IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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What qualities do you think are most important for achieving success in life? Provide at lest three reasons to support your view

Most people wonder what qualities are the most important for success. In this essay those wonders will be answered. There will be explanations and examples.

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In most countries, prison is an effective solution for the problem of crime. Some people think a more effective solution is to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the majority of countries, prison is used as the most efficient tool to address crime. However, many people claim that educating criminals can have more positive effects. While being agree that education can also positively affect, I assume that incarceration serves as the best disciplinary action.

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Many people believe that there is no need to travel to a place to learn a specific culture, it can be now acquired by watching films or browsing through internet. But, many are against it. To what extend do you agree?

Undoubtedly, cultural background of a region can be understood by different strategies, such as by travelling to the place, watching movies as well as by web browsing. While a majority of individuals argue that in order to study the culture of a geographical location, sightseeing can be replaced with movies and internet surfing, others have a contradictory stance on it. Considering the benefits of traversing, I greatly agree that it cannot be completely replaced with movies or by browsing.

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Many children today are overweight and unhealthy. Give reasons for this and give solutions to solve this problem.

Society is very different today , and that includes how children live. Today, many children suffer from obesity. This is a very unhealthy and serious problem. This essay will give reasons for this and provide solutions to solve this problem.

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People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

In recent years, the issue of crime and punishment has become a major issue of public debate. Some people believe that imposing longer prison sentences is the most effective way to reduce crime, while others argue that alternative measures could produce better results. In my opinion, the combined approach would be the best to address the underlying causes of crime.

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Some people say that history offers no practical benefits to society while other claim the history teaches us to understand the present. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Nowadays, attaining a certificate in something is deemed as a necessity by many in society. However, some people disagree with this notion for certain reasons. I am of the opinion that tertiary study is overrated because some individuals excel well in life without it.

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Some feel governments should invest in preserving minority languages, while others feel this is not a good use of resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no denying the fact that authorities should spend on the education fields to improve the students' capacity. While it is a commonly held belief that preserving minority languages is one of these fields, there is also an argument that opposes it. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view followed by my own opinion.

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some people like to try new things for example, Places to visit and types of food. other people prefer to keep doing thing they are familary with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that people’s habits vary from one person to another. While some people enjoy trying new experiences such as tasting different types of food or visiting new places, others prefer to stick to their usual routines. This essay will discuss both perspectives and express my opinion.

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What qualities do you think are most important for achieving success in life? Provide at least three reasons to support your view

Success is what keeps us going and gives us courage to continue. Although not everybody can reach success. Why is that? How can somebody become successful, what qualities do they need to achieve their goal?

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nowadays many young people became famous. it is positive or negative development

In recent years, an increasing number of young individuals have gained public recognition through social networks. Some critics argue that this trend offers considerable advantages, such as generating income and achieving popularity. While I acknowledge these benefits, I only partly agree with this viewpoint, as I firmly believe that it also leads to serious consequences, including substance abuse and the loss of personal privacy. Therefore, I regard this as a predominantly negative development.

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These days, people are forced to leave their family and friends in order to obtain a good job. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, humanity are obliged to leave their family and friends in order to get a nice job. In my opinion, there are more downsides initially, but everything will improve in the future. This is because moving away from loved ones can be emotionally difficult and stressful at first. People need time to adapt to a new environment, make new friends, and feel comfortable in a different place. However, over time, they can find better opportunities, develop new skills, and build a more stable life, which can make the decision worthwhile in the long run.

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In many countries online shopping is becoming more and more popular. Some people think that this is having negative impacts on the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree and give your opinion.

Buying and selling different items on an online platform is a common phenomenon all over the world. Although, many people believe that this is not good for society. However, I disagree with the statement.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

It is often argued by the public that data exchange in the trade and medical sectors is an excellent way for the prosperity of the World. However, some claim that some knowledge is very valuable, most in the protection department , and it should not be shared with others. In the essay, I will discuss both points of view and mine.

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When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When the government is planning to build new cities, it is essential to build gardens and gyms rather than malls. I totally agree with this view, because building these constructions can revive the public's spirits or in other words, mental health; moreover, it will enhance the general look of the city.

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Some people think that the government should spend more money on public services rather than on arts such as music and theatre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the government should allocate more funds to public services as compared to the arts. I agree with this notion to a large extent , however thorough analysis of the given standpoint is necessary to validate my perspective.

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

While humanitarian principles advocate for supporting refugees, wealthy nations should not be compelled to accept them unconditionally. This essay argues that such policies may undermine foster dependency and create social tensions.

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Education has become more and more about tests and results, and less about becoming a good citizen. This is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, there has been a huge increase in the number of students and parents who tend to focus heavily on exams. I firmly believe that the exam only shows the results without the learning process and students don’t pay attention to gaining knowledge or developing teamwork skills, which are essential for social life. This issue has become one of the most debated topics in modern education. Since not only , but also

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that advertising is completely successful at encouraging us to buy some items, while other people argue that advertising is so frequent that we have no interest in it. I believe that advertisements have an essential impact on our spending.

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One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays that governments experience is providing accommodation for their growing population, while trying to defend the ecosystem. In my opinion, it could be achieved by them, if they implement sustainable development standards and use proper technologies, but it would be very hard if the country is overpopulated.

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it is important for children to learn the diffrentce between wright and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

In today's world, parents and teachers play a vital role in teaching moral values and shaping young people’s understanding of right and wrong. Some people believe that there should be strict rules and punishments to help children learn discipline, while others argue that such methods can discourage children and harm their emotional development. This essay will examine both perspectives before giving a personal opinion.

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