IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that parents should be the main educators of their children, while others argue that schools play a more important role. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Both parents and schools play important roles in children's development, while some believe that parents are the main educators to their children, others argue that schools play a more critical role. In my opinion, both parents and schools are equally important in nurturing kids.

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In today's busy world, maintaining a good work-life balance has become increasingly difficult for many people. What are the main reasons for this problem? What solutions can help people achieve a better work-life balance?

Nowadays, for planty of professions it can be hard to keep a work-life balance. Although the reason for this is quite global, ranging from an increase in consumption to a lack of specialists, it depends on the person if he or she can handle this task. This essay will explain possible reasons for getting worse work conditions, specifically in veterinary medicine, and try to suggest a solution.

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Being a celebrity, such as a famous film star or sports personality, brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

It is true that being a famous personality, like being a popular film icon or a sports star comes with both benefits as well as challenges. However,

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The escalation of environmental problems has garnered considerable attention in recent years. While the first group people believes that extinction of some species of animals and plants is a burning environmental issue, the second group thinks that there are other factors that have more detrimental impact on the nature. From my point of view, the extinction is a serious issue, however there are problems, such as global warming, that demand far more attention in their resolving.

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It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Because some criminals have a low level of education, some people argue that the best choice for criminals is to attain education in prison, so that this way can help criminals to obtain career opportunities when they leave prison. From my perspective, I agree with this statement, as education is significant for individuals.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Some people prefer to work in only one company for the entire their life. However, I agree with those who believe that working in different organisations is more beneficial, which I will explain in this essay.

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In recent years many countries have restricted where smoking is allowed. For example, smoking is often banned in restaurants. Some people believe that smoking should be allowed everywhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, the introduction of smoking bans in public places such as restaurants, hospitals, and public transport has sparked debate. While some argue that individuals should have the freedom to smoke wherever they choose, I strongly disagree with this view. I believe that restricting smoking in public areas is both necessary and beneficial for public health, environmental cleanliness, and social well-being.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Many people live near their hometown for most of their lives. The main reason for this is that they are familiar with the city, and one of the advantages is staying around their loved ones, and the main drawback is wasting opportunities.

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Students should have a part-time job to help pay for their education while attending college. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people feel that during college, students should work in part-timetime jobs to cover the education expenses. In my opinion, college students can greatly benefit from holding a part-timetime job because they can learn to handle their finances and organise their time efficiently. This essay will discuss why it is important for students to hold a part-time job during their college time.

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It is better for people to have a fixed work schedule than to have a flexible one. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been observed that recently more and more people are adopting a flexible work schedule. While some people think it is better to work with one's pace and at one's own choice of working place, others think it is better to follow a fixed work schedule, as it ensures a more reliable output.

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more and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Cities are often seen as places full of opportunities, but there are also some major

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some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individual & society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Educational institutions are where people start learning and identify a specific talent in themselves. As per this notion, some studies show that studying in universities assists graduates to achieve their desired employment. However, other says it has positive points for both students and the community.

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Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phones while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people argue that kids who have not reached the sixth grade should not allowed to use cell phones. Whilst I completely disagree with this statement because in my opinion, phone devices are very essential and useful tools these days. This essay will discuss why it is important to primit kids to have mobile phones.

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Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Access to clean water is unquestionably one of the most fundamental needs for human survival and well-being. Given this, I strongly agree that every home should have a water supply provided free of charge. There are several compelling reasons supporting this view.

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Some people say that the bicycle is a good means of transport. Others say that the bicycle has many disadvantages. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In today's world of modernity, most of the people commute by their own vehicles such as cars while some believe that the bicycle is a best means of transportation. While commuting by the bicycle has both worthwhile and disadvantageous causes, I believe that it is convenient only for short routes but not for longer ones.

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Should university education be free for everyone? What is your opinion on this?

The debate over whether university education should be free for everyone is a contentious issue. Some argue that free education promotes equality and accessibility, while others believe that it places a financial burden on governments. In my opinion, university education should be free for all students and this essay will elucidate the reasons for justifying my opinion.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might no be happy to give up using cash?

In the upcoming years, paying by cash may be no longer an available choice. Most payment may be restricted by MasterCard or mobile phones. In my opinion, this will not appear since old people prefer cash, and many other people wouldn't be satisfied giving up their cash because it's safer than other methods.

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Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that governments should strictly control the use of fresh water as it is a limited source. discuss both views and give your opinion.

On the one hand, people who live in residential areas believe that they can consume fresh water as much as they want, because they consider it a clear residential right. Governments should provide them with infinite fresh water. There are some rules that must be considered in which fresh water is not only for citizen consumption, but also for improving hygiene. If all water resources allocated to residential areas, hospitals and drug producer companies, which are two important factors in public health, do not have access to fresh water to do their duties to increase public hygiene.

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Moving in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems. do you agree or disagree

It is often believed that emigration to a foreign-speaking country has some challenges , and most people believe it can cause societal issues. In my opinion, moving to a new country is a drastic change in one's life , and finally, it can cause so many hardships , not only individually but also socially.

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In achieving personal happiness, our relationships with family, friends and colleagues are more important than work and wealth. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There has been an ongoing debate, whether the relationships and family is important to achieve the state of happiness, or is it money that influences it more. I believe that, both family and money holds their own importance in a person's life, however, the former outweighs the latter, which I will explain further in this essay.

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