IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that the intemet is increasing the gap between the rich and poor, while others argue that it helps to reduce this gap. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The internet has sparked a debate about whether it is widening or narrowing the gap between the rich and poor. Some argue that the internet is increasing inequality, while others believe it helps to reduce it.

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There are fewer and fewer differences between countries. People around the world may watch the same kinds of TV series, buy goods of same brands, and follow the same trends. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.

Nowadays, the mobile phone and the Internet, groundbreaking advancements, have become the most essential part in modern life. The differences between countries are getting lower through the transparent information with social media platforms. In this essay, I will elaborate pros and cons of this topic with examples down below.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the samepark today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two current maps illustrate the prior plan of Grange Park in 1920 and how it has changed up until now.

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Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 what are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

Adhering to driving rules is important for one's safety and to maintain driving discipline. Some people believe that re-examining the driving skills after every 5 years should be mandatory.This essay will analyze the positive aspects such as reassuring the driving rules by individuals and negative impacts on people who are in driving work which will delay their earnings.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is said that the future of any nation is decided by it's youth. Education is one of the most important factors of their growth. Some individuals believe that, from kindergarten to universities more priority is given to learning theories instead of teaching students ways to conquer the real world. Henceforth are the reason why I agree with the statement.

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Surveillance cameras in banks, offices, shops, and streets have been very successful in reducing crime in the workplace and the public, but they are also used for the users to spy on people's private business. What problems do surveillance cameras create? What are the solutions?

Surveillance cameras in banks, offices, shops, and streets have been very successful in reducing crime in the workplace and the public, but they are also used for the users to spy on people's private business. What problems do surveillance cameras create? What are the solutions?

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Many people believe that the gap between rich and poor are widening. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap?

The financial crisis of one’s lifestyle depicts their range of amenities they possess and are exposed to. A lot of individuals opine that income equality is on the rise. This essay will discuss the problems associated with this phenomena and some solutions to tackle them.

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Today many people work until a later age. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, it is popular to retire very late. Consequently, many people argue whether it is beneficial or not. In this essay, I will elaborate on this subject and present pros and cons of this phenomenon. Moreover, I will share why I believe it is positive for people who can do so and indicate my experiences.

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Prevention is better than cure – researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that preventing diseases and their spread is more sensible and economical than curing them, and is, therefore, should be subsidized more. Athough I agree with that statement, I believe treating should not be disregarded due to several reasons.

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People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable but traditional values & customs have been lost & this is a pity. To what extend do you agree.

In this contemporary epoch, people often leave no stone unturned to achieve everything they desire in their lives. However, it is argued that although this trend has made people lives easier,it has vanished ethics and values of their cultures. I agree with this conviction, as people are forgetting the importance of traditions in the race of reaching their goals in this relentless competition.

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Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future careers. Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

According to some people the best way for students to prepare for their future career is through colleges and universities whilst some believe that students should leave schools as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Universities and collages often provide access to resources such as libraires, laboratories and experienced faculty for students to have a deeper understanding of their chosen field. Moreover, the formal education also provides a well-rounded academic foundation, which can be essential for some professions. On the other hand, dropping out of schools enables students to avail the oppourtunity to gain practical experience in their chosen field allowing them to start to earn a decent income at a young age. In addition to this, students can make more informed judgements as real-world experience helps individuals to understand their career goals better as they are exposed to actual working conditions and industries demands.

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In many countries, sports stars earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that sports stars earn too much money, while others claim that they deserve their high salaries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many parts of the world, sports are very popular which makes the sportspersons earn fat salaries. While one section of society believes they rightfully deserve this money, other section of society believes they are being overpaid. I will discuss both viewpoints with their merits and dismerits.

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Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, there have been many cases where teenagers committed a grave crime and some individuals think that they have to be as penalised as adults. This essay will consider both situations before answering the question.

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In many countries, the amount of rubbish produced is increasing, what do you think are the causes of this, and what can be done to solve the problem?

It is concerning that some countries have produced a large number of waste which has risen significantly. This essay will outline the reasons behind this issue and suggest possible solutions.

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Some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives, and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?

In many countries, the population is ageing, meaning that more people are living longer lives. This change has sparked a debate about whether it creates problems for governments or if there are benefits to having more elderly people.This essay will discuss both of views.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experiences and developing soft skill is more important. Discuss both view and give ur opinion

Some people consider that it is better to graduate from a college in order to get an occupation. Whereas others believe that gaining experiences and learning new ability is more vital. I will discuss both perspectives and provide opinion.

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Many people believe that modern inventions have brought more problems than benefits. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer, and required examples.

I want to begin by defining what modern inventions are, modern inventions are basically technological advancements made by scientist and proffesionals in different fields and areas of specialization, which has either improved upon a previously existent concept or invented something completly new.

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Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often? Wtite in about 250 words.

There is an ever-increasing use of technology such as smartphones, and the net which introduced some crucial changes globally. However, the senior citizens find difficulties in using them. It is discussed that the old can make use of them to monitor their health and keep in touch with relationships whilst their awareness about technology is raised to encourage them to use smart electronic devices.

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Line Graph Question: Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values) ] Line Graph - Acid in mouth from consumption of sugar and honey

The line graph illustrates the consumption of sweeteners and how the pH level of the oral cavity changes over time after consuming these. A pH below 5.5 increases the chance of tooth decay.

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best for both the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people believe it's better to get married before the age of 30. There are a lot of factors that can provide for society and for the couple itself. In this essay, I will explain and tackle this situation.

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