IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 156

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people says we should plant trees on free space jn city and town while some says that we should do construction. Do you agree or disagree?

Few individuals argue that authorithies should plant trees in free spaces in city junctions and town, where as others believe that space should be utilised for construction. I firmly disagree, that available space should not be used for constructing or developing anything. instead used for planing trees.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

A GAP year (a year between finishing high school and starting university studies) slightly becomes popular among teenagers. There are several reasons that can lead to this decision: some individuals want to start earning money right after the school graduation and some people want to travel while they are young and have enough time. This essay aims to discuss advantages and disadvantages of young people making a decision about taking a GAP year.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health process as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Myriad of working professionals these days do not engage in physical exercise. The reason being hectic work schedule and lack of awareness about fitness. To solve this issue awareness about health and subsidized gym membership can be used as solution for this obstacle. This essay will elucidate problem and solution of this obstacle.

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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people have different views about where is the better place for inhibiting. While some believe that living in their city is better, others argued that counteryside is better for living. However, I side with the latter view because living in the villages is better for strength than city life.

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Some people agree that it is better to not share violent news in the newspaper

One of the most controversial issues today relates to sharing war crimes and violence on the screen and newspaper. A large fraction of the population believes that this has led to an increase in crime numbers and has bad effects on society in general also it is better to ban it from the news. In this essay i am going to discuss different points related to this issue then i will eventually give my opinion.

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Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages.

In this globalization era, billingual skill is ubiquitous for cross generation, including children, espessially for non-english countries. According to research by expert, learning second language in elementary school will more beneficial compared to secondary level. Considering multiple factor, I personally support this statement and eager to ellaborate the reasons in this essay.

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Many people today are choosing to travel to other countries. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years the number of people who have decided to travel to other countries has increased. From my point of view, this option is probably beneficial which seeking new experiences and improving personal growth for their own careers.

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In schools and universities, girl tend to choose arts subjects, while boys choose science subjects. What is the reason? Should the trend be changed?

It is generally accepted in education or career fields that subject preferences are divided by gender, with arts being dominant for female students and science for male students. This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this and argue that this trend should be changed.

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The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggestion least one possible solution.

It has been universally accepted that problem of overpopulation is escalating at an alarming rate. The problem is bringing a state of depression among the masses and in economy too. There are plethora of reasons of the same and its possible solutions can be suggested too which are discussed as follows.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Some people have started to think that the younger community must have full-time education till the age of 18. This idea will become a failure thing for younger people in the future.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

People have different views as to whether an increasing number of individuals with health issues are attempting new methods of medications and treatments rather than visiting their regular doctor. In my opinion, despite there are various benefits to this approach, I firmly believe that it brings about many more drawbacks.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?

Most of the countries support youngest are engaged with paid work. A group of people disagree this as absolutely wrong for children get money for their work while others think it creates valuable, experience and make children more responsibility. In my opinion, this is completely true for children and it creates them work habits in their lives, which I will elaborate more on in my essay.

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advanages and disadvantages of gibing children this message?

There is no denying that with the rapid development of social norms, educational standards and approaches have become significantly diverse. As such, the signigicance of education on the sense of hard working have been increasingly recognized. While some people look upon asking children to make efforts contributes to their ultimate high-achievement, others advocate that children should not be placed excessive strain. Despite pushing children by strict inquiries driving a potential in better personal outcome, it cause negatives in the same time.

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Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, It is argued that a number of enormous companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other positions.

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Science is more useful than human judgement in stopping crime. To what extent do you agree?

Some individuals believe that Science is more beneficial than human judgment in criminal cases. I partly agree with that because If there is DNA evidence science may solve the whole crime. However, sometimes there is no evidence and we should trust the Judge's decision.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

Several nations high number of citizens having fast food in their diet, therefore they also deal with many health issues as well. I completely agree, if authorities increase taxes on the kind of food it saves their people from health problems such as obesity and leads the people towards healthy food items.

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Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Artists take a lot of money and opportunity from the government, while people think that with this money they can do useful things to develop cities. However, I believe that the situation of a country and people is more important than artists. On the one hand, artists make the country popular. They do a lot of concerts, and people enjoy it. They do songs or arts that have the possibility to strengthen traditions or the official language of the country. To make a song or art, they should have much money. For example, popular singer of Kazakhstan Dimash Qudaibergen made his country and the official language of his country much more popular than expected. Because of his voice, a lot of people of other countries tried to learn Kazakh language to sing like Dimash Qudaibergen. But it is obviously that he took a lot of support from the government before and after this historical event. However, this is rarely situation which was in Kazakhstan. On the other hand, the economic and situation ...

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Some people think that the modern communication technology is having a negative effect on a social relationship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Based on some people’s notion, modern communication technologies, affect social interactions negatively. I heartfully disagree with this idea; However I believe that through new technological innovations, individuals, around the world, can interact with each other easily. Also, training and education get more accessible for whom are deprived from.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last 10 years. Discuss the cause and effects of this disturbing trend

Nowadays, obesity in western nations has been increased by teenagers more than 20% in the last decade. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall elaborate on the reasons and discuss what the side effects are.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries will not be need because people can see historical objects and works of arts by computers. Do you agree or disagree

In this modern era, internet is ubiquitous across the world and provide many possibility including virtual exhibition. For this reasons, some advocate conventional showcase, including museums and art galleries, could be elliminiated entierely. I personally disagree to this statement wholeheartedly and I will elaborate my view points on the matter.

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