IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 157

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that the media has the right to publish details of people’s views, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

In this contemporary epoch, a large number of individuals believe that it is beneficial to print the views and thoughts of public while critics do not agree with this notion. In my opinion, personal opinions should never be published. This essay will delve into the reasons behind this and will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

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Some people prefer to shop in traditional stores. Other people prefer to do their shopping online Discuss and give your opinion

These days, people tend more toward doing their shopping online rather than shopping in traditional stores. From my own perspective, I prefer shopping online as it is less time consuming and more conveniet.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, it is completely complicated to perform successfully at school due to the overload schedule, and some individuals argue that subjects that are in a second priorities, such as sport and bakery time, need to be removed from the curriculum activities in order to give pupils space for studying their main subjects, while I completely disagree with this statement, because headteachers must give them opportunity to do whatever they aim to learn from school boundaries.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Most of villagers are changing their accommodations from villages to cities all around the world. As a result of this countryside residents are lower than town areas.I think this is a negative development and in this essay, I will elaborate my perspectives furthermore.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.

One of the widely discussed topics nowadays is that Computers are basis of modern world. It is undeniable that computers have become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement of whether they should be introduced into classrooms for teaching purposes or not.

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It is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future of the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people are now preferring to enjoy a movie in the comfort of their homes instead of going to the movie house. I believe that the future of cinemas will soon dramatically decrease as there are more comfortable ways which are cost efficient.

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Many people believe that the consumption of fast food is a major contributor to health problems in society. Others argue that it is simply a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this modern world, fast foods are becoming more and more common in numerous societies. While some have an opinion that eating junk foods is a principle reason for health issues in communities, other have an opposing point of view which fast food consumers are only choosing what to eat and the decision is personal. I agree with the first group and both viewpoints will be argued in the following paragraphs.

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Some students after leaving school go travelling or work instead of going to university does this have more advantages or disadvantages to their studies?

Nowadays, in the 21st century some individuals after finishing school tend to go overseas by some circumstances or participating into work instead of gaining tertiary education. Personally speaking, all society members in the world in different countries cannot be equal in their preferences and I am convinced that this conscious choise might have more drawbacks, rather than beneficial sides.

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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In over to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviors. Do you agree or disagree.

In recent years a lot of immigrants have left their countries and travelled to Western countries looking for better jobs and lifestyles. In this essay I will be talking about both views of argument, Morover I tend to disagree with saying immigrants should adapt to local customs and codes of behavior.

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Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Mothers and fathers want their children to succeed so they they put much pressure on them. Moreover, this trend is caused by many reasons. In my opinion, I think this is a positive development.

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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, personal success is determined by many factors. Education is limited to academic pursuits and do not teaches learners with the valuable skills necessary to be successful. This essay agrees that students should carry out social services or work experiences alongside their studies to intake valuable qualieties and skills.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In modern society, most individuals are working in organizations. Among them, a part of employees are expected to working the same organization for their whole working life. While others are willing to change their occupations over the years. This essay will argue that the pros and cons of these thoughts.

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Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or anegative trend?

Nowadays, some customers prefer to purchase a locally produced goods instead of imported products. I vehemently agree with this statement, as this scenario could not only be beneficial for individual's finanicial situation but also seems beneficial for the progress of any country.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animals. Is it justified or there is any alternative? To what extent do you agree or diagree?

There is no doubts, that an invention of new remedies is important for society, howevere the way of testing new drags is controversial. I believe, that experimentations on animals is only appropriate approach to create a new drag or a cosmetic and it should not be prohibited by law.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.

Life is full of unexpected events, and some may need more courage to overcome. It is claimed that taking risks is essential for people's working and personal lives. Personally, the advatages of doing this are there more when compared to some drawbacks that may be experieced in life. The positives of taking risks are to be deliberated.

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Some people say that what children watch influences their behaviour. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their be haviour most. Discuss both vie ws and give your opinion.

There are opposite ideas about the negative effects of watching TV on children's behaviour. Some people believe that they can much more influenced by the content of TV programs, while others are of the opinion that the amount of time they have been spent is more significant. I completely agree with the former.

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In many countries around the world , young people decide to leave their parents home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays the trend of leaving their parent's home to live on their own or with friends after completion of the school is increasing. In my opinion, this is a negative development because this might bring misunderstanding between the family members and it could be arduous to live alone.

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Some people think that the internet makes a person more sociable, while others think it makes a person less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that the internet makes people more sociable, while others do not think so. Instead, it makes people less sociable. On one side, people can socialize with many humans around the world without border restrictions. On the other hand, it is totally true that internet have made people withdrawn themselves from society. In my opinion, I agree with the second statement.

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Some people believe that time spent on television and computer games can be valuable for children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few people support the fact that the time spent on computer and television is a waste of time whereas others view the situation oppositely. I will discuss both views alongwith my opinion in the impending paragraphs.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

It is argued that many workers decide to neglect the importance of leisure time, and spend most of their day at work. Although this will help them gain professtional advancement, I believe that the drawbacks more than the advantages because this will impact a worker's health.

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