IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that children should start primary school later in life, others say that they should start it before 7 . Discuss both views, giving your own opinion.

These days, the Majority of people want to send their kids to school before they turn 7 years old, While others argue that it is too early for them to engage in the education system. In my opinion, kids need to start their studying schedule before they turn 7. In the following essay, I will discuss both arguments with relevant examples.

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some people feel that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the country side. discuss both sides and give your opinion

It is often said that it is better to live in an urban city than in the rural area. This essay will discuss both views and I will give my own opinion.

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An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their better halves. Do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good?

Academic pressure has been widely discussed recently, especially among people aged 11- 16. Some people think that it is due to the condensed curriculum content, so they suggest canceling the courses that have no academic content, giving students more time to concentrate on their studies. In this essay, I will explain why I disagree with this statement.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweight the disadvantages?

At the present time, In some countries the number of young population is larger than the number of older people. However, not all the effects of this situation have been positive, although there are certainly some advantages. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a young population.

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Some people feel that it is difficult to do a public speech or presentation. Therefore, it is a good idea for children to learn to do speeches as early as possible. What is the importance of public speech in life? Do you agree or disagree that children should be taught public speaking skill at school?

Many people think that it is hard to do speech and presentation in front of the audiences. That is why many parents feel to make their children learn to do speeches as soon as possible. The writer thinks in this current era, public speech is one of importance skills to survive in work places. The writer absolutely agrees that this skill should be taught at school. Therefore, this essay will elaborate the advantages of learning public speech in early ages, such as enhance the kid's confidence level and helping them to promote themselves (personal branding).

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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think that the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that children should be punished due to committing crimes, while there are some opposite opinions that parents need to be penalised instead.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? (Ulvi)

It is argued that the amount of the waste which is reproduced is not enough. Some people consider that the only way to solve this issue is creating laws by governments. This essay agrees with this statement for different reasons, such as making people more responsible and leading people who feel uncomfortable recycling to do it.

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Social media sites have allowed individuals to connect with each other, share their experiences, and express their opinions. However, possible employers can also access these pages when making a hiring decision. Do you think information shared on a social media site should be taken into account when hiring people?

Nowadays people can easily express and leave their thoughts, comments, or experiences on a social media site, which allows possible employers to access to the records left by the candidates. This article totally disagrees with an idea that information shared on a social media site should be considered when hiring employees.

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Some people believe (that) it is the good teamwork that makes companies successful. Others say that it is more important for companies to have good leaders. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people argue that successful companies rely on strong teamwork, while others claim that good leadership is the key to success. In my opinion, although both are essential, good leadership is slightly more important because it provides vision and guidance for the entire business.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely on computers so much?

In today's world, computer-based technology is playing a significant role in our daily lives than ever before. Although it brings many disadvantages to people's skills, but it is the best way to increase the social development.

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Some people think that employers should prioritize hiring people with work experience, while others believe that formal education is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent days, there is a dispute whether employers should prioritize hiring people with work experience or with higher and relevant formal education. This essay will try to examine both views concerning the question topic.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams illustrate the current layout of the Southwest Airport and the proposed redevelopment plan for the upcoming year.

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Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?

The increasing price of basic needs for people to survive affects the competition between job seekers in work fields. Although many companies have opened wide job opportunities, elderly people should compete with the young to get a job in the same field. This situation gives a massive ramification for the older due to the strict competition of skills that the younger have. Therefore, the government should require the corporations to change one of their requirements in order to solve the problem.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.

In some countries, beauty products have become more popular since their target market has increased. Although those products can help people to get bright skin as well as repair their skin problem, I believe there are severe consequences of using bad products.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying are alternative medicines anf treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In this current era, many people choose alternative medicines and treatments to cure their illness instead of going to the doctor or hospital. The writer thinks it is a positive development for the patients since they will have many choices to heal their sickness. The essay will elaborate the alternative treatments that people choose recently and how the combination of treatments will help people.

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1. In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Population in the rural areas has been decreasing drastically this is because nowadays in many nations individuals are migrating to cities for better lifestyles. I believe this could be an adverse impact as it is over crowding the metropolis.

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These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

With the advent of technology, our lives have grown more comfortable. One such invention is the online platform for shopping, which majority of population prefers over in-store shopping. This preference can be attributed to the convenience that virtual shopping allows, yet people who are not keen on this method tend to find it unsatisfactory sometimes. This essay will delve deeper into both of these aspects of buying commodities online.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opionion.

It is argued that some think that it is mandatory for tourists to respect and behave as well as citizens, while others consider that destination regions should allow individuals who do not live over there to have freedom. Although it will be beneficial for nations to be open to other cultures, visitors should adapt themselves to the countries they visit.

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at the present time, the population of some countries includes a relativel large number of young adults, compared with the numbers of older people. do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in many countries, the proportion of young adults is higher than the proportion of elderly people. This situation has its pros and cons, it can increase creativity in the work sector. However, it also means that there is a distinct risk for nations to lose their original culture and traditions. In my opinion, I believe that the implications of this case exceed the benefits.

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The Most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to move from the suburbs or country into the city Centre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that if people migrate from suburbs or country into the city centre , there is a chance of having a control over current traffic and pollution . I don´t fully agree on the statement given .

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