IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1467

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is reported there will be a larger proportion of old people than that of young people in the future in some countries. Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

In this modern world, some countries will have more and more elderly people in the future. In my point of view, population ageing is a negative elaboration.

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Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

It is distinctively stated in any countries law, how a defendant’s previous wrong doings can affect them in a trial. Some countries, such as United Kingdom and Australia help offenders shadow their unlawful past from the jury when giving their final verdict. In my opinion, this is an unbiased method and should be changed. Therefore I agree with the lawyer’s suggestion to amend this point, so that the jury can give a balanced verdict.

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Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work. Which do you think is the best way to choose a career?

Having a job is important for us to pay for our essentials and also to save up for better future. While some people look for jobs based on the amount of salary and job title that companies offer, others search for jobs that will give them work satisfaction and fulfillment. In my opinion, having a fulfilling career is essential as it will provide enjoyment at work, as well as health benefit.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

These days,there is no doubt that people had long hours of task than having moment to relax. People are busy doing money and promotion and forget that life should be balanced to have good health. While this offers a few advantages, there are also some disadvantages which are worth considering.

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The qualities that help people reach success in modern life cannot be learned in university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the fact that whether the factors to attain remarkable successes can be absorbed in further education or not. From my point of view, I am well convinced that while the basic insights can be gained from the aforementioned type of education, it is also essential to prossess down-to-earth set of skills.

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n some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

Some school provides just theoritical education while other schools are more into practical teaching. However, i believe that practical knowledge is far better than therories which helps student to understand the real world better way.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every country has their own health services criteria. However if it provided free in the whole world, it would be more benefical to the people who cant afford the basic medical treatments.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT EXERCISE IS THE KEY TO GOOD HEALTH,WHILE OTHER BELIEVE A BALANCED DIET IS MORE IMPORTANT.DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

In today’s fast working lifestyle, exercise and balance diet is the key to good health.Some people argue that for living the healthier life, exercise is important, while other trust in a balanced diet.Therefore health plays a vital role in human’s life.In my opinion,I believe that exercise plays a very crucial role in keeping you healthy and fit.

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IT IS COMMONLY BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS MAIN FACTOR THAT AFFECT A CHILD’S DEVELOPMENT ARE MEDIA,POP CULTURE AND FRIENDS.A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW IS THAT FAMILY PLAYS THE MOST SIGNIFICANT ROLE.DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

In a rapidly developing world,people believe that major part that affects a child’s growth is social media, pop culture and their friends circle.Moreover,some person trust that family plays a very important role in child’s development. In my opinion, family plays a vital role in life of children development.The essay will discuss both these point of views and elucidates the harmful effect of media, culture and friends on child’s development.

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Social Media websites have amassed large user bases. Do the advantages of being a part of a social media site outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present, massive amount of people are part of social media platforms communities. Being on these platforms has both benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, depite the fact that there are risks of cyber dangers, social media sites are very useful and beneficial when use wisely.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

In this moder era, everyone wlould like to live a wealth life with all the amenities than ever before due to western influences. Some think that people accept thier's unplesent positions such as lack of job satisfaction and poverty while others believe that the public should be improved these kinds of situations. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion for the following reasons.

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nowadays, business is using many different ways to improve sales. which are the different methods? which is the most effective method of improving sales?

Production is carried out in order to transport goods to customers for consumer satisfaction, thus sales are apprehended as prominent task in management. There are several procedures to increase trading which is being utilized by enterprises such as launching latest commodities; however, in my opinion, inflating market chain is more effective rather than the former method due to various factors in business environment.

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Many people today use their phones for sending texts more than talking. What are the reasons for this? Are there more advantages than disadvantages?

In the recent past, person are use their phones for chatting with their friends or families than talking face-to-face because when they use their smartphones, they can send to their friends or families from anywhere. From my point of view, although It convenient and do not have to wait for chatting, it did not feel interesting and sometimes person did not understand each other.

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Many people today use their phones for sending texts more than talking. What are the reasons for this? Are there more advantages than disadvantages?

In the recent past, people are more use their phone for chatting with their friends or families than talking face-to-face because when they use their smartphone, they can send to their friends or families from anywhere. From my point of view, although It convenient and do not have to wait for chatting, it did not feel interesting and sometimes people may did not understand each other.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity . Do the advantage of this is outweigh the disadvantages

Owing to the rise in the need for non-renewable sources of energy, in this contemporary era, it has become essential to seek out other alternatives by drilling in far off places. While this trend has demerits to some extent, I would argue that it is merits are more significant and pertinent notions will be explicated further.

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Nowadays, it is not only large companies that are able to make films as digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Recent digital technology allows not only professional film makers, but also amateurs in the field to produce films with less effort. In my point of view, this is a beneficial progression for the film industry. In the following paragraphs, reasons why I take this standpoint will be stated in details.

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More people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is this? Is it a good or bad thing?

Entertainment has become a key aspect in many people living during their leisure time. Watching films has been increasing when citizens are free, indeed they are sparing a large amount of time for the same. There are several reasons for this phenomenon, and I think it has a negative impact on society instead of negligible good things. In this essay, I will discuss both, reasons and impacting areas in detail with necessary examples.

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In Some Countries, Criminal Trials Are Shown On Television For Public. Do The Advantages Of This Outweigh The Disadvantages

The trials procedures in many situations draw a considerable amount of attention from media worldwide. However, there is an ongoing debate between two points of view of podcasting those trials on TV or not. In my perspective, I believe that the pros of present those cases in media outweigh the cons as we will discuss.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the advancement of technology, people are living longer and population has increased day by day due to better medical care facility. So, due to improved medical care facility, death rates has decreased. This essay will discuss both merits and demerits of this development. In my own perspective, demerits are more as compared to merits.

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With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Other feel that these forms of media will never disappear . What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The latest technology in the field of Media has revolutionised the way we used to read. It is never being the same again. With the new gadgets which are as real as paper and less straining to the eyes, the future of printed media is in the digital content.

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