IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views

It is widely accepted by many that death penalty is a suitable preventive action against the most terrible crimes though some state that permanet sentence is more efficient. This essay will discuss both ideas and will reason why former justification is not a valid decision.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house and building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Whether it is considered of people's interest to gather some information about whatever went on in their residenance is a subject of public debate in some states. With regard to this statement, there are several potential justifications, moreover, I will argue about the possible ways of getting those data.

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In recent years, farming practice has changed to include methods such as factory farming and the use of technology to improve crops. Some people believe these developments are necessary, while others regard them as dangerous and advocate a return to more traditional farming methods. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

These days,farmers use many chemical substances in farming that can be beneficial in terms of larger size of crops which can help to farmers meet to people's needs and address shortage of natural resources problem.While some people assert that these methods are necessary to address global demand for foods among individuals,others,including me,believe that it can affect welfare of animals adversely.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

There are many debates about whether aging citizen has negative impact on a country administration. In my point of view, the benefits of this situation overwhelm the drawbacks. This is because it will create more work opportunities and more equipments will be more innovative.

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Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, communication technology has remarkably advanced in the past few decades. With more people tend to use their mobile phone and computers. Whether it will lose face to face communication skills or not, which becomes a hot controversy. Meanwhile, I disagree with the statement.

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Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Some individuals claim that all subjects should be taught to children at school, however, proponents say that they should only engage in subjects they are interested in or talented. Although I agree that study which covers all subjects can be better for children, I argue that children should study in some specific lessons that they have an interest and skills.

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Always telling the truth is the most important considerations in relationship. Do you agree or disagree?

Poeple urge that honesty is the best policy . In my opinion , I totally disagree with the idea that telling the truth is the mosy important consideration in relationship because sometimes it can make the situation worse.

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Some people think that all unviersity students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years many people assume that we should study subjects that we are interested in. Is it good to study subjects whatever we like than those which will be useful in the future? Some people believe allowing students to learn practical matter for the upcoming days, whereas others believe otherwise. However, I strongly believe that the advantages of letting scholars to choose the favorite subjects outweigh the drawbacks.

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If a product is good or it meets people's needs, people will buy it so advertising is unnecessary and no more than entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In terms of commerce, many brands make confidence of products following the consumer's demand which is high quality and stability rather than take action in advertising. However, I would argue that many presentations through video and content have an influence on my decision including conversations of the big

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Some people think that wearing a uniform at work is essential whereas others think that it is unnecessary. Present your views on both sides of the argument.

Numerous individuals believe that wearing a uniform at work is crucial, but there are people who think in the opposite way. In my opinion, uniform is necessary for workers who their jobs are in Factories or in crafts. On the other hand, wearing uniforms for employees who are working in companies is not important .

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The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Thanks to the development on social media, our communication methods have been changed these days. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. There are some people who recognize that this development has positive impact on human lives. On the other hand, other people think there are detrimental effects on social media. In this essay, I will discuss both perspective and provide my opinion on the issue about social media.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that, to increase the quality of public health, more sports facilities are necessary. However, not everyone agrees with this proposal. Many people believe that it would be ineffective and that other alternatives should be implemented. In my opinion, to effectively improve the health of the general population, prioritizing other measures like modernizing hospitals and health professionals' pay rise is paramount.

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Some people think it is important to construct new buildings rather then wasting money maintaining the old ones . To what extent , do you disagree or agree with this opinion ?

Nowadays shopping has become an amusement activity and gained popularity among people of all ages. It has been transformed into a pleasure and recreation pursuit for many individuals.

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Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

Crime rates across the whole world rises with each year. Many wonder, what are the causes for this and what could be done to prevent this from happening. This essay will try to explain the reasons and give possible solutions for this issue.

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In some cultures old age people are highly valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a common belief that due to the modern of technology, robots are said to play an essential role in human life due to their help in dangerous working conditions. However, this writers argues that with the ability to do multiple tasks of robots, human will become lazy and useless.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families.

Today the vast majority of people want working have to leave their home and leave their friends and relatives. In my opinion,in this question advantages outweighs the disadvantages and i am going to prove it.

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In the past, knowledge was stored in books. Today, people stored knowledge on the internet. To what extent the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays, due to the advancement of technology, people store their information and knowledge on the Internet, while in the past traditional methods were used.This essay both sides of the argument will discuss and the support will be explained.

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Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this generation, distance-education courses have acquired a huge amount of popularity. Anyhow, few citizens debating that digital lessons are not much as effective as compared with other in-person university subjects. This essay agrees with the statement that online lessons are not useful when compared to the in-person college subjects. First, students can ask doubts and question to the professor immediately. Second, students will also get extra hours to discuss about the program after class hours.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Recent advancements lead to world becoming more competitive. Some believe that getting high wages is more essential than a sense of fulfillment. I completely agree with this strategy, and my strategy will be detailed in further explanation below.

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Some parents, especially mothers, stay at home instead of working, and some people think they should receive momentary compensation from the government. Do you agree or disagree?

It is debatable that due to busy schedules, most mothers sacrifice their dreams and stay with their kids at home and look after them. Therefore, few individuals believe that some amount must be given to mums as a reward for looking after their home and their offspring. However, In my view it is a good idea because of financial crises it is hard for the bread earner to fulfill all the desires. Secondly, the mother should not feel dejected as they get a certain amount to fulfill their wishes without being dependent on others. I will discuss my view in this essay below.

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