IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 144

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise, and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

To start with, there are different ways to stay healthy during the life and people are trying to follow any of them. Usually, we get used to one or two techniques that we continue doing.

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In some countries, government are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Government authorities are nowadays motivating many industries and businesses to expand themselves to other regional areas rather than confining to only big cities. This movement from big cities to other small towns has both merits are demerits which will be discussed in the essay below.

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37.Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write an essay with no less than 250 words.

It has been argued by some that authorities must punish the young criminals in the same manner as the adults. I strongly support this viewpoint because mild punishments may lead to higher chances of repeating the crime. Apart from this, less stricter treatments might reduce the seriousness of the offences in the minds of the young people. This essay will further elaborate on this topic.

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are those factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?

There are some arguments about the country's success. Some believe economic development is the only factor that shows success while opponents think other factors are also important. This essay will discuss all the factors which contribute to a country's accomplishment and some of the important factors from my point of view.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the numbers of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions.

Nowadays, there are many athletes play significant roles in world-class competitions. While some people argue that there are growing rates for those athletes who take drugs in order to win at any cost. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential issues.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some job are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that men and women have different qualities and duties. This paragraph will determine what jobs are suitable for men and women. Furthermore, a lot of people have an idea that male and female are equal in so many things in life . In the other hand , many think that men and women have their own qualities , and they are good at it .

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‏Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Transportation has become an indispensable part of people's lives. In recent years there has been a frequently discussed issue of whether increasing the cost of oil for buses and cars can contribute to save an environmental problem, or whether it poses risks. I firmly agree that increasing fuel prices contributes

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In spite of improvement in the healthcare by governments many people in developed countries are suffering from overweight and obesity. What are the causes of this and what other the impacts

The increase in obesity rate, particularly in developed countries has become vital topic of debates. Although the healthcare services in rich countries have increased dramatically, the obesity rate has risen excessively, too. While there are important factors toward this issue, harmful impacts should be considered, which will be discussed.

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Some people say that the best way to reduce crime rate is to increase the number of police on the streets. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that some people think increasing the number of force on roads reduces case rate. While it is a commonly held belief that this idea is the best to decline the crime rate, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that increasing the figure of law enforcement on the streets may shrink the atrocity amount.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some job are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that a few of people thinks that men and women have different properties. Thus. some jobs are suitable for men and some other jobs are also fit for women. This essay is totaly agree with this statement because, Men can work in a risky indusries unlike women. However, women could give more in teaching fields.

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Some people believe that it is the government’s responsibility to provide care and finance to support people after they retire. Others, however, think that individuals themselves should save money in their own when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion. > DISCUSS AND OPINION

Few people think government should provide pension and other amenities to retired individuals while others disagree and believe that senior citizens should save moeny for their future. This essay will discuss both these views in detail and will explain why I think that the government should take the responsibility after retirement.

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9.Some parents believe that children today spend too much time looking at screens. Others argue that this is necessary in the modern world. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some parents think that children in today’s era spend too much time in front of the screen and don’t go outside as often as before, while others believe that this is an essential development for the modern world. Although the latter opinion has its own merits, I believe that teenagers could benefit from both perspectives if they divided their time wisely. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and provide my opinion on the matter.

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These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantage of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the last few decades, there has been a significant increase in the number of opportunities for the international travel, with more transport routes and cheap fares.

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In the modern era, internet became really popular and widely used around the world. While some people believe that individuals are more isolated due to using the Internet, I am in favour of the view that it allows humans to keep in touch with others effortlessly. Trung

In the modern era, internet became really popular and widely used around the world. While some people believe that individuals are more isolated due to using the Internet, I am in favor of the view that it allows humans to keep in touch with others effortlessly.

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An increasing number of people are now using the Internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think this has brought people closer together, while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Huy Tran

In the socialization era, a large number of people are using the Internet to make new friends and social communication, some believe this drive people closer together. While others argue that people are attractive isolated. Two aforementioned opinions will be discussed in the following paragraphs before presenting my personal perspective in the conclusion.

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The government needs to spend money to encourage the development of sports and arts for school students, rather than to support professional sports and art events. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statem

It's argued that the goverment have to invest money to develope sports and arts for children, more than supporting professional sports and arts. this essay will totally agree with this statement. because spending money on children will promote many fantastic potintioals in diffrent kind of sports and arts. also there are not many benifits of supporting professional sports and art.

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An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think this is a positive or negative development to society?

The huge amount of individuals going to change their life and jobs. I suppose that, in both sides has some pros and cons impacts also they can be effective on society and people's lives.

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The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The given chart illustrates the operation of a hot balloon.

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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

For some they thought if you are successful in life it means having a higher intelligence quotient. But there is a deeper meaning when it comes to intelligence and how people use it in every day life. In this essay, I will discuss the topic and explain my suggestions.

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Many children no longer read books and instead spend their time using modern technology. While some people think this is a positive trend, others think it is a problem. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In this day and age, A majority of children decrease time to read books and rather than using time on modern technology. Meanwhile a number of individuals believe this is a beneficial aspects, others argue that this is a detrimental aspects. From my personal perspective, I agree to a certain extent with the given statement; however there are some issues to be considered. Both sides will be examined in the follwoing paragraphs.

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