IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 1582

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different ages and cultures together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this contemporary era, it is irrefutable that world has become a global village, thanks to the internet and music. Some folks believe that music is the best medium of uniting masses of various age groups and civilizations. I strongly agree with the aforementioned notion and the upcoming paragraphs will shed a light on this with examples.

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Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. Why is this?What can be done to encourage more walking? Walking is an excellent way

Walking is an excellent way of keep mankind healthy; however, this activity seems to be not an attractive for the majority of population. This is mainly because lack of facilities and motivation to kick start the walking. These troubles could be effective solved by adopting some step by step strategies.

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In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view?

In the past few decades, online communication through the internate along with sending emails as well as calling has been tremendously improved because of information technology. While, some people believe that forthcoming blooming technology in IT has excessive downsides as compared to the positive. I completely disagree with the writer's notion, and the reasons for my inclination are articulated in trail paragraphs.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Travelling around and exploring new lands has always been a passion of humans.Therefore,the choices are either to explore one's own country or to visit foriegn destinations.Many argue that,selection of local touristic spots for holidays will be more preferable in coming future.I strongly agree with the above-laid statement.I will explain the possible reasons such as recent COVID-19 pandemic travel restictions and financial factors in this essay.

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Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

In this contemporary world, younger generations are moving to cities from villages for the purpose of education and job. Advantages of moving to cities will provide you with better education and job opputunities but the cost of living is very high and also development is not de-centralised. In my opinion the positive points over weigh negative points.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Sports are changed over the past few years. Big companies and sports business have collaborated with each other. Some individuals opine that this makes a positive. While others are taking it as the disadvantages. This assignment intends to delve into both perspectives and I believe that advertisement through sports has more privilege to seek customers.

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The detailed description about crime will affect the people and cause many social resources. Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In recent years, Awareness about current criminal issues has significantly increased. This has led to sources like social media, news channels et cetera, competing for more views. Besides, some publishers take a step further to provide detailed investigation to attract more viewers. Hence, we have an ongoing debate, while some believe it is vital for the society to know the complete details, the others argue that, in-dept information can escalate these crimes. I completely agree that such forms of media should be strictly regulated by goverment authorities and we will discuss about some benefits in doing so, in this essay.

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Studies show that many people in the prison have low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. To what extent do you agree.

Recent studies have shown that prisoners have a low level of eduction. Therefore, some people believe that educating the prisoners is the best way to reduce crime. This essay will discuss the agreements and disagreements of this statement.

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‘Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding.’ To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Being updated seems to play an important role in modern society. To provide information, some broadcast players make more investments to cover overseas news than to report local facts, this provoque enables some individuals to claim in favour of increasing the budget of local operations since it produces they produce more important content to people's lives. I tend to agree with that, because local facts have higher and short-term impact on population.

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During holidays or weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in the nature environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?

Though, a lot of people prefer to spend their leisure time in the countryside, but few of them are interested in activities as hiking or mountain climbing. What is the problem? It is obvious, that kind of activities demand to have corresponding physical conditions, but nowadays society does not care about it as much as required. Օne of the most common and effective ways to raise people’s awareness about the importance of physical activity in the nature environment.

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Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this opinion?

Nowadays, some state that universal healthcare should be applied since it is a person’s right to receive free healthcare. However, others persist with the opinion that healthcare is a benefit and should be held accountable by individuals. From my perspective, in order to have a sustainable system, healthcare should be paid for by individuals taking responsibility for their own health.

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Some people say that the modern technology has made shopping easier today, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Shopping is a great pastime for many, irrespective of its mode. Some prefer shopping online, while others are comfortable in conventional way of buying. In this essay I will discuss both views and explain why I am inclined towards shopping from home.

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According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world- wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?

When some man-made phenomenon is observed at a global level, it becomes necessary to analyse its effects. The use of the internet is accelerated since the last decade, so a study is conducted on the same. This study found results that more and more usage of the internet has left humans with very less time spend on one-on-one communication with each other. although the internet opens the opportunity to connect worldwide, mankind should draw attention towards the face to face communication.

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Space travel has been possible for some time and some people say that space tourism will be developed in the future. What do you think space travel is positive or negative a development?

Space travel has been increasing for the last five decades. This exploration gives more information about outer space. It is often argued issue whether this kind of spacecraft is effective, negative improvements. I strongly believe this trend brings more optimism rather than negatives. I will be mentioning my points in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Many people work from home using modern technology today. Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not the employer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this technological era, the world is becoming smaller with the rise in connectivity devices. The convenience of online meetings and collaboration via broadband is motivating people to work from home. Although, some people believe that this is benefitting the employer more than the employee. This essay will highlight my agreement to an aforementioned phenomenon with crucial pointers.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge

In recent times, the need to focus on hunger is an issue all over the world. Nowadays, vast of people are still starving even though advance agriculture. Consequently, many people dieing each day, since they do not have an easy excess for food.

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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works? Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

Technological advancement has made people's life easier, than before. Latest home appliances save a lot of time and are proved to be very convenient to the women who, in most cases take care of the household chores. Most women utilize this free time for working outside which greatly benefits the family financially. In my opinion, The merits prevail over the demerits, even if they have dependent kids at home.

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Some people say that historical buildings should be knocked down while others say that they should be preserved. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Every country has historical buildings that illustrate their ancestor's stories. However, the public thinks that those buildings are not supposed to be preserved and should be demolished. This idea also has contra from others, who want to keep the historical walls. Each view has its own perspective and I will discuss these ideas in the below paragraphs.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (Such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who ony think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Children choices should mostly depend on the parent's command. In my opinion, in some cases I agree with the first statement but we can't ignore the second one. My next few paragraphs will shape up my position.

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some believe that tourism does more to create tension between countries rather than helping individuals better understand other cultures. to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued by some that tourism has a damaging impact on international relations. I totally disagree with statment.

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