IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 4

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that team sports prepare children for work life but others think individual sports are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The importance of team sports in preparing children for their future work life, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent you agree or disagree?

There are various reasons that result in crimes committed by youths. A suggested solution is teaching their guardians with parental skills. From my perspective, I disagree to a large extent with the presented suggestion.

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Learning to play team sports is an important part o f a child’s education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Sports is extremely essential for physical and mental health; because our muscles and brains keep active while doing sports. In additionally, team sports are more important than individial sports for child's education due to learning friendship and learning fighting for a common goal with your fellows.

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In many countries, young people are moving from rural areas to cities to work or study. Why is this happening? What are advantages or disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, youngsters are migrating from rural areas to well-developed cities or countries for better education and work. The most prominent reason for this shift is the better opportunities and growth in their careers, as well as the high pay rate. The advantages overweighs the disadvantages. I will be discussing in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in a company, while others believe that employees should be involved in the decision-making process. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate whether important decisions in a company should be made solely by managers or whether employees should also have a say in the decision-making process. Although managers possess greater experience and authority, I believe that involving employees can lead to better decisions and more motivated workforce.

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That there are many accidents on the roud how can we reduce it?

Many people have been in car crash in their life.In this essay l will discuss how we can decrease the number of accidents.

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Doyouthinkitisbetterforgovernmentstospendmoneydevelopingpublictransportationordevelopingnewkindsofcars? Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.

It is often argued that the government should allocate funds for the public transportation while, others are of the opinion that the it should focus on building new kinds of cars.In my opinion, the government should invest heavily in the public transport development because it will help the whole nation as everyone cannot afford a private vehicle. This, essay will discuss both the views before explaining my position.

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Unhealthy eating has a negative effect on both individuals and the society in which they live. Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods while others believe that a ‘fat tax’ is unfair and unnecessary. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that sugary drinks consumption lead to serious illness that includes obesity and diabetes. However, there is ongoing debate regarding whether the state should charge its citizens for unhealthy food, or others think it is unessentail to do so. I firmly believe that introducing such act in the society is crutial in order to reduce healthcare burden in the country.

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In some countries, adults are living with their parents after graduating or even after finding a job. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

In many countries today, many young adults still stay in their parents' house, even when they are in college or working. From my point of view, I believe there is nothing wrong with this, and the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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In many countries , more people are choosing to live alone instead of with their families.

In many countries, more people choose to live alone instead of living with their families. I think this trend has both advantages and disadvantages, but in my opinion the advantages are bigger than the disadvantages.

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These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ?

Nowadays, it is much more common for many individuals to travel worldwide for tourism than it was in the past. In my way of thinking, the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people argue that primary schools focus too much on formal learning. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? How important do you think it is for children to play as well as learn in the primary school classroom?

The main purpose of primary education is to provide children with a strong foundation for the future. However, primary education often overemphasizes formal academic learning. I agree with this view because young children need opportunities to be physically active and engage in interactive activities rather than spending most of their time sitting in classrooms.

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Surveillance cameras in banks, offices, shops and streets have been very successful in reducing crime in the workplace and public, but they are also took for their users to spy on people's private business. what problems do surveillance cameras create? what are the solutions?

The Role of Surveillance Cameras in Modern Society: A Double-Edged Sword

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Some people think that there should be a complete ban on all forms of advertising. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion I don't think there should be a ban on all forms of advertising because it helps a lot of business.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many prefer to avoid consuming non-vegetarian foods. This is because they have a belief that it can be beneficial for their own well-being, as well as the whole world in various ways. I strongly agree with this viewpoint, as being a vegetarian, I am always against it because of our family's religious values and a major advantage for creatures themselves.

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Children and teenagers are comitting more and more crimes in many countries. Why is this happening? How we can stop or reduce youth crime?

Nowadays, an increasing number of adolescents commit a crime. This can be caused by problems associated with family and disengagement from education. Although it is a serious issue, it can be addressed by preventing familly conflicts and prioritizing moral support for vulnerable students.

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Some feel that entrepreneurs are as important to society as scientists. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Entrepreneurs play a crucial role in developing a society. While a significant number of people believe that entrepreneurs and scientists have equal significant part for society, I strongly agree with this statement because entrepreneurs boost the economy by investing in many areas and they are trying to find solutions to ease people's live. This essay will elaborate on my position with relevant arguments and examples.

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Chilhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this and what are some possible solutions can be offered?

Nowadays, Obesty is beeing a difficult global issue. this essay will discuss several causes and practical solutions.

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Housing is a basic necessity for everyone. Therefore, governments must provide free housing to those who cannot afford it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people have held the opinion that governments should be mandated to provide free housing for poverty-stricken individuals. I am inclined to agree that housing should be free for the people who need it most but it does not necessarily have to be accessible for only the people with a low income.

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governments spends much more money for education. More money should be spent on free time activities. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Not all Finance Ministries are efficient in expenditure. There is an arguement that public spending in education is higher than the optimum, and capital given to leisure activities should be increased. From my perspective, I firmly disagree with the given statement.

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