IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people argue that individuals should take responsibility for their own health and wellbeing, while others believe it's the government's duty to provide healthcare services to everyone in society. Discuss both these views and provide your own opinion. Support your answer with relevant examples and explanations?

Many individuals have different opinions about whether people should take care of their own health or it is the ultimate duty of the official authorities to provide healthcare services for the betterment of the society. In this essay, I will discuss both views, and present my own opinion, because I believe that the government, and individuals should contribute mutually to ensure the well-being of citizens.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

In modern society, it is not strange for people living in big cities to know nothing about their neighbors in terms of such as their family combination, marital status, employment situation even who they are. This essay will pose the potential risks this phenomenon may arise and give some related suggestions.

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Social media is a good thing for modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In today's increasingly westernizing world, social media has become a widely used resource in almost all fields. Although online platforms have become immensely popular for sharing individual talent, skills, communication, and entertainment, their usage also has some drawbacks.

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advanatages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays, in some cultures, children are told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. This message has some advantages and disadvantages for children.

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Paying all workers the same salary in a company promotes harmony and respect amongst colleagues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Having the same salary for all workers in a company seems like a better way to help colleagues practice peace and respect. Personally, I do not agree with this idea; on the contrary, it will lead to more serious issues within a association.

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The qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people might argue that the university education system does not make a successful person nowadays, for example, universities do not teach how to start from the bottom. I largely agree with this statement because there are skills universities do not teach, which I have had to learn on my own.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

On the other hand, in my opinion, soft measures are more effective in preventing accidents because they address the causes of unsafe driving. Education campaigns can help drivers to understand the real consequences of speeding or using mobile phones while driving, encouraging them to develop responsible habits rather than simply obeying rules because of fear. In addition, governments can enhance road safety by investing in safer infrastructure, including better street lighting, clearly marked pedestrian crossing and well-designed roads. For example, a young or inexperienced driver may avoid an accident not because they are afraid of a fine, but because they have received proper training on how react in hazardous situations. Besides that, safer road design can also prevent collisions even when car users make unintentional mistakes. These measures are particularly valuable, given that they reduce car accidents before any offence occurs.

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In numerous nations, there is a growing trend for individuals to frequently discuss financial matters, such as their earnings or expenditures, in everyday conversation. What are the reasons behind this phenomenon? Is it advantageous or detrimental?

In today's time, discussing personal finances including their income or expenses in the regular life has become increasingly common in everyday conversations in many nations. This is mainly due to inflation along people wanting to be aware with finances and needing a practical advise. In fact, I believe it is benefical for two main reasons.

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In some societies, censorship is used to maintain national security and cultural values. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

One of the most debated issues in recent years is whether government censorship is necessary to protect public security and cultural values. Some people argue that it is important to introduce strict censorship for nations, given that governments have a responsibility to protect citizens from potential risks, such as identity theft and misuse of private data. However, I hold that excessive censorship can undermine freedom of expression, restricting not only people's behaviour but also their ability to express their views.

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Nowadays a few people take their family with them abroad whenever they got on a business trip. Is it a positive or negative in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

Nowadays, the trend of bringing family members on business trips is declining drastically. Even though it is proven that humans work with lower stress levels if their family is with them. I firmly believe it is a postive approach. I Iam going to discuss the factors and state my point of view in detail.

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According to those in travel business, the nature of every native holiday in changing. Rather than have a relaxing break, people want to challenge themselves to do adventure on their holidays. Do you agree or disagree

People involved in the tourism industry are changing their view about the type of enjoyment, the tourists were having in the past. These days, more people on their holidays tends to be more adventurous, as compared to the old times, but still there is a chunk of society, where they still spend their absence from work in the classical way. I agree with this viewpoint, and will elaborate on my views in the upcoming essay.

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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

In today’s world, urbanisation and industrial development is increasing. Consequently, deforestation is being done in order to provide more space for this development. All this is disrupting the natural habitats of animals, which is forcing them towards the edge of the extinction. In this essay, I will discuss about the importance of conserving animals and some ways to tackle this problem in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Thể have been many inventions in human history (e.g the wheel) some people think the most important thing is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Throughout history, there have been some remarkable inventions that have changed dramatically the course of human life. Some individuals argue that the internet is the most significant one. I strongly agree with this point of view, as it was the prelude of other creations that came afterwards.

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Some people believe that student should do part time job, whereas other believe that they should focus only on studies. Discuss both the points.

While some argue that students ought to have a part time job during their studies, others believe that their education should be the main focus. Working part time can teach students responsibility, time management and communication skills, however long working hours can leave students tired and reduce the time available for homework and revision.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health, while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is often argued by many that fitness training is the main benefit of having a healthy lifestyle, while others believe a balanced diet routine is. I acknowledge that exercising is a healthy routine; however, I slightly view that having a balanced diet will have a better impact on people because it provides nutrients, which is necessary for our lives.

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Vandalism is a growing problem in many societies. What problems does vandalism cause, and what can be done to reduce it?

Vandalism is a growing problem with significant negative effects on society. This problem cannot be ignored and requires urgent attention. Vandalism targeting both public and private property is a social reality with particularly harmful consequences. Deliberate damage or destruction of public facilities, from bus shelters to sports facilities, immediately affects citizens' daily lives. Repairs are costly for the state, taxpayers and those paying for individual damage. Most harmful, though, is the sense of insecurity and helplessness citizens feel.

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this problem? What actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Nowadays, a substantial proportion of traffic congestion has grown over the years in urban areas, while there are numerous recommendations to find efficient solutions. This problem is mainly caused by owning a private car for each person, but it can be addressed through adding new traffic rules by the authorities.

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Some people believe that sports competitions are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore, youth should be banned from participating in sports competitions. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, sport competitions are a worth-watching kind of entertainment, and it has immense effect on adolescenses. However, many discussed that sport competitions can have negative effects on teenagers’ emotional health. As a result, sport competitions should not be attend by teenagers. I strongly disagree with this point, and this paragraph will explain my opinion.

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The plans show a student common room from five years ago and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

These two maps depict different layouts of the same common room over a period of five years.

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Some people believe that students should be allowed to choose the subjects they study at school, while others think that schools should decide which subjects students must take. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that students should be able to choose the subjects they want to study at school, while others believe that schools should make these decisions for the students. I strongly agree with allowing children to decide the subjects they are interested in because it can help them understand what their true passions are and learning the topics they enjoy will be less stressful.

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