IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 4

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Today's era is highly competitive for students academically. Along with academic subjects students are also learning subjects such as cookery and physical as a part of their school curriculum. Some people believe that those subjests act as an unnecessary burden for the students, however I strongly disagree with it and the following will illustrate the importance of studying those subjects.

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Some people think that universities should assign students to share dormitory rooms. Others think that students should be able to choose their roommates on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some that educational institutions should allocate the rooms to learners, however, others condemn that students should have the right to select their roommates. I will discuss both viewpoints along with my own thoughts on it in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this owthweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, a lot of authorities have assumed that learning different languages at primary school is better than learning them at secondary school. While this trend brings several advantages, it is also associated with a number of drawbacks. In my view, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will explore both sides.

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some people thinkthat is good to be ambitious. how important is it to be ambitious? do you think its a good characteristic?

There has been a discussion about the importance of aspiring in people’s lives. Being ambitious is greatly necessary and I suppose it might be beneficial for humans, but can also lead them to the wrong path.In today’s world, there are various disruptions for people, and they forget their dreams easily. Thus, if people have some goals which they aim to achieve, they can be successful due to their ambitions. For instance, many youngsters want to be famous footballers or popular actors although it might be considered as a far further aim. Their aspirations motivate them to take some related courses and be a participant in communities with the same aim whereas it might take many years to take the first step for dreams if they put their enthusiasm away.To my mind, even though ambition has a crucial role in individuals’ daily lives, it can bring several problems. Firstly, people who have this characteristic usually do not enjoy themselves in their leisure time. For example, they usually f...

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Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

School subjects is the topic that sparks huge debates nowadays. While some individuals believe that history should be taught more than other subjets, other people think lessons like science and technology have more significance in modern time. I assume that, in today’s world, students have to develop in various fields that includes all these subjects.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

t is sometimes argued that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities, while others contend that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and show why I favour the latter.

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In many cities, there is a lack of land that could be used for housing. As population levels in these areas increase, would it be better to use land for parks or for housing? Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that with increasing population levels, these areas would be better used for providing more housing space. Although it is understandable that parks should be kept for outdoor exercise and recreational purposes, I believe housing should be prioritized.

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Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, crime punishment is an important debate. Some people, including me, believe that prison sentences are not a practical solution in dealing with offenders. Education and job training should be used instead due to two main reasons , which will be explained in this essay.

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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.

In recent years, the topic of more and more people applying drinking sugar-based drinks such as soda, energy drinks, or sweetened juices. This trend can be harmful to people’s health. There are some reasons for this problem, and also some ways to solve it.

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Copetitve sports have been argued to have positive effecton child education by some, will other oppose. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Social media is an important part of modern life. Many people use platforms like Facebook, Instagram, and TikTok every day to communicate and share information. There are both positive and negative sides to using social media.

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Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some humans think that in the far coming years the environmental problems will evolve so much that it will lead to the Earth being uninhabitable, and we will have to find an alternative planet. Although it is a scary opinion, I agree with it.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, with the increasing digital popularity, scientific discoveries and research can be conveniently shared online, and are beneficial to business and used for academic. Others suppose that these discoveries and information are quite valuable and significant,so they should be protected and avoid freely shared with the public . Today, this essay will discuss both opinions.

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The quality of computer language translation has improved significantly in recent years. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

In the present day, improvement in technology allows people to understand any language instantly. Accordingly, most of the devices, such as computers, laptops, and mobile phones, consist of apps that help to translate to the individual’s mother tongue. As a result, some argue that it is not mandatory for pupils to learn foreign languages. However, I strongly disagree with that opinion due to reasons outlined below.

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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

Competition plays an essential role in everyone's life. Some individuals think that there should be no competition activities for individuals or groups in the school curriculum. I disagree with this notion. I believe that competitive sports encourage children to participate, develop interpersonal skills, teach them to work hard, and help them to stay fit and healthy.

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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might difference cause? How might these problems be reduced?

There is no denying the fact that when there are some advantages, which will increase the levels of the rich cities positively, whereas the villages are going to acquire little revenues. This essay will discuss the main troubles about the causes, and also how to decrease these drawbacks through effective solutions.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives of fossil fuels should be the most important global priority. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answers

There is an argument claimed that it is crucial to find out another energy source for replacing petrol, and this should be the most priority of the world. I strongly agree with this perspective for the following reasons.

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The exploration and development of safe alternatives of fossil fuels should be the most important global priority. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answers.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kine of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion.

In some nations many people are suffering from health diseases because of consuming a lot of fast food, and it is argued by some that higher tax should be imposed by the government on this kind of food. This essay totally agrees with this statement and considers it a viable solution to reduce the consuming of unhealthy food.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kine of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion.

In some countries, more and more people have health problems because they eat too much fast food. Some people think the government should put a higher tax on fast food. I partly agree with this idea, but I also think people need to take care of their own health.

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