IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 159

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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the continued rise in the world'S POPULATION IS tHE GREATEST PROBLEM FACED BY HUMANITY AT THE PRESENT TIME. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS CONTINUED RISE? DO YOU AGREE THAT IT IS THE GREATEST PROBLEM FACED BY HUMANITY?

Nowadays, the major issue frustrated by society is our population on Earth which is continued growth. while the main reason for this situation is medical breakthroughs, it turned into the main dilemma of humanity’s ways.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

The given plans indicate the harbour in 2000 and it looks like today.

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the global warming is a biggest problem for our environment. People should work on environment to solve this global issue.

It is an undeniable fact that global warming is a biggest problem for our environment. People should work on environment to solve this global issue. There are a lot of reasons for this cause and solutions, which we will discuss into upcoming paragraphs.To commence with, growing population world wide is a biggest reason for global warming. To adding a point, people start cutting trees for homes and food with the increment in population even some people export wood from cutting trees as export for business. Instead of cutting trees people should grow more trees. If they need land for homes, they should plant new trees on the free land and water them until they become a tree. For example, in Germany, if individuals have to cut any tree for any purpose, they plant another tree at a time to protect the environment from global warming.Secondly, every single person wants their own vehicles, which produces pollutions. So, this is the biggest threat for global warming. However, to meet the d...

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Some individuals are convicted of punishment due to the crime that has been done by them and then still commit more crimes. In this essay, the reasons and solutions which might help to reduce this problem will be discussed.

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Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while other’s think it should be controlled? Discuss both views

Nowadays, it is an ubiquitous thing that media goes deeply into personal life of different people and uncover some personal moments to everyone. Some people believe that it is not a bad thing, while others think that such actions should be restricted.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Technology has involved in our everyday’s life, not only for work purposes but also served as a learning tool for children and adolescent. Thus, many younger age are currently enggaged with devices on their daily activities, resulting in several advantages yet drawbacks towards their personal and intelectual growth. In my personal opinion, this phenomenon brought more positive impacts, especially in educational field.

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,development of thechnology due to apear some large and small companies.There are some feature that devide them into these groups .All of them have some particular situation that their employees know about them.Some people believe that it is better to work for a large company.I completely agree with this Idea and in this essay I will support my opinion with examples.

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you work for a clothing company. your company has a new style of coat. write an email to a magazine in about 150–200 words. tell the magazine about the new style of coat. your email should do the following things: provide information about your company. provide information about the new style of coat. suggest who might buy this coat and why. invite the staff at the magazine to write about the coat.

I am Rajnish.I am working in a textile company, it is near Connell Street Woodstock. The purpose of email to you about my company product. Everyone knows this company is very popular.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard working and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there has been a debate over the topic of success and if the appearance of it in our lives comes from hard work and determination or due to other factors like money. I believe that success can be gain only by hard work and self discipline. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the statement given.

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In the modern world, many children spend a lot of time in front of computers, televisions, and smartphones. This is very harmful to them. To what extent do you agree?

childern for sure spend a lot of time using varius kinds of digital devices like phones and televisions which could possibly lead to damage the kids brain.

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Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

In recent years, some countries have started practicing new laws to limit working hours for employees. It is mainly because of the modern ideology of labour hours and to protect employees from exploitation. This essay will argue this change as a positive development.

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More and more children are accessing the Internet unsupervised. This can sometimes put them at risk. What problems do you think parents face when dealing with their children using the Internet? How can this problem be solved?

In recent times, alot of children are now able to use the internet without any sort of guide from their parents, putting them in danger. Guardians now find time their time management lacking as they try and deal with this issue. However, they can set time limits on these gadgets that have access to the web and also learn more on how to ristrict explicit sites.

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Some people think that govements should spend money for faster public transportation , others think that there are other important priortities . Discuss both views and give your opinion

Few individuals have an opinion that authorities should invest in faster public transport system. while others feel that other priorities like healthcare, education and defence should be top priorities of government spending. in my opinion the former view is suitable for big metropolis whereas the latter view is important from nation interest point of view, and I will provide opinion in favour of latter view.

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Some people think that the best way to preserve cultural traditions is to limit the influence of foreign cultures, while others believe that cultural exchange is beneficial for all societies. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A magnitude of people believe that the best way to preserve culture is to limit the influence of foreign cultures, whereas others believe in the benefits that comes with the exchange of cultures. I am of the opinion that exchange in culture brings a lot of benefits in a society. More details will be alluded to in the essay below.

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Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree?

The role of combat sports on mental and physical health has been a major topic of concern in today's society. From my perspective, martial arts are infeasible for both sides and there are compelling reasons why such sports should be forbidden rather than organising their international competitions.

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Topic:Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health.

Recently, many people began to massively discuss the question whether it is worth that children can spend time with playing pc games and watch TV as much as they want or not,and this became the most common topic.While one side strongly and persistently supports that children need freedom and can do whatever they want, there is another side who thinks that children need restrictions to prevent them from becoming dishonest in the future, and they not going to change their opinion. In this essay, i will consider both points of view and try to draw some conclusion.

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The internet has vastly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Internet undoubtedly transformed the way we access the informations. While this development has numerous benefit, it is also present certain challenges. In my opinion, the advantages of increased access informations significantly outweigh than disadvantages, user navigate the resources wisely.

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Some people think it is no longer necessary for children to go to school because they can do all their learning online. Others believe learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world, some individuals are of the opinion that it is unessential for youth to go to school as they could acquire knowledge on the internet while it is believed that directly learning is more significant. From my standpoint, i wholly gravitate on the second statement due to some underlying ground, despite some reservations. And my essay will expound upon its reasons as well as provide practical examples.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In other nations, it is perceived by some individuals, as vital to be an owner of a home instead of renting one. This is so because when a house in one's name, they can do whatever they want with it and they do not have any fear of it, of being sold. In my view, I think this is a positive situation.

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Healthcare costs are increasing, and may governments are finding it difficult to balance their healthcare budget. Should citizens be responsible for their health with private health insurance, or should the government provide free healthcare for all.

These days, many society have complained about the high cost of healthcare services, with prices increasing dramatically. However, governments are struggling to afford it. Therefore, citizens are forced to pay for their procedures out of pocket. Is this fair? I truly support that health is an essential requirement and governments need to provide financial support to all citizens. On one side of the argument, people are responsible for their healthcare services individually with private health insurance. One of the major reasons for that is numerous countries do have not enough budget or economic resources to afford it. Particularly, while roughly 70 countries in Africa are not able to provide food to poor population, they have no chance to increase the medical budget. On the other hand, many countries aid in surgeries and basic medical care such as fewer, stomach, or eye illnesses. Meanwhile, public hospitals give opportunities for surgery operations in emergency situations such as...

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