IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people choose to have their first child at an older age. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In our globalization era, there has been a noticeable trend of individuals choosing to have their first child at an adequate age. Numerous factors, such as financial development and personal growth, have contributed to this shift. While there are both advantages and disadvantages to this decision, I believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuus both views and give your opinion.

In older generations, where the job market was full of open spaces and higher education was not common amongst the mass public, university education was deemed to be a secured pathway towards a successful career. However, in today's world where the the proportion of the population who have received higher education has been higher than ever, people's faith in university education has wavered. Nowadays, some people would argue that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important than completing university education. Both sides have solid arguments and both views will be discussed in this essay.

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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the benefits of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its drawbacks. In my opinion, I have both views on this problem

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Some people think having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe skills and experience are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people suggest that having a university education is the excellent road to secure a well-paid job. While others consider that benefits are more crucial. In my view, these two reasons are very important; it depends on the type of person. Well, in this essay, I will discuss you about this different perspective with you.

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The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The first human landing on the moon is often described as a major milestone for humanity. While some people argue that this achievement has had little impact on ordinary people’s lives, I strongly disagree with this view. Reaching the moon represents an extraordinary technological and scientific breakthrough that has advanced human knowledge and inspired further exploration.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuus both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. In my opinion, I have both views on this problem.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern society, life has changed a great deal, especially with social media. This includes the use of social media. Some public believe that social media is replacing face-to-face interaction between family in society. However, others believe that it has many disadvantages. Thus, both views have significant points. This essay provides key information to support the topic and presents my own opinion.

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Too much emphasis is given to the education of students. More government money should be spent on free-time activities for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, beyond any doubt, the government’s main focus is on students’ education. However, I strongly believe that more government funding should be allocated to leisure activities for young people, as these activities can have significant benefits for their physical and mental health.

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in some countries, people prefer to rent a house to live in, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. does renting a housr have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?

In recent years, people tend to live in a rented house, rather than purchase their own. Although in some countries individuals prefer buying a house to live in a rented one. However, is that a good enhancement of humanity as living in a rented apartment, or does it have drawbacks?

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Today many people use the internet and the smartphones to transfer money to friend, family and business. In this positive or a negative development?

It is an irrefutable fact that technology is updating every moment. The majority of individuals transfer money for different purposes, using the internet, and mobile phones. Overall, this is a positive trend.

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Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether a nation can manage both economic progress and environmental cleanliness or whether it is impossible to succeed in these two fields. While I acknowledge the latter, I still firmly agree with the former as, to me, with proper planning and strategic policies, the balance of economic growth and ecology protection can be achievable.

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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Opinions are divided on whether children could be looked after by family members like grandparents or whether childcare centres can offer the best care. While I acknowledge the logic behind the former view, I still firmly agree with the latter.

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Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is the government 's responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is the individual's responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views

Consuming excessive amounts of sugar is detrimental to human health. Opinions are divided whether the authorities should be responsible for restricting how much sugar people can consume or whether each individual should regulate their own intake of sugary products. While I acknowledge the former, I still firmly agree with the latter as, to me, individuals should take primary responsibility for controlling their sugar consumption in order to reduce the risk of various diseases.

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An increasing number of children are overweight which could result in many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of an increasing number of overweight chlidren and how it can affect their health and health care costs. This essay will highlight the reasons and possible solutions to overcome this issue.

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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. Discuss advantage and disadvantages to children doing so??

In many countries, parents encourage their children to take up part-time job during their free time. While this practice can offer several valuable benefits, it may also present certain drawbacks. Therefore, this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this issue.

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Nowadays, many people have to work for longer hours, asd they feel more stressed out than before. What are the reasons? What can the employers do to make their lives easier?

In this era, it is notable that there is an increase in working hours for many individuals , which is reflecting on their mental health and increasing their stress. In this essay, I will shed light on the main reasons for this trend, and explore many solutions that employers implement to make their lives easier.

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Some people think that music lessons aren’t important and that children should pay more attention to science. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the influence of technology, academic learning has shifted towards science-related subjects rather than art and music. Although I think that following this trend is suitable because of the development of modern society, we should not neglect the importance of art in our lives. This essay will discuss the topic and give reasons to support the writer’s opinion.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many people argue that history is an integral part of our school curriculum while others believe that students should be taught science and technology. This essay will discuss both views in detail before presenting my own view.

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view

In recent years, the growing number of people who love to challenge themselves has become one of the most serious issues in several countries.

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Since the pandemic, remote work has become widespread in many countries. Although working from home provides flexibility and comfort, some believe it should be limited because it reduces productivity and weakens professional relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that working from home should be restricted because it has a negative impact on companies' productivity and weakens professional relationships. From my perspective, it seems absurd since a remote work environment will be beneficial for both companies and individuals.

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