IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 146

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Advertising is an effective method for a company to market their products. Despite the benefit of advertising, many people think that being flooded with advertising would confuse the customer. In this essay, I would explain how too much advertising could give a company more disadvantages than benefits.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are people whom from the start, is able to determine what they want in life. When it comes to having a successful future, it is usually compared to others who transfer from one job to another. I believe that in most part, it is better to foresee what career to pursue to have a successful life.

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Many countries thought that children have to do homework in their free time while others say children should do more outdoor activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that school students should do study activities insted of outdoor activities in their lesure time. While I agree that homework plays pivotal role, I believe this free time should not be spend only on one choice, but should be splited between both variants.

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Some people think that children should be raised by all the family members (eg: uncle, aunt and grandparents) rather than only parents. Give your opinion.

In modern contemporary, there has been widespread discussion about watching live performances via tv or co and different explanations have been put forward.The number of advocates may strenuously argue that a lot of people tend to watching live events through tv and computer instead going to place , their a dversaies may clime otherwise. Considering the numerous argmunts made , this essay will argue the the effects of watching live through the tv or computer and provide evidence to support my opinion .

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Some people think that competition at work,at school and in daily life is agood thing.Others believe that we should try to cooperate more,rather thancompeting against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ownknowledge or experience.

The argument over whether people should compete or cooperate more with others in their daily life has not been settled yet. Whereas competiton offers a great chance to improve people's ability about problem-solving or creative mind, cooperation have a kind working environment and avoid lots of conflicts. Utimately, I think the competition will be a good choice in long-term consideration.There are several advantages for people trying to cooperate more.

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Many people say that they believe it is important to protect the environment but make no effort to do anything about it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What action do you think individuals should take to protect the environment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is said that many people do no actual actions although they reckon it is necessary to protect environment. There are sevearal reasons for this situation, and in this eassy I will give my own solution to it.

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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Thanks to medical development, humans expected lifespan is prolonged. Also in some countries,

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Obesity is becoming a major problem in many countries. What are the causes of this problem, and how can it be solved?

Obesity is becoming a serious problem in many nations. It is a crucial challenge that must have to solve for human beings. In my opinion, the diet of individuals on daily basis and the lack of exercise are the main causes of this problem. So, we will talk about the reason why the obesity rates are increasing and how can we overcome this problem in this essay.

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Some people think that competetion at work, at school and in daily lide is a good thing. Othersbelieve that we should try to cooperate more rather than compete against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Methods to improve your self can look different to each person. Other people may flourish better through competing and others may do better through cooperation.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

As it is known, counties all over the world are starting to familiarize as products are easily bought and replicated. Although some might argue that resembling other countries are useless and could deduct a countries development, I believe that this could be beneficial and could help citizen receive easy access to resources that is hard to find.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While it is widely debated that people who continue to fix on single job that they had decided during early phase are generally have more happy working life than those who change it more often, others argue that the fixation of single career does not indicate level of one's satisfaction. Hence, I strongly support with the latter statement as working in same jobs does not always create joy in the long run will be discussed further in this essay.

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of diffenent cultures and ages together. to what extend do you agree?

It is argued that music is a suitable path to make individuals get along with individuals of various cultural contexts as well as of different ages.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. what could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

These days, many people want to become self-employed instead of work for a company or organization. The disadvantages of being a self-employed are working unlimited hours, and maintaining a lot of responsibilities. The advantages of being a self-employed are flexible working hours and having full profit of the company.

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Many governments spend too much money on weapons and military equipment. It would be better for the government to use the money spent on the military to improve its citizens' quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Governments of many countries spend too much money on weapons and military equipment. Some people believe that it will be better for governments to invest money to improve the quality of life of the citizens. I personally believe that although investing a lot of money on military equipment and weapons helps to protect a country, improving the quality of life of the citizens are more important because it builds a healthy and productive nation.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.

Everyone's know that gaining experience in our life makes the life more adventurous and beautiful. But every experience come with a beautiful lesson for our entire life as before we seemed it as difficult. In this paragraph I am totally agree with this statement. I am going to explain my points in following paragraphs.

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Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Advancements in technology have replaced the workforce with machines and robots since the 18th century. This process is increasing at a faster pace now which is causing unemployment because all the industries are approaching the method of automation. I firmly agree with the statement and the arguments are presented in the paragraphs below.

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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In every country on the earth, there is disagreement around the topic of age difference between parents and kids. With regard to this topic, nowadays, in many nations the age gaps between child and parents is more than the past. According to my perspective it has more pros than cons.

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Dating online is popular because of technology. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Technology has become very common these days.All people use it for several reasons.It makes our lives easy and makes the world a small village.All citizens can communicate online and know each other online.In my opinion, online dating has many positive sides and negative points.In this essay I will discuss them below.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, smartphones are used in every people’s life especially young individuals such as teenager and children. A few children waste hours in their daily activities on their smartphones. This essay will write about a negative development from my perspective.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some say that thus is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Following technological advancement, computers usage is surging unexpectedly in educational field. Such that it is becoming debateable, whether it brings more advantageous or disadvantageous results. There can be many positive and negative outcomes like more advance education from all over world and lose of actual mental abilites respectively. In the following paragraphs, these will be discuessed with my opinion at the end.

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