life.I strongley beleive that advantages of wave development outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people think that children should be taught at school how to become good parents. Do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals are of the opinion that at schools kids must be educated on good parenting skills. I completely agree to this notion. I shall elaborate my views in upcoming paragraphs.

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There are many extinct animals’ species in the world. Some people think we should protect animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A lot of specific kinds of animals have been vanished from the universe. It is considered by some people that these species must be saved from this terrible situation, while others consider that primary focus should be upon problems of human race and i agree with this point of view.

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some people think that public libraries are necessary,while others believe that public libraries are no longer important. what is your opinion

some people believe that using books should be easy and all of the population able to use public libraries and the other hand some people think public libraries are not useful at this time. in my ,opinion public libraries can help people easy availability books without any cost. In fact that globalization was a phenomenon in a decade and books were increased the knowledge of the spread of technology and innovations. for ,example students in school and university have access to updated articles and books in public libraries and improve findings in researchers. this subject can lead to important scientific achievements and great inventions in the future and help to the growth of industrial and manufacture to produce better products.

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Some students take one year off between finishing high school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages

I strongly believe that takes one year off before going to university for gaining experience of working or traveling is a good way to figure out your life blueprint. Some students don’t know what they want to be or what they want to learn, especially in some asian families. Youngsters obey their parent’s instructions to go to the top universities, however, some of them actually do not know is this what they want to do or not.

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Some people think educated people more valuable than people who learned skills through experience Do you think educated people are most valuable for societ? What kind of skill can people learn through experience that can benefit society?

Education is vital for the growth of an individual so that they can meet the requirements of the job market. However, some people feel that obtaining skills through experience would be more beneficial. Furthermore, I believe that educated people are more valuable to society and my reasoning will be substantiated in the course of this essay.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having problem?

Nowadays, there are many interesting things that we want to buy. There are some people who have not enough money and get into debt to be able to purchase those things. This essay will discuss about the reasons of this behavior and the solution to prevent this problem.

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Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In the complex word today, the knowledge of technology significantly develop. People can easily get benefits from this modern development. However, some individuals believe that the more development of technology, the more distance between the rich and the poor while others argue. Personally, I agree with the first idea. This essay will show you the reasons of both sides.

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POPULAR EVENTS LIKE THE FOOTBALL WORLD CUP AND OTHER INTERNATIONAL SPORTING OCCASSIONS ARE ESSENTIAL IN ERASING INTERNATIONAL TENSIONS AND REALISING PATRIOTIC EMOTIONS IN A SAFEST WAY/ TO WHAT EXTEND YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS OPINION

There is no doubt that sports events like football world cup, Cricket world cup and common wealth games and all providing a platform to build up the unity between the countries and also initiate patriotic feel to everyone. On the contrary, these occasions sometimes create tension amongst the countries. This essay will discuss this topic in detail.

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nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather tahn to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantage of bring self employed?

In the contemporary era, people are showing more like on starting their own company as well as they tend to show less interest to work under a organisation. While, others think , it also have some negative progress to run a office alone. In, the forthcoming essay, I will try to explain some reasons behind this thought and also drawbacks.

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Some people think getting old is entirely bad, but other people do think it’s much better for old people to live now than in the past. Please show your idea with explanation, examples and your knowledge.

There are some discussions about whether people getting old is a whole negative thing, but the opposite view believe that the old people are living better than before. From my standpoint, I reckon that many old persons are living better than in the past to some extent.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, due to the development of medical technology, people have lived a much longer life and as expected, the average life expectancy is prolonged. From my narrow point of view, I think the pros absolutely far outweigh the cons.

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Many people in the music business feel that illegal music sites on the internet are a serious threat to the industry and more should be done to prevent them from operating. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

There are many reasons why illegal music is considered to be a threat to the music industry and something should be done to protect illegal music from the internet. I personally agree with this statement and this essay will show more details.

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