IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 146

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and exercise every day will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the causes and solutions?

Since most of the elder people are suffering from loneliness and unfit conditions, as per experts' saying they will be healthier and happier if they spend time and get along with others and exercise everyday. Here I will discuss the causes behind the present conditions of elders and put some solutions to eradicate the problem.

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Many criminals commit more crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt, that many former prisoners break the law after them are being release. This essay will explore reasons of this trend as well as elaborate the mesures which could tackle with this problem.

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By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (AGREE)

Death penalty is the subject of significant debate today. Executing murders to death could lead to guiltness, hence, some people believe putting murderers for imprisonment would be a better way. In my opinion, I am not agree with this concept because it may arouse numerous problems.

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Fewer and fewer children are willing to look after their parents as they get older these days.Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

According to opinion of some people, today just a little amount of grown children take care for their parents as they get older. This essay will present the argument against this trend.

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; Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two-thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

To what extent schools should monitor children’s eating habits and exercise to combat childhood obesity is a complex issue. While I agree that schools have a role to play in promoting healthier lifestyles, they should not be the sole institution responsible.

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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

Despite of the profit generated, some people think that international tourism have negative effect for their nation. In this essay I will explain what causing this problem and then I would offer a few solution.

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Some people believe that young people benefit from working while studying at school or university. Others think that young people will achieve more by focussing on their studies. Discuss both of the view points and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. days?

Working and studying at the same time may be useful and good combination: getting knowledges and having experience with money from workplace. However, with this way, students will not be able to distinctly concentrate on the both sides, which may lead to losing the job and distraction at school or university.

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Some people think it is good to socialise with work colleagues, while others believe in maintaining a professional distance. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People have different ways of balancing their work and social lives. Some enjoy spend time with colleagues during off-hours but others prefer to keep work and fun time separate. This essay will explain both of views and I personally prefer the latter.

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Rise in Homeless persons across England between 2010 and 2016.

The graph illustrates the rise in homelessness across England, focusing on London, the rest of England, and the country as a whole from 2010 to 2016.

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Globalization is creating a world with a single culture and destroying national identity in the process. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (Steve no copyright)

In today's world, each nation has a closer connection to one another owning to the advancing development of the society, creating a concept called globalization. Meanwhile, this phenomenon may result in a single culture situation and a lead to a devastation of national identity. In my opinion, I don't agree with this speculation as the globalization tends to make individuals more cooperative.

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Success in formal “pen and paper” examinations is often seen to be a sign intelligent. To what extent do you agree with the view that formal examinations measure intelligence?

Some people believe that those who are succeeded in formal exams are more intellectually capable. However, I am not in favour of the view that these exams are great examination for intelligence.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons ehy somrone should learn a foreign language . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many individual think that learning a different langauage is to travel or work in foreign country. However, others believe that these are not the main reason to learn foreign language. In this essay, I will elaborate about both topic.

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Technology is being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

1,I will take who read my essay now in quick trip to describe between to opinion, and i will explain also i will give my opinion ,first some people they are saying that technology in schools it’s good since that laptops and ipads,it’s help us to study much better i think that is so helpful to the student since it’s help the teacher and the student because the student can write he is homework’s from he is home and the teacher can see everything from he is home also and we all see what the technology did in the school’s if we go to the past when nothing it’s name technology we will see that it’s hard life for contacting from the family and the school the parents they have to go school to ask about their children however when we see the technology now in schools and how it helpful for the student we have to thank god because that very useful and pinfits at the future , 2 ,in the other hand who say that technology is negative anything in this life they have negative things and positive ...

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Some people think parents should tell or read stories to children; while, others think parents don't need to do that, as children can read books, watch T.V or movies by themselves. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.Some people think parents should tell or read stories to children; while, others think parents don't need to do that, as children can read books, watch T.V or movies by themselves. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In this modern era, Advanced technology provides us different resources to gain knowledge about every aspect of this universe. It is often argued among some people that it is the responsibility of parents to share some fairy tales with their children while other believe that it is not a necessity of the young generation as they can acquire knowledge by reading books or watching moives on their own. I am agreed with the former view that parents would guide their children in every aspect of life by sharing stories. I would like to explain by views in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society others say that schools are the best way to learn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays many parents theach their beloved children how to become a positive member of the society. In opposed, others believe that schools would be the best choice to gain how to be a good part of a society. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives how both ideology can lead to a great personality in a society.

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Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with a disruptive child in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

Teaching in a classroom can be though for teachers, especially when they have to deal with naughty students. Addressing this problem, some people give suggestion for teacher to ask their disruptive students to leave the class. While this might be the easiest way to solve the problem, I personally think that there are some other solutions to offer.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the Southwest Airport before and after development in a single year.

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The most important aim of science should be improve people's life.

Scientific innovation is the most purpose to develop daily life. At present we are passing days by using different types of useful gadgets and innovation which are so convenient and it is increasing day. I completely agree with this statement and I am going to demonstrate some relevant points in support of my standpoints.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, in some countries people believe that it is essential to spend vast amount of money on developing advanced high-speed trains throughout the cities. In opposed to those who think that money shoud be invested on upgrading existing public transportation. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives.

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Education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that education should be free for everyone. I completely agree with this opinion and I think that higher education should at least not be as expensive as it is now.

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