IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 8

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people today find they have insufficient time to spend with their families, bacause of pressures of work.What problems does this create for individuals and their families?what solutions can you propose ?which would be the most effective solution, in your view?

Due to workload, individuals have no time for their own family. It is seen that over the period of time, people becoming materialistic. In this essay, I will explore what are the main reasons for this issue and secondly, I will explain some potential remedies to address it along with my prespective.

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Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

In this modern era there are many small and large companies established. People prefer to work in small or big company based on their interest and experience. I would prefer to work in a large scale establishment because of globalization, in this essay I will explain the reason of my choice.

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Some people believe that women should be able to join their country’s army and police forces, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the current world, gender equality is one of the most sensitive concerns in a society, whether women should have right to perform task or work like men. Women serving for army and police is also a critical argument, whether they should have rights to serve those jobs or not. Some people agree, but a lot of them seem to reject it. This essay will discuss both views and give my own opinion. On one hand, a lot of people encourage the government to promote gender equality. They aimed to support freedom of expression and interest for women to choose their jobs. Meanwhile, a lot of people stated that women can also perform high ability task if they are trained well enough. In fact, they do not have to always be on the battlefield but rather work as back office for military or police organizations would also be possible. Being employed as an army or police could be an alternative career for women, which they also have right to earn benefits and welfare from being part of the government ...

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Some people believe that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, think that school is the best place to learn this.

Children's behavior is one of the basics that parents should dedicate their work to it. Many people believe that good behavior can be learned from parenting others believe that school is the best place to learn this skill. Both aims to create a good person to serve the society. This essay focuses on a discussion of both views.

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Some people believe that technology has made life more complicated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times technology has been growing rapidly, and most people think life has become hard with advanced technology. I strongly agree because modern technology has been difficult to particular age group. Moreover, many applications are complicated to use them.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years the growth of large shopping malls as been increasing which has led to the closure of small vendors. While this offers some advantages and significant drawbacks too. This essay will discuss both the pros and cons of the given statement, But I would say it is a positive trend.

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Some people think having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe skills and experience are more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many people are discussing whether it is more important to have a university degree or to have skills and experience to secure a good job. In this essay, I am going to argue both sides and give my personal opinion.

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For centuries important parts of education have remained such as reading , writing and math. With the advent of computer , some people think that computer skill made as afourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree?

For centuries , education has been focusing on the core subjects such as mathematics, reading and writing.However, with the advancement of technology there is a growing argument whether computer education should be added to this traditional listor not .I believe that, as technology is becoming a important part of the humans , leading to computer literacy becomes neccesary as other core subjects .

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In many countries, there is a growing gap between the technical skills of younger people and those over the age of 50. What problem does this cause, and what solutions could minimize the problem?

Growth is a crucial part of every field and is one of the important key factors of success. It is evident that progress in technology has lead to a difference in understanding of operations among younger and senior employees. In this essay, I will shed light on the reasons and possible solutions of the issue.

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Some people think adverts control what we purchase ,while others think they are useful sources of information on products. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

In present times, when social media and entertainment platforms have a lot of influence on our everyday lives, adverts can be manipulative as to what we purchase. Some may also think that these are useful sources of information on products. In this essay, we will discuss both views followed by my take on the topic.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking a risk in life is one of the common and crucial human behaviours that people have to go through both professionally and personally. I certainly agree that taking a risk is beneficial as it may lead to higher rewards and personal development.

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Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that if most of the people in the country are wealthy, any increase in economy does not make the nationals happier. However, I am totally against the statement.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reason for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

There is no denying the fact that personal trainers are becoming widely hired in some countries. Some may argue that people tend to prefer having a special workout classes than going to the gym, which I believe is a positive development in personal and social levels. This essay will discuss the causes behind this trend and provide relevant examples.

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The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

The internet has brought significant differences in our lives in recent years. Yet there remains some disagreement as to whether the impact is positive or negative. While there are some negative positions about the effects of the internet, I personally believe that the benefits of the subject far outweigh its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is suggested that people will refuse to purchase printed newspapers or book because it will be more comfortable for them to read online without paying any charge. This essay completely agrees with the given idea because that trend will help people not to waste their money and save our environment by cutting less trees.

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Some argue that teachers should focus on academic more than motivating students. To what extent do you agree and disagree

Some believe that educators should prioritize academic instruction over student motivation, as both aspects play a crucial role in successful learning.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Currently, it is hard to believe daily life without computers, they are independent part of modern world. Some argue that it is time to interact computers programs for direct teaching purposes making them primary tool in the classrooms. This essay will discuss both views and provide adequate conclusion.

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As parents, they should be required to attend parenting courses every year to bring up their children well and give them a better environment for growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, guardians should be obliged to attend parenting lessons annually for the best upbringing of their children. I completely agree to this statement because these lessons help parents to guide and build closer bonds with their offsprings.

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Studies have suggested that children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons and what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Thanks to television, human life is less boring. Besides visible benefits, there are also some problems. One of them is that it can cause children to watch television all the time instead of spending time on active or creative things. Now we will find out why it is so addictive. Firstly, we have to agree that every family has a television or similar devices, so it is easy for children to stick their eyes on television. The second reason is that the producers are experts at making the shows appealing to their target viewers. Especially the kids, they hardly have self-control when they find something interesting. Last but not least, the active and creative activities such as take their kids to somewhere and look after them playing, help them make the diy toys, teach them how to take care of pets or plants,etc take more time and cost more money, so parents nowadays would prefer to let their children watch television rather than have fun with them. And now I will show you my measures on...

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some people think sense of competition in children should be encouraged, other believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the current world, arriving first is often equated with being the best. However, it is widely known that achieving first place requires significant team support. While some people believe that sense of competition should be encouraged in children, others think the sense of cooperation is responsible to develop more useful adults. In this essay will be discussed this issue and I will present my way of seeing this problem.

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