IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

These days everythings rely on science and technology and these plays a very crucial role in induviduals lives. For improving and developing a country, government should increase the funding of teachers in sciences rather than others. I strongly agree with this statement.

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Some people say that the main purpose of television should be eduction, while other says it should be for entertainment only. Discuss both side and give your opinions.

In mondern society television has integrated itself as an essential part in every day life. People watch it for a wide range of reasons, such as, e.g., relaxation or entertainment as well as education and the news. Subsequently, the view of its main purpose has diverged with some people arguing that television's main objective should be educational purposes only. On the other hand, arguments are being made that it should be for entertainment purposes only. This essay will explore both stances on the topic before providing my own opinion on the subject.

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In the past photographs were real on people and places. Nowadays with modern technologies, you can not trust the pictures. Do you think is it a positive or negative development?

It is obviously true that pictures in the past would indicate the real face of humans and areas. In recent times, likely applying of some contemporary softwares on pictures might cause the whole details of image would not be trusted. Although these kinds of modifications are changing some realities, but I firmly believe accessing these new graphic softwares are beneficial and should be supposed as positive effects.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Today there are a lot of different shops where we can buy all kind of stuff produced all over the world. Is it right to buy food produced in other countries? Is this idea useful for people nowadays?

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Due to the development and rapid expansion os supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People believe that because of advanced development of markets, many small branches can not compete with that, as a result local communities may die out.I agree with this opinion.

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In the past, most people spent their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Some years ago, it was quite normal for all employees to work for the same business during their enterily work-life. Nowadays, things have been changed and the new workforce generation consider to change jobs frequently as the normal trent. This essay will discuss, the pros and cons of this two points of view, as well as share my opinion about why I support the idea of do not change jobs as the best option.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society.

Since their early years, young people saw their parents consume drugs almost everyday. This situations creates a mindset to them, which then cause them to follow those habits. While it is also not healthy for adult to depend their mental health on drugs, it has bigger effects to the young people. In my opinion, adult people should decrease using drugs in their daily life. In this essay, I would like to discuss the causes and some effects of massive use of drugs by young people.

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Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, think that there are better ways to reduce crime.

Many people believe that giving longer prison sentence is the greatest way to decrease crime rate. However, other people think that there are other ways to reduce crime. I believe that the best way is to improve social education lessons at schools.

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Some think the best way to reduce the time people spend in travelling to work is to replace the parks and gardens close to the city centers with apartment buildings where commuters can live, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some the best choice to decrease in spending date in go to the industry is relocation public environments in an urban area with apartment buildings where individuals can live there. This essay will discuss both opposite views.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences.Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.Discuss both views and give your opinion. Huy Tran

In the modern era, criminals rate is increasing and many dangerous criminal appear. While some argue that to decrease the prisoner, the best way is rise prison term. Others believe that alternative solutions will be more successful. Two points of view will be discussed in the following paragraphs before presenting my personal perspective in the conclusion.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we hear many news and information about environmental changes. Some people believe the most important environmental problem is the loss of special species of plants and animals while others are not on the same page and they think there are more important matters. In this essay, I will discuss both views and present my own notion.

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Some people think governments should care more about elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger students. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of people believe that governments should prioritize more money on education. While, others think that they should care a whole about older citizens. In this essay, I will argue about both perspectives, why people care about older citizens as well as why many people consider that a sum amount of money should be invested on the education system.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue advertisement is very important to let the customer know and purchase while others say that it is very popular and unnecessary to be concentrated. While advertisement is usually very common nowadays, I believe that advisement is a crucial marketing method to attract consumers.

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Some people think governments should care more about elderly while others think they should focus on investing in education for younger people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In some countries, Students are required to learn a foreign language. But, in other countries, people believe that they do not have to do so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two types of countries regarding of learning foreign language in school. The first type required students to learn foreign language. Nonetheless, other type believes that students do not have to study other language in school. Based on my personal experience, I am more incline to the first type.

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The availability of entertainment such as playing electronic games on portable devices will be harmful to individuals in the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, the availablity of entertainment such as playing eletronice games on portable devices may have negative effects on individuals in the society where they reside. From my personal perspective, I agree to a certain extent with given statement. Although there are some issues to considered. Both sides will be examined in the following paragraphs.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving this message. A

Nowadays, in some nations young generation are motivated that they can accomplish their goal if they work hard. This may lead to disadvantages such as overwork and frustration, but on the other hand it can give successful results.

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With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?

There are some concerns regarding threats to children through the internet. The dangers vary from unappropriate contents to sexual assaults. Therefore, governments' policies are made to limit children's access to the internet. However, regardless of those policies, many people say that parents must control their children's exposure to the internet. I agree with this approach because of two main reasons.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays many nations and their residents are starting to be interested in research and study about the traditional history of accommodation where they still live.Before most people neglected history and culture.

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Some people say that economic development is the only way to end world poverty. However, others argue that economic growth is causing environmental problems and should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In modern society, there is a debate about whether it is the only solution to excape from poverty around the world by developing economy or the growth of economy is destroying the environments and it should be paused. From my perspective, the latter seems more plausible since people will not stay in the Earth anymore but the both of issues would be examined in this essay.

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