IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experiences.

It is believed that technology has negatively affected social relationships. To some extent, I agree with this view, but there are other aspects to take into account. One key reason for prioritizing real-life interaction is that technology often reduces face-to-face communication. That is to say, when people use smartphones or social media excessively, they spend less time engaging in real conversations. For example, technologies such as messaging apps, online games, and virtual meetings decrease in-person communication. As a result, people may feel more isolated and disconnected from those around them. If it were not for overuse of technology, people would communicate more deeply and meaningfully. Given that, social bonds might weaken due to a lack of emotional connection.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people choose to work for only one company all their whole lives because it enables them to develop skills deeply. However, some argue that hopping to several workplaces is better as it is not boring and gives new experiences. This essay will discuss both perspectives and explain why I believe that workers should change their jobs.

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Experts say older people were happier and healteir in the past because they did more excercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas many now suffer from loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions ?

There is no denying in the fact that in the past years individuals were more cheerful and fit due to regular workouts and quality family time. Moreover, in the present times people go through isolation and health concerns. Two main factors which contributes to this problem are increased screen time and sedentary lifestyle. Taking proper steps will help to reduce this.

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some educationists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. to what extend advantages outweigh disadvantagse?

In recent years, the global tours of students have become a common event in many schools across the world. Some people believe that there are several benefits as global visits allow children to learn about different cultures, traditions and languages. Moreover, it helps to improve confidence among students however opponents argue that despite the benefits there are a few drawbacks such as students health and adaptability to different environments. I personally believe that the advantages overcome the negative sides.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do vou agree or disagree with this statement?

Moving to a new country can cause you different types of issues. Language barrier is also one of them that can lead to some serious types of problems such as practical and social. I totally agree with the opinion that speaking a foreign language has some problems.

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More and more fathers are taking a break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no denying the fact that many fathers decide to take a break from their jobs to dedicate most of the time to their home and children while their wives are still working. At the same time there is a commonly held belief that one of the parents should quit working to give better care for their kids, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that taking a break from work can cause a lot of negative impacts for fathers.

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Some people believe that the internet is increasing the gap between the rich and poor, while others argue that it helps to reduce this gap. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some believes that the internet has narrowed the gap between the rich and the poor, while others argue that it maker the gap bigger. In my opinion, the media is playing an important role in elevating people’s incomes and providing them with an opportunity they will never get without it.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health, while others feel that havinv a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

It's often argued whether sport or a diet is more crucial in improving overall health. While some believe that exercising keeps your body fit and boosts mental well-being, others would argue that healthy eating habits are more important because it provides necessary nutrients and prevents diseases.

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Why don’t people take environmental issues seriously in spite of being given many warning by scientists? Why don’t people save energy in their daily life? Discuss the possible causes of these phenomena and give possible solutions.

It is true that environment problems in some parts of the globe have drastically risen over the years. And people have not taken any major steps to overcome it. There are a variety of possible reasons for this.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city

The topic" In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city" is an ongoing debate.In my point of view,both of the given situations have their advantages and disadvantages.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

In several countries undergraduate students live at their family house during their studies, however in remaining countries students study at campus in different cities. I believe that students attending campus in another city have more advantages than living with their family such as maturity and independence will be gained during this period.

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Some people do not eat meat and fish. They think that it will better for health and also world. Discuss the the view and give you opinion.

Nowadays, many people have become vegetarian which means they do not have meat in their meals. it is thought that being vegetarian will have positive effects on their health and the planet too. This essay will examine both viewpoints and present my perspective.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend Do you agree or disagree?

Working days should be 4 days instead of 5 and the off days should be longer. This essay totally disagrees with this idea. Work could become more stressful and intense due to reduced time to complete tasks. However, companies might reduce official vacation days.

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In some countries, many suffer from health issues due to eating too much fast food. That’s why it is necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, health issues are a main concern for modern people. Some argue that it is necessary for authorities to impose a higher tax on junk food to improve people’s well-being. In my opinion, I firmly disagree with the statement and here are some reasons.

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When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?

When global media, such as films, fashion runways, advertisements, and TV shows spread the same content to the international audience, many people argue that the widespread influence of international trends negatively affects cultural diversity. In my opinion, I believe that this trend can be a crucial factor in the disappearance of many cultures, since it makes the new generation disconnected from its national traditions, in addition to creating new standards in society that require you to overlook your culture to fit into society.

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Some people say that web content should be used to instruct children. Others think that it is not helpful in an educational setting. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a common belief that web content is not an eGective/ appropriate way to teach children. However, there is a more persuasive argument that it should be a teaching method for children because it provides a practical opportunity for children to learn.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present day and age, life has become so fast-paced that getting enough sleep feels like a task. As a result, difficulties such as a lack of productivity due to brain fog, poor mental and physical health and impaired cognition might arise. However adapting healthy lifestyle patterns, managing proper work schedule and limiting use of technology before bed can help mitigate this issue. The following essay elaborates more on this subject. Primarily, getting enough rest is directly proportional to productivity and overall well-being. Additionally, it gives time to the brain to partially shut-down and recover from all the stimulating and triggering factors throughout the day resulting in a fresh and more motivated start. For example, studies show that on average a person needs eight-nine hours of sleep to be able to function and handle stress. Similarly another study showed that students who had enough retreat before an important presentation, performed better than the ones who pul...

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Each era has a different way of learning , in the past students favored study in their own country , but nowadays they also have more opportunities to study abroad . In this essay I will examine the pros and cons of this trend .

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some individuals think that teenagers must participate in unpaid community work in their break time as it will have a good impact on them and their society, which I really agree with because it has a great influence on their personalities.

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In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural a r e a s . Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Today, an increase in the population of cities is an ongoing concern for most countries.Therefore,some authorities implement a policy to inspire people and entrepreneurs to live in the countryside.Although residing in urban areas gives many chances for work or education,this essay will show that the advantages of moving out of cities outweigh the disadvantages.Escaping from noisy cities and congestion gives a feeling of refreshment.

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