IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

By technology advancement, some youngsters have developed a dependence on digital devices. Because of convenience and entertainment, they gradually get used to spending hours on their phones. In this essay, I will discuss this issue and explain why I believe it is a positive development.

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Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child‘s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is widely believed that while parents play a notable role in nurturing their child's psychological development, external exposure such as media and friendship might be played a majority of the role due to the significant time spent during the children's growth. As the both opposing views are agreed and disagreed by many, these two sides of the argument will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in this essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

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Children should take part time job in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

I believe that children should take part time jobs in their free time, only if they can also focus on their studies. My opinion is based in the many benefits that a child can get by learning new skills at their work, but I know it is not always good and there have to be some kinds of limitations for them.

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Many people think technological devices such as smart phones, tabkets and mobil phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what exteend do you agree or disagree

Technology nowdays such as mobile phones and tablets have an enourmous impact on society and matters of communications. In my opinion, it has had both an positive as well as negative contribution on how we communicate and reach for others. This is why this essay will explore its advantages and disadvantages.

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Many people today spend most of their free time watching TV series or movies instead of going out. Do you think this is right or wrong?

A plethora of individuals nowadays most of their spare time watching TV series or movies instead of spending time outside. In my opinion, I believe that is wrong. However, I will discuss this further.

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Detailed descriptions of crimes in newspapers and TV can have dire consequences on society, so this kind of information should be restricted in media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Detailed descriptions of crimes in newspapers and on TV can have serious consequences for society, so this type of information should be restricted in the media. I agree with this viewpoint, as excessive coverage of criminal behavior can negatively impact the mental health of news consumers.

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Global warming is not caused by human activity. Changes in average temperatures throughout all climate zones are a normal phenomenon. Therefore, countries need not take any actions to combat global warming that would negatively impact their economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people might have a notion that global warming is not merely affected by human, rather it could be developed by a natural occuring of the earth temperature changes. I am completely against to the statement since I believe that the issue of this shifting temperature is majorly caused by the people.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, prefer to take risk and think that change is a positive thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is sometimes argued that some people have a tendency to maintain status quo, while on the other end, there are those who are not afraid to take risks and see vertue in it. While these views are vastly different, they are both valid on an individualistic and collective level and are essential for human societies to thrive and simultaneouley keep their integrity.

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Some people believe that children should be able to choose what to study in school from early on. Other people think most of education should be guided and be based on what is useful, regardless of a child’s preferences.

There are different points of view on how youngsters should choose their primary study path. While some believe that it is fundamental to decide on the objects of study from the outset, others claim that every choice should be made with future usefulness in mind, without considering child’s desires. In my opinion, although it is difficult to understand individuals’ inclinations at an early stage, it is fundamental guided them through the decision-making process while also takin children’s preferences into account.

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Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others consider they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions.

Some people argue that including sports in school is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that it plays an essential role in student’s overall developments. Both sides have their own opinions, and this essay will discuss them before giving a conclusion.

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In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

There are countries where it is usual to have the first child at an older age. In this essay, the reasons in terms of attitude towards marriage at older ages and financial problems and advantages including enjoying early life and disadvantages including health complications will be explored.

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Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

The trend of introducing laws to restrict working hours for workers has gradually spread over some countries. That is because the large amount of working time causes some negative effects for employees, such as mental health issues, a decrease in the quality of working and accelerating exploitation from employers. I believe that this trend are a positive development because it ensures to provide workers with a stable and healthy life.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Umar

There is a possibility of scientific researchers and travelers to have access to natural locations. Increased ecotourism to those new environments, for instance, traveling to the South Pole, is an advantage for the local people as it may benefit the overall economy and promote natural conservation. On the contrary, these so-called "sustainable tourism" may bring detrimental disadvantages by creating non-eco-friendly accommodations and cause a huge loss for the biodiversity of the tourist attraction.

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With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree? Angsa

Some argued that untouched areas should be investigated to fulfill the growing demand for fossil fuels. Although the oil and gas extraction could help to meet the need, it also causes a detrimental impact on the environment. I completely disagree with this statement for several reasons, which are explained further with suitable explanations and examples.

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a job, others believe that it would be better to gain experience first. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that possessing a higher degree education is the best way to get a good job. Meanwhile, others think skills and experience are more essential. My opinion is higher level of education, mastering skills, and having experiences are equally important to get a job owing to the job’s nature.

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Nowadays, more and more people are moving from the countryside to cities, which are becoming overcrowded. What are the reasons for this movement to cities and what are the effects?

Urbanisation has become a major global trend, with a growing number of people relocating from countryside areas to cities. This essay will show the main reasons behind this migration and examine its significant effects on both cities and villages regions.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should work which country they got their training, while the others believe they should be free to choose which country they want to work. Both views have own valid reasons and this essay discuss about each of them before expressing my own opinion.

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More and more people are buying a wide range of household goods. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

A growing number of individuals tend to purchase plenty of household goods. Although this matter both has merits and demerits, I hold a strong belief that it is more beneficial.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work? Do you agree Or disagree

A growing number of artists today tend to have low income, and plenty of individuals believe that the government should fund money for artists to continue their work. Although it both has benefits and drawbacks, I strongly disagree with this issue.

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With the increase of digital media available online the role of the library has become obsolete University should provide digital material rather than textbooks Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view

In the era of technology, online availability of books has increased around the world which somehow takes over the role of a traditional library. It is also argued that in institutions, internet books should replace hardcopies which has its own pros and cons but everything will unfold as we move along in the essay.

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