IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 148

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, adults are living with their parents, after graduating or even after finding a job. Do the advantages outweight disadvantages?

In many countries, it is common for adults to live with their parents after graduating or even after securing a job. This essay examines the advantages an disadvantages of adults living with their parents after graduation, focusing on financial, emotional, and social aspects.

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Some people think that the young people should be free to choose their job, but other people think that they should be realist and think more about their future.Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

The debate over whether young people should be free or not to choose their career has reflected two different viewpoints. Some people argue that they should free to pursue what they want, while others claim that young people should focus on the realistic side of job future. In my opinion, I believe that choosing a job we like and weighing its future value are both significant for a person's career.

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Furthermore, Beligium hit the change in male job market of with percentage of 60% that was highest among the four nations in male employment, but in reverse gender it was only 1% change. Neverthless,USA recorded 18% boost in male jobs market and female recorded declined of 2% in 2000.

In the contemporary era, health care is the common important for every person, but due to privatisation it is hard to afford for medium families. Private hospital provides the best care to the patient at their earliest needs nevertheless the cost to pay those bills are high and out of budget for poor people. In this essay I will discuss the merits to provide the care and services for private hospitals are more as compared to their unaffordability and others demerits.

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Some people say that when deciding how taxes should be spent, governments should prioritise health care. Other people believe that there are more important priorities for taxpayers' money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While it widely debated that when it comes to prioritizing taxes, government should emphasis on health care over anything else, others argue that there are more crucial priorities such as educations to allocate first-hand for solving worrying iliteracy rate. Both point of views and reasons why I support the former statement seeing that health conditions are keys of success which will be discussed further in this essay.

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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the years. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer longer vacation. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some argue that short breaks provide more variety and relaxation, while others contend that extended vacations offer deeper rejuvenation and the chance to explore different destinations. In my opinion, despite shorter days, having frequent time off from a full time job will be healthier option.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some individuals states that children should learn how to be a valuable part of society. but other part pf people thinks that teaching this to people it is a schools job.

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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email •recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn •explain how your friend could learn this sport •suggest that you both learn this sport together.

Hope your doing great. I was thinking about your question about learning a new sport and I'm going to share some thoughts I have.

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Today, the media portrays young people as lazy and disrespectful. Do you think this is true? Are young people today worse than their parents, or does every new generation get criticized by older people?

Social concerns about the impact on the nation by disproportionate distribution of income has been widely discussed. One party believes the merits are profound while others disagree, However, this essay is to illustrate both sides distinctively and weighing their pros and cons respectively.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of thus trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years modern technologies have been affected to spend chilfren's leisure time. While this statement have both benefits and drawbacks, I share the view that it could be negative impact of today's advancements to spend child's memorable days.

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in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or buiding they live in. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this?

In many countries there is trend where people look into the history of the building they stay in. There are a few reasons for this as well as difference methods they use to find out the information about their properties.

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Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

It is a highly debatable issue from last few years that who take the onus of protecting environment either individuals or law makers. Some people opine that it is citizen ,while others say it is government. In the upcoming paragraphs, this essay will delve deeper into both sides and I personally believe this issue can be solve effectively by the joint collaborations of society and higher authority.

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Modern technology has a great impact on our environment. Some say that people should adopt a simple lifestyle to solve this problem, while others argue that the technology itself should provide a solution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fast-paced technological advancement is becoming a problem for the nature. Such that life has become more complex and difficult than was in the past. Hence, many people suggest switching back to simpler lifestyle for possible solution to present day headaches while other oppose it and consider technology only being the best ever solution. Though I agree with the latter statement but will try discuss both viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs.

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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays, globalization is at peak. Such that various people can travel across distinct countries for different purposes. Tourism is another major sector that is getting benefited because of less restrictions on borders. Hence, many people are challenging thereselves and are visting terrains which offers difficulties or extreme weather conditions. There may be various benefits and loopholes of traveling to an area that might offer challenging experiences such as The Great Himalayas and Sahara desert.

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NOWADAYS ,more and more people prefer to wear fashionable clothes . Is this good or bad trend ? .

These days , most of the people are giving more preference to wear trendy attires as compared to past . Actually , it is a positive trend , but there is one negetive effects of following this trend . Both the aspects will be explained in the upcoming paragraphs before reaching to a conclusion .

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Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion.

A group of individuals assert that the new settlers must assimilate into the other culture while others debate that they should retain their own background. I acknowledge that both the comments can be brought to work simultaneously. This essay will discuss each of these perspectives along with my viewpoint in subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people believe that it is parents who teach children to recycle waste. While others feel schools are more responsible. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowdays waste is becoming a serious problem to tackle with. Since lands, water bodies and other places around the world are getting filled with garbage because most of the people do not have an knowledge of it hence the waste ends up in the oceans and land fills. Therefore, various people debate who is more responsible to educate yougsters, the future of planet, about recycling waste, the parents or the institutions. Before stating my point, I want to highlight importance of parents and institutions in teaching how to convert something from reclaimable items.

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Some people prefer to spend most of their time with friends. Other people prefer to be alone most of the time. Which way of life do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your

It is favored by many that spend more time with friends, while others like to stay alone. In my opinion, it is better to spend our time with our buddies. In this essay, I will explain my reasons of my answer.

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Now a day the surveillance is happening at almost all public places. Is it good or perceived bad by people? What are advantages and disadvantages?

Owing to the advance of technology, surveillance has become more common in most of the public area to prevent crime and keep the city safe. There are some cons like instrument cost and the privacy problem, and the pros can perceived bad by people.

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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen, pencil, or brush. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, hand writing has been less increased among individuals, which I consider as a negative evolution. This essay will explore the possible reasons for this phenomenon, and ultimatelly explain how it can be a complete disaster.

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Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion.

Owing to globalization, many people relocate to different countries. Some people claim that immigrants should learn and get into the local living style and culture, while others think that they should create their own minority community group to better adopt the new life. There are strong arguments on both sides of the debate about which should be a better choice, which we will discuss here.

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