IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 145

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In recent years, air pollution has become a noticeable issue in many cities worldwide. This rise in pollution levels is often linked to the increasing number of vehicles on the roads, among other factors. Discuss the causes of urban air pollution and suggest possible solutions.

In recent years, many cities have witnessed a troubling rise in air pollution, which has become an increasingly noticeable issue for citizens. This can be attributed to the growing number of vehicles on the roads, among other contributing factors. This essay will discuss the causes of air pollution and propose some effective solutions.

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Some people believe that the only purpose for anyone to learn a second language is to travel or work abroad. Others argue that this is not the only purpose why someone needs to learn a second language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

There are many people who think the purpose to learn a new language is to find a new jobs or to travel to many countries, while the other think there are many difference reasons and purpose to learn a second language, I will discuss their opinions and what I think, I will set them out below.

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Some people believe that studying at university or collage is the best route to a successful career. While others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that continuing to study after school is the best way to achieve successful career. While, other people believe that getting a job instantly after school is an option. However, I believe that studying at a university or college is the best route to a successful career.

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Some people think that real life skills like cooking, housekeeping and gardening should be included in the curriculum as compulsory subjects? Do you agree or disagree? Explain your opinion, using specific reasons and details.

It is a contentious issue whether household courses should be included in a curriculum or not. I concur that those are not subjects that we should learn from teachers. Precisely, members of our family should learn us them after classes.

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Most people believe money is a very important consideration when chosing a job as it can help you get a better lifestyle; however, there are some believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this, and not money, will lead to greater happiness and a more balanced personal life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Almost half of the popluation believe that money plays a crucial role while considering a job while others think opposite of it . This essay will explore both the dimensions with rational explanations and concrete instances and shape up my opinion on the matter by end .

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As society changes, more and more people do not want to stay in one career or job. Many people change their careers and jobs. What is the cause of this phenomenon? Can you give some suggestions to solve this problem?

In this Modern era ,its hard to find people settle down in one job . There are number of reasons behind it what I think which I am going to explain below also going to give opinion to fix that in future.

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Some people argue that to make healthy foods like fruits and vegetables more affordable, they should be subsidised by the government. Others believe that it is better to tax unhealthy foods. Discuss both views and give your option.

more and more of people wrangle that making healthy as well as Fruits and vegetables more inexpensive. However , they ought be give money by administration However, others argue that it is best method to levy. In my opinion, I believe that both views are equally important.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Technology has advanced so much that we can do almost anything from a single device– a smartphone. Childrens often lose track of time when playing with their smartphones. This is caused by various features the phone provides. This is a really concerning matter for the young generations if left neglected.

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions.

As time passed, more and more generation z graduate from school and devoted into job while some companies discover those fresh graduates lacking of social skills such as communications and team work skills, the root causes can be the difference of focuses between academic setting and working environment, some possible solutions like training workshop held by professionals and internship for undergraduates are being suggested.

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Some people believe that the government should spend more money in putting in more works of art like painting and statutes in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

How likely people love arts? It is thought for some people that placing art works like painting and statues in cities will make it a better places to live in. Personally, I believe that art works undoubtedly add attractions to the cities, but compromises huge amount of money to spend for putting more art works, however, it leads to tourist attractions we can offer to people. Therefore, I strongly agree that the government should spend money for the artworks they will build in the cities.

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Some people believe that starting school at an earlier age is very beneficial for children,while others believe that children must stay home and attend to school at the age of 7. In your opinion,what are the advantages of attending school before the age of 7

Education has an important role in molding children to be the best version of themselves. It helps them to understand the things that cannot be easily explained at home by their parents and it should start at their young age. Whilst, other people has strongly agree that children should attend school at the age of 7, I believe that it is more advantegous for the children as well as their parents to bring their children at school before the age of 7.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands in clothes cars and other items. What are the reasons behind this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development

Numerous expensive items are getting quite famous these days than before. More and more people can be seen interested in spending their hard-earned money on the big labels without even thinking once. There are varoius reasons for this, which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs but before that my opinion regarding this trend is that it is leading to more negative development than positive one.Therefore, I will try to dicuss about it comprehensively in a brief way.

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Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on the problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, many animals in the world are becoming extinct. Some people believe that governments and people should protect these animals from extinction, while others think that we should prioritize the problems of human beings. I personally believe that while protecting animals are beneficial for the environment, we should concentrate on saving humans because they are the superior to all species.

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Some school children buy healthy food from the school cafeteria. However, some buy unhealthy food. What are the reasons for both these situations? Should schools be allowed to sell unhealthy food?

Some school children purchase healthy food from the school canteens while others buy unhealthy food. The reasons behind these problems are that parents make children aware of the drawbacks of unhealthy food. Those children who buy healthy food, have the habits of consuming healthy food. I personally believe that schools should not sell unhealthy food because it attracts children to consume unheathy food which are detrimental to their health.

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The technology allowed us to have more ways to communicate. However, some people say that the internet and social network create more opportunities for conflicts and erase the line of respect and appropriateness. To what extent do you agree?

“Technology allowed us to have more ways to communicate. However, some people say that the internet and social network create more opportunities for conflicts and erase the line of respect and appropriateness. To what extent do you agree?”

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that changing or being the same is a crucial reason for your growth and could identify your lifestyle. While it is a commonly held belief that some individuals prefer spending their time doing the same activities or commitments. There is also an argument that changing and improving is always beneficial. This essay will analyze this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of planets and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In every country on the earth, there is disagreement around the topic of environmental issues. With regard to this topic, few consider that the extinction of specific species of animals and plants are almarming environmental problem, while others opine that other envrionmental problems are more pressing. In this esssay, I will discuss both perspective and provide my opinion.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

People believe that there is fun in game only if the person win. This essay agrees with the statement because winning a game can give the winner prizes and pride making the winner think that the game is much more fun.

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Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the causes and solutions?

Since most of the elder people are suffering from loneliness and unfit conditions, as per experts' saying they will be healthier and happier if they spend time and get along with others and exercise everyday. Here I will discuss the causes behind the present conditions of elders and put some solutions to eradicate the problem.

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Many criminals commit more crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt, that many former prisoners break the law after them are being release. This essay will explore reasons of this trend as well as elaborate the mesures which could tackle with this problem.

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