IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or a negative development? In this essay, do I have to first discuss positive developments and then negative developments and the give my opinion?

Nowadays, children in many countries have more freedom compared to the past. While this development has some disadvantages, personally, I believe that the overall benefits of giving children freedom outweigh its drawbacks.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

In many parts of the world, some rare species are almost at verge of extinction and other animals are almost at same risk. This essay will examine the key problems assosicated with this trend and propose practical solutions.

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Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is targeting children, and it should be banned because of its negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, a majority of adverts are catering to children and this should result in a ban because of its negative effects. Although advertising can be beneficial in some cases, overall I strongly believe it does more harm than good.

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When designing city landscapes, is it more beneficial to prioritize the conservation of historical architecture or to favor the development of modern, functional structures?

Whether cities preserve its historic buildings or demolish them for making places for modern city structures is a topic for considerable debate. I personally believe that maintaining old structures is more beneficial as they carry cultural value and can bring economic advantages.

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Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Currently, many of the world's cities have been experiencing a serious housing stortage situation, where the number of people are more than available accommodation. This essay is discussed about the possible two reasons for this situation, which are a high rate of immigration and real estate investment.

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In many parts of the world today, there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people skin. Outline the reason for using such products, and discuss what effect they have in term of health and Society?

Nowadays, in today's era, people are using various cosmetic products which easily change their skin tone and make their skin lighter than ever. One of the main reasons is advertisement and social media and the other is maintaining higher status in society. Using these products on regular basis cause the skin damage and reinforce colorism in society.

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In many countries, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in the summer holidays. What is the value of long school holidays? What are the arguments in favour of shorter school holidays?

It is absolutely true that both schools for older students and younger students have two months or more than the summer vacation. However, in this crucial decision, there are both merits as well as demerits. This essay will discuss them in detail with a summary.

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the amount of time spend on sports and exercise should be increased in schools in order to tackle the problem of overweight childer ? do you think this the best way to deal with the problem? what other solutions can you suggest

Sports play an indispensable role in everyone's life. Some individuals believe that schools should prioritize exercise and sports sector in their school curriculum to reduce the problem of obese children. I think spending more time on physical activities is not an ideal solution. Adopting a healthy lifestyle, ban on ready made meals, and limit their screening time will definitely help to make them fit and healthier.

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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?

In many countries , affordable health care are subject of growing concern. Due to costly medicines, people die in poor countries, just because medicines are not cheap. While some companies opt to keep their medicine costs as low as possible to make it affordable for everyone, other companies keep the prices very high for their critical medicines. Personally, I believe drug companies should keep their products available at low cost.

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In many countries more and more people are hiring a personal trainer rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes what are the reasons for this? is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays,many individuals are hiring a fitness trainer instead of doing sports or going to exercise classes. The prime reason for this is that every famous celebrity has a trainer. In my opinion, it is a positive development because instructors encourage them remain focused on their goals.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all time. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Wearing uniforms is necessary in some workplaces, while others allow their employees to wear casuals. Former situation has some merits and demerits which will be discussed in the upcoming pagraphs along with illustrations followed by a logical conclusion.

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In recent years, many people have adopted a minimalist lifestyle, choosing to own only essential possessions. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this way of living? (

In recent years, many people have chosen to live a minimalist lifestyle, owning less essential items and possessions. This way of living has both advantages and disadvantages. So today I will be talking about minimalism's advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people think that students should study subjects based on their interests, while others believe they should focus on subjects that are useful for future jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

On the one hand, a large number of people argue that learners should start learning only subjects that will assist them in their education careers. On the other hand, others consider that students should study whatever subject they like. I will discuss both views and give my opinion in this essay.

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1.Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

The notion that E-books and modern technology will take over the reading space and make the tranditional medium of newspaper and magazines obsolete is certainly not new and heavily debated on. I, personally believe that as the world progresses forward, there shall exist plethora of vastly more sophisticated and advanced technologies that shall totally replace all current forms of semantic information consumption.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether medical treatment should be available to everyone has sparked considerable debate in recent years. There could be many political and historical reasons why this has or has not been introduced in each particular country yet. And, I totally agree that it should become a worldwide practice to provide free of charge health support for everyone despite any possible drawbacks. And I have few reasons to think so.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Children may significantly shape the world of the future. Several individuals believe that parents must teach their children how to be influential members of the community. In contrast, other people suppose that school is the finest choice for learning this. While school might considerably enhance children's learning of how to be good members of society through tasks, parents may become role models in their children's lives, teaching them without lessons.

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Many employers find that their new employees lack sufficient interpersonal skills such as lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes? Can you suggest some possible solutions.

The majority of executives encounter so many problems related to their workers’ collaboration. The reason why they do not interact with their co-workers because most of them are shy or even introverted. To cope with this problem, employers should encourage workers to work together in one field of work.

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Everyone should be encouraged to use fewer resources rather than recycle more. To what extend do you agree with this statement?

In recent years, the question of rater people should use less resources rather than recycling more has gained considarable attention. And while both of this opinions hold merit, I contend that using less is more important than reuse more.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree

It is predicted that the increasing growth of online retail activity will lead to the closure of shops in urban areas.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is predicted that an increasing number of people will choose to spend holiday in their home country instead of travelling abroad.

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