IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people think that the internet has created big problems for both society and the individual. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet has created massive changes in society. Many people think that the internet is a negative influence on both society and the individual. I partially agree with this statement. This essay will provide information to support my opinion.

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Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?

In recent decades, the number of overweight children in Western countries has been steadily increasing, and this has become a major public concern. In this essay, I will discuss the main causes of this trend and describe its possible effects.

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Some people think learning history in school is important. Others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The ongoing debate surrounding school subjects has given rise to two distinct perspectives. One side argues that studying history is better, while the other side insists that subjects directly linked to life offer a more viable solution. This essay will carefully analyse both positions before presenting a well-reasoned personal opinion.

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Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not enough physical exercise. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures are there to this problem?

In today's fast-paced era, it is argued by many physicians that people engage less in physical sports. I believe that this phenomenon stems from a combination of the increased challenges in individuals' lives, such as financial strains and a lack of time. In this scenario, both lawmakers and people should implement measures to solve this pressing issue.

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In the modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with others through the internet. But others are against it. Do you think this is a positive trend or a negative trend?

Internet plays an indispensable role in everyone's life. Nowadays, it has become easy to sell, buy or work with others on the internet. However , some people are against this trend because of the cheap availability of products, scams and frauds, and misrepresentation of distinct products. I think it is positive if individuals follow safety rules. I believe internet provides a wider choice of products , easily accessible, lower prices, and flexibility of hours.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s life others think adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both views and give your opinion .

The notion of happiness and when in life we experience it most profoundly is a topic of endless debeat.Some people look back to their teenage years as the pinnacle of joy,while others find a deeper,more meaningful satisfaction in adulthood,despite its increased responsibilities.Both perspectives have valid arguments,and I believe that each stage of life offers a distinct kind of happiness.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should beto give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What ,in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

About 60% of the world's population are at their prime workable age which is causing an imbalance with higher supply of job seekers and lowered demand by the employers. This is imbalance is polarised further due to advanced technology and automation which is contributing to operational efficiency across all sectors. Some people think that universities should include professional skills and education in their curriculum, while others may be of the opinion that universities should not focus much on professional skills. In my opinion, a university should focus on empowering their students with professional skills mainly due to two main reasons.

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Some people believe that if you give a good interview, the chances are high that you may get selected for the job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The massive responsibility of making a workplace a pleasant atmosphere for staff is on the shoulders of employers. While some opine that employees with strong communication skills can perform better in the workplace, in my view, although no one dares to deny the importance of good communication, it does not necessarily guarantee an expert clerk.

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Some people think that radio has become out of date and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past, radio was regarded as one of the most convenient and influential sources of information. Although some people argue that radio is outdated in the age of television and the internet, I believe this view is overly pessimistic. Radio continues to serve important functions and will remain relevant in the future.

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In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in small family units, instead of a large, extended family. Is this a positive or negative trend?

In different countries, people in megacities are living alone or in tiny family units instead of living with extended family, This is a negative trend. Because, doing so weakens the bond between family members as well and it is one of the prime reasons for loneliness.

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Studies have shown that most criminals have low levels of education. Because of this many believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate prisoners so they can get a job after being released. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As criminalisation increases over time, most people believe that it is because they were not well-educated. I strongly agree with this argument, and this essay will explain why.

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These days, too many people maintain their health by relyin doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lif To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There is no denying the fact that our health is very precious. Therefore, we should stick to it and deal with it wisely. While it is a commonly held belief that they should depend on specialists to maintain their physical fitness. There is also an argument that opposes it. This essay will discuss this topic, followed by my opinion.

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Science and research is increasingly funded by private companies rather than governments. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many private firms are increasingly participating in funding and conducting scientific research, as compared to the traditional ways of governments alone involved in it. While this development presents some threats, there are many advantages associated with it.

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Natural resources such as oil, forests and freshwater are being consumed at an alarming rate all around the world. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?

There is no denying the fact that natural resources are precious elements. Therefore, the public should deal with them wisely. In recent decades, many people in various countries, especially those who live in natural lands, have been misusing their resources. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind this trend, followed by some solutions.

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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?

In recent years, small local shops have struggled to compete with large supermarkets and online retailers. This leads to declining numbers of small bussinesses which affect local communities. However, there are some practical solutions that can be done to tackle these issues.

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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the two graphs below.

The two pie charts illustrate the highest level of education attained by women in Someland in 1945 and 1995.

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Some people decided to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?

It is becoming increasingly common for people to begin their own business without any working experience in a company. Although there are many people who set up their business without working for other companies , but to achieve success in their business.I discuss the side of pros and cons as well as my conclusion.

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Old buildings should be preserved because they reflect a country’s history. Others believe they should be demolished to make room for modern housing developments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, there has been a rising concern regarding the importance of preservation of historical buildings. Although some people argue that they need to be safeguarded as they represent the tradition of one’s land, others believe that they should be demolished to adopt contemproray changes in housing development. This essay will discuss both these views in detail before presenting my view on it.

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Some people think that university education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Higher education is important nowadays. The benefits not only enrich insight to make better problem-solving but also to get good working places. While most people think that higher education should be free, I disagree with this idea. This essay will explain why it is hard for the government to allocate the budget and lower alumni quality.

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Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

Nowadays, modern technology is very prevalent in most workplaces. I believe this has changed the working method and makes it faster. There are drawbacks to heavily depending on it, which are that workers don't gain experiences and do not improve. The digital tools and AI applications enhance the way of working and that has become faster. This technology can do many tasks and give good results in just a few minutes, such as data collection, data analysis, and preparing outcome reports from that data in different forms. Compared to human workers, they will need more than months to finish that task properly. For example, in my country, after the introduction of the technological process in Universities, it helps lecturers and allows them to perform accurately and quickly in many fields. One of the disadvantages of relying on technology is that employees do not gain experiences. This means that if workers do a lot of work by themselves without using that technology, they will gain mor...

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