IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Young children should be punished in the same way as adults if they commit a serious crime (such as a violent attack or a robbery). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are arguments about whether young culprits should be punished the same way as adult criminals because there are several serious cases committed by minors. Personally, I generally disagree that they deserve identical punishment since young children do not have same level of maturity and equal judgement like adults. However, some exceptions of older minors who have full awareness of their actions and consequences, should be considered as well.

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More and more people are using online language translation applications. Are there more advantages or disadvantages of such services?

Nowadays, more and more people are using online language translation applications. While these applications offer several benefits, I believe their disadvantages outweigh their advantages.

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some people think that city is the best place to live while other prefer to live in the countryside. discuss both view and give your opinion

There are two different believes among people about either city or countryside is the best place to live. In my opinion, both have advantages and disadvantages in terms of location, weather, and occupational opportunity. Nevertheless, I think that living in the city provides many more conveniences and approaches to better-paid jobs.

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People think that the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the government should make the fuel less affordable for cars and other vehicles to solve the environmental issues. Personally, I agree with this idea because not only the higher fuel price could encourage people to switch to public transport, bikes or even walking but also it could push the large companies to use electric cars and cleaner technology.

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It is better for students to live away from home while studying at university than to live with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many college students choose to live in university accommodation, or share flats with friends. In my opinion, it shows that they have reached adulthood, although they find it difficult to keep in touch with their parents every day.One benefit of leaving home to live alone is that young people can develop independence. They are able to learn some life skills, such as doing housework, financial management and handling relationship issues with roommates. With those skills, they find it easier to deal with work. For example, they are able to get everything well organised, if they have the habit of keeping rooms tidy.In addition, it is possible for university students to enjoy more freedom in society, and make more friends. They do not need to go home every day, so they have adequate time for different activities. They can go to the gym with other students, go to lectures, finish assignments in the library, and even do part-time jobs together. In addition to improving social skills, they...

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people’s lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The way many of us are dressed today is believed to be affected by the fashion industry. The reason why it is so important for some people to choose their clothes according to the trends may be in our dependence on what is popular at the moment which is a double-edged sword. Of course, trying to keep up with modern fads consumes pretty much time and energy, but is it really that negative in terms of maintaining individuality? To my mind, it is not.

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Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it a positive development while others think it is negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion

According to researchers, digital items such as computers will become more brilliant compared to community. However, some people think there are many advantages, while others believe that there are several demerits. My explanation will be discussed further with examples.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The success of individuals in sports can be attributed to physical and mental strength, amongst other factors. Some people are consider physical strength to matter more than mental strength and vice-versa. i believe physical sttrength to be important with mental agility being just as important as the former.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, many small local shops are closing as more and more people tend to do shopping from large shopping centers and malls. In my opinion, it is an negative development because it increases unemployment and some customers may still wish to buy from local markets.

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Some people say that giving a smaller amount of money weekly to children will help them become more capable as they grow older. Do you agree or disagree?

In some communities, parents believe that handling their children a low cost of money per week will help them become more capable when they grow up. I agree at this point because it’s an effective way to teach the teenagers how to spend money in the correct way and save a budget for investment.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that children should be encouraged to do team activity in their free time, while others argue that it is essiential that they learn to keep themselves busy on their own. This essay will state that while giving children freedom to choose their own leisure activity is important, group tasks teaches them social skills.

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Some people say that the fashion industry is bad for the environment, as it encourages consumers to buy new clothes all the time. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the contemporary society, it is common for people to believe that the fashion industry is bad for the environment as it encourages consumers to buy new clothes all the time. Such viewpoints can influence how people regard fashion and even change their lifestyle. As far as I’m concerned, I fully endorse this opinion.

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University students always focus on one specialist subject, but some people think universities should encourage their students to study a range of subjects in addition to their own subject. To what extent do you agree

It is often debated that university students to focus on core subjects or to focus on broder subjects for well rounded knowledge. I agree with the latter proposition and this essay will elucidate the resaon for my support.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people compete with others to enter the university or work in companies. Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing, while others believe that trying to cooperate more, rather than competing is better for living. Although both opinions are right, however I think that we need to compete with others in order to develop ourselves.

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`Ownership of mobile phones has risen dramatically in recent years despite the potentially harmful effects they may have on our health and on society. Governments should introduce measures to restrict ownership of mobile phones to those who need them for their work.` `To what extent do you agree or disagree?`

The use of mobile phones has grown rapidly across the world, raising concerns about their possible impact on people's health and social life. Whether legal restrictions are needed , has been widely debated for a couple of years. Some people suggest that governments should control ownership and allow phone usage only for work. In my opinion, this proposal is too extreme, and I completely disagree with it.

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Some people think the best option is to accept a difficult situation, such as having a job they do not enjoy or not having enough money. Others believe it is better to try to make such situations better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued by some people that, the way to handle difficult situation that can be having a career without enough salary or unsatisfying work, is acceptance, while others think that people who are in trouble, should try to improve that issue until it becomes better. From my perspective, people try to do their best to get what they want.

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Today, the high of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

It is a common perception among people that, group study is more beneficial for students than self study. I strongly agree with the view that, independent study is more beneficial for learners to concentrate and achieve a certain objective.

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Some people believe that sport competitions are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore, youth should be banned from participating in sport competitions. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, sport activities are an integral part in the growth of young people; nevertheless, when sport become competitive, it could brings stress and anxiety, and that is the main reason why some people think it should not be competitive for people under a certain age.

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In some countries, Many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In various nations, an increasing number of people prefer to live in solitude. This is primarily due to a desire for independence, and I believe this tendency has more harm than its benefits.

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