IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, the use of modern electronics along with social media have become quite popular. While people argue that the fights and commotions shown on the films and games could negatively impact the society, People, on the other hand, believe that it has no impact on their behaviours. However, In my opinion, showing violence does have a negative consequences on the society because people tend to narrate what they had witnessed on the movies or video games in real life.

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Many people believe that the internet is a problem for both a country and for individual people. To what extent do you agree with this?

The world is very different today. Some people in their personal opinion think the internet makes big problems in the countries. Also, many believe that the internet is a problem for people. I partially agree with this idea. I agree that the internet can be problem for some people . But I do not agree that the internet is a problem for the country. This essay will show information to support my opinion.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Sleep deprivation has become an increasingly modern issue in today's world. This essay will explore both problems which are resulted in the less amount of sleep time and possible solutions to lack of sleep.

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Scientists and technology experts seems to be more valued by modern society than musiciand and artists. To what extend do you agree.

Nowdays, the use of technology has increased significiantly in all aspects of life. Perhaps, some people believe that the advanced society of our priortizes skilled workers like scientists and technologist than people working on entertainment fields like an musicians or an artists. However, I completely disagree with the statement because the population of both younger and older generation have always admired artist and their music.

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In many countries, the amount of household waste like food packaging is increasing. What are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to reduce it?

There is no denying the fact that household waste must be regulated to limit its adverse effect on our environment. While it is a commonly held belief that the amount of this waste such as food packaging is increasing, there is also an argument that opposes it.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

People in several countries are starting to be intrigued in learning about the past of the buildings they live in. Reasons behind this may be centered around the fact that some architecture is built in unique ways. Researching this may require diving deep into the internet or social networking.

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Some people believe that parents should choose the degree or the major for their child to study at university. Others feel that children should be able to choose their own degree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Parents always think better for their children and thats why they want best for them. As a matter of fact, that many people believe that children must choose their own professional degree. Howerver, children are now more capabale to decide about their future and parents are less aware regarding new professional degrees.

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Some people believe that by killing someone society is also making a crime, so, that why death penalty should be forbidden. Life in prison would be a better punishment. Do you agree or disagree?

The crime rate is increasing day by day due to various reasons.Few people says that killing a person is one of the major immorality in the community.However,death penality is prohibited in some countries.So,some human believe that life in jail is a suitable punishment for criminals.I totally agree with the statement that providing prison life is a better option for tackle this issues.In this essay,i will elaborate my opinion in detail.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

The rate of idividuals who are at risk of serious health problems because being overweight is rising. So, in this essay, I am going to discuss both of the reasons and problem in overweight.

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Some people believe that the increased use of technology in education is beneficial, while others argue that it can have negative effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In today's world, technology has revolutionized many aspects of our life including education. It is widely debated whether it benefits the learning process, or makes it worse. In this essay, I will explore both perspectives and explain why I think it is a positive development.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

The popularity of social media is increasing among all age people. However, sharing private information on social media has a lot of risks. I believe that while social media fosters communication among people despite national and cultural boundaries, the benefits of social media outweigh the drawbacks because it hinders the privacy and safety of the users.

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Some people feel that learning a foreign language is an essential component of a child’s education. Others feel that learning a foreign language is often a waste of time that can be better spent on learning about technology and other more vocational subjects.

Throughout the history of education, learning a foreign language or languages has been a constant component. Of course, many people feel that this is really an unnecessary part of education for everyone, but this is not a point of view that I share.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the modern world, the most important goal of science and development should be to improve and make people's lives better. I agree with this statement because of the inventions and develops were the primary causes for us to collect comfortable and technology. Also, science opened many ways to learn and teach it to each other. In this essay, We will discuss all points for this topic.

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Some students focus on a general range of school subjects,but others study only their favorite ones or those they are very good at.Discuss advantages of thw two methods and show your opinion.

In this current era, there are disputed opinions regarding curriculam. Towards, where some are of the view point view point that some pupils like to involve in all subjects; whereas others counter argues that some of them are only learn solely subjects they are intrested in. Both the sides and my opinion is justified further.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, Certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Every individuals are born with different qualities and capabilities. It is believed that both men and women carries special qualities and they should work on the field that they expertise on. I completely agree with this opinion because certain jobs like constructions require physical strength and masculinitu which, in my opinion, is more favorable for men than women.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that music has a power of bringing people from other nations and ages together. I strongly agree with the statement because every culture hast its own music style and each decade has different style of music.

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The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, after transportation accidents, most companies are lose earnings due to the loss of their goods. These people claim that requiring transport owners to take an exam every year is the best solution to improve the safety of goods transportation. This essay will argue that this decision is not the beneficial solution.

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Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems. So people should retire after 60 and not work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that working after the age of 60 is wrong and causes many issues. They believe that people should stop working after this age. I disagree with this idea because older people can still contribute to society, and working helps them stay active and healthy.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Language is the most basic and important component of a country.Therefore, when a person move to a country which he/she have to speak a foreign language this can cause some dificulties. However, some people are against this notion and they believe speaking a foreign language will not make problems. In this essay, I will analyse both views and present my own opinion.

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Government should regulate the level of violence in films in the television and in cinema. Some think they should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Concerns were expressed about the amount of violence shown in both the television and in cinema, meanwhile some others think that it doesn't matter if it is included in movies, shows, or even documentaries. This essay will explain each opinion with examples for better understanding as well.

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