IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1465

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

band

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

some nations are investing on railways to be more advanced and give more fund to start a superfast train like bulet train and hyperloop. Although some pupils think that funding and improving the current transportion is more required. i will give my view and elaborate.

band

Topic: Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In recent times, daily routine of individuals has become quite tedious and busy that they tend to be more occupied than how it used to be in the earlier generation. Initially, only men used to work and earn money for the family but nowadays even women in equality with men earn as well. The timings of the workplace have become so hectic that it makes it impossible to devote time in preparing home cooked food or concentrating on children and so on and so forth. This essay depicts that due to the schedule that folks or married couples tend to follow in recent scenario initiates them to purchase eatables from outside rather than preparing food at home.

band

Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence.

Availing basic needs such as food and education, is every human's right. Whether provided by their own government or aid from the rich nation. However, it is government's responsibilty to take care of their own people rather than reying on others.

band

Some people think that getting old is a negative thing, whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

When it comes to the effect of the increase of age, opinions vary from person to person. Some are firm believers on that becoming elder is disadvantageous, while others argue that it is a piece of cake nowadays. In my viewpoint, we do not need to worry about age issues with technologies thriving in modern time. Next, I will analyze both the standing points and the factors behind them in this essay.

band

The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, vertical mediums such as Instagram, Pinterest, and Facebook have become common means to relate to others instead of in-person relationships. Massaging through these applications and websites is not entirely beneficial, though its benefits should also be noticed.

band

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Inventing the outstanding internet, in this digital age, has altered the ways in sharing and consuming the data ubiquitously; however, it has generated issues that did not present earlier. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this assertion and will explain the solutions to tackle this problem.

band

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Penalizing youngsters in their developing years is mandatory as it allows them to distinguish between right and wrong. I partially agree with the statement and think that, although punishments can have positive outcomes, but it also contributes negatively in the child's growth. So, appropriate methods should be considered that can be productive in controlling their behavior which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

band

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

A highly controversial topic today relates wether we should encourage kinds that they will achieve anything if they work hard. Some believe this is not a healthy message, where as others believe that it is. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then give my own opinion on the matter.

band

People doing dangerous sports activities scuba driving and bungee jumping, they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people do you agree or disagree?

It is true that people doing dangerous sports activities they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement, and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.

band

people are using a lot of online language translation apps .Do the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?

Translating service on the internet is well received by many individuals yet it has several drawbacks such as inaccurate and violating privacy.I strongly feel the advantages outnumber the disadvantages.

band

Many companies and other organizations require employees to wear a uniform. For which jobs do you think a uniform is a good thing? What are the disadvantages of having to wear a uniform at work?

Over the recent years, the trend of wearing uniform at workplace has declined; still there are a few establishments which mandate the use of them. I believe, uniforms are more suitable for those kind of jobs where field work is not involved because similar dressing helps in identifying their belonging. There a a few downsides to this as well which we shall discuss below with relevant examples.

band

Obesity is serious problem in many countries,especially in rich countries.Discuss ways to solve the problem.provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Being overweight is one of the major challenges facing many nations,seen majorly in wealthy states.Therefore,this essay is going to point out on various means of solving overweight issues.

band

SOME SCHOOL LEAVERS TEND TO GO TRAVELLING OR WORK A PERIOD OF TIME BEFORE GOING TO UNIVERSITY. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, there are a number of students who graduate from high school want to take a gap before joining higher education. In my view, this will bring both positivies and drawbacks effetcs to students.

band

Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for ex.., through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In may cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

They are two main views about the working place. While one group of people believe that having a job position in a company for long time is not beneficial, another group agree that it has got some advantages. I strongly agree with the first idea.

band

Some people think that watching sports is wastage during leisure time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Watching sports has always been gratifying to all the sport enthusiastics, be it watching on a television or sitting in the arena and cheering on their teams or sportsmen. The only debatable question by some people is, whether the amount of time spent on watching sports considered as wasting the valuable time, even if watching sports in the leisure hour of day. This essay will discuss my views on how i disagree to this opinion by looking into different perspectives.

band

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been discussed by group of individual that person should welcome the situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money,

band

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Many people are weak- hearted like they accept their failure very easily without even trying for a second time. While there are people who just do not give up on their situation they keep on trying to improve but just do not feel sad and sit around. This essay will delve both the perspective and will end with my own opinion on this matter.

band

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, a number of nations assume that losing natural habitat is the most important concern. However, some others believe that the significant issue can be related to the environment. This essay considers necessary subjects like destroying species flora, fauna and global warming. In my view, an environmental problem like global warming is a major issue that can be damaged many types of animals.

band

some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

In our modern , society some people believe that infant can make their own decision and make a heart for themselves; although, others have this attitude which contains, making a decision by a toddler can bring them selfishness. I believe both of these views can be acceptable, despite the fact that young generations can have a private growth with their own decisions.

band

Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are alos necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion ?

It is hard to overstate the importance of schooling: it decides what kind of person we become, what kind or career we will have, and ultimately what kind of life we will lead. Therefore, what should and should not be taught at school is necessarily a perennial debate. Some assert that schools should focus on disciplines that will be directly relevant to one's occupation in the future, while others state that courses like sports and music should also be included in the curriculum. Both viewpoints are justifiable, but I personally lean towards the latter.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.