IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 10

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as unsatisftory jobs or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people argue that accepting a unwanted circumstance is the best way to cope such as working in a job even though people do not like it or living in poverty, some hold the view against to this and claim that trying to change it will be more beneficial. This essay will explore both perspectives and present my opinion.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to closing all shops in towns and cities. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, online shopping has transformed at the retail industry and customers can to do shopping from home. While some believe this trend will eventually closure all physical shops. I totally disagree with this view and I think that traditional stores offer more unique benefits such as product testing and personal advice, social experience, online challenges.

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Some people believe that the government should pay too much attention to sports and pay little attention to education and health. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that sporting activities should be prioritized by the government as opposed to education and health centers. Although sport may seem an important field to centralize, I partially agree that the value of education and health plays a key role in shaping personal growth and development in the long run.

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More and more people work at home and study at home with the development of computer technology. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Computers makes our life easy and convinient for those who are working from home and remotely studying. The computer technology had changed the world in a unique way to make our life easier and better.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

This essay attempts to argue that foods and beverages containing excessive sugar might impact health. However, instead of blindly elevating the price of sugary products, a more effective approach would be to reduce the sugar content in the products themselves.

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Question--Some people say that TV Advertisement have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views , give your own opinion and include examples from your experience

While many people believe that TV advertisements have many disadvantages,others think the opposite .In my opinion ,the pros of it for the consumer or the company owners are overcome the drawback.

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Levels of depression and antisocial behavior in children have increased dramatically in modern societies. This situation has led many people to believe that childhood itself is in crisis. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In this fast-paced life, it is a fact that, an increasing number of children are suffering from depression and antisocial behavior. Because of this most of the folks reckon that childhood is in problem. If questioned, I agree with this notion to a major extant. My justification is explained further.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Travelling provides peace and relaxation to our mind. In recent times, numerous tourists are preferring to visit places where conditions and other circumstances are difficult to handle. This current trend has its own merits and demerits, which I will explain further with relevant examples in the following essay.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantges?

All cars, buses, and trucks Will no need for people to drive them in the future and these vehicles will only carry passengers while travelling. I believe this is a significant improvement in the transportation system although the disadvantages outweigh the advantages because haw people can trust this improvement in their lives?

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research evey year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Recently, governments of many countries worldwide allocate millions of dollars yearly for space research, however, some people think that such amounts should be devoted to enhance standards of living on Earth. I neither agree nor disagree with this opinion, as I believe that exploring the space is very important for the future and investing to improve quality of life on Earth is also essential.

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Many young children have unsupervised access to the Internet and are using the Internet to socialise with others. This has can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for childrean. Discuss problems and solution.

Nowadays growing number of internet based soical platforms are being used by children to connect with their peers and meet new friends. Despite some benefits, it can harm young individuals in many ways. So, I believe imminent interventions are needed regarding this issue inorder to save this generation.

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More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think are the possible solutions?

There is a growing demand for buying cars, especially for people who want to buy their first car. An increased number of cars can trigger air quality and traffic congestion. However, it can be tackled best by encouraging sharing cars and using public transportation.

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many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. what are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem? You should write at least 254 words

there is no denying the fact that there is a big problem Students can not be focuse at the school lessons . at these essay i will talk about the cause of this problem and how to get over it.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Over the past 30 years, car production and sales has increased so rapidly, most of the people now own a car in many cities around the world. I totally agree that raise in car ownership causes traffic jams in many urban areas. Governments should encourage public transports and provide free passes to public trains. Increasing car taxes can discourage people to buy cars.

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In addition to academic subjects at school, schools also should cover practical skills such as car repairing and gardening. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

Practical skills like cooking and gardening should be at the same level as important as academic subjects. I partially agree that academic subjects are vital for students who continue their study, however practical skills who start working immediately after school.

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Part time courses are on the rise and students are taking them up as an alternative to full time courses. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

On this world with ever growing challenges and competitiveness the younger generation put more value to time management hence their preference to part time courses instead of it full time counterpart, for the reason that this has greater benefits than dounfalls and the following paragraphs are going to explain why with some examples.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. lisa

In recent years, graffities are popular among people in the world. Some feel that cities should provide the spaces for them however others think that this kind of art should not be allowed. In my opinion, graffiti is a interesting art that could be enjoyed by people who live and visit the city. Somehow, it could make the cities be more beautiful and attract tourists.

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Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?

Some people think that too much harmful content is present on the internet today, and they feel like the only way around this problem is for the government to censor the content of websites. I believe, that indeed, the government should censor to some extent the content that is available out there, in order to make the online presence of us more safe.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

A lot of individuals taking care of their elderly family find that they do not have adequate time to protect them efficiently. This essay pintpoints the main setbacks that many may face and mentions some potential ways.

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Some people believe that universities are producing more graduates than is needed, and that less emphasis should be placed on university education. Others are of a different opinion. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

While some argues that universities graduate more students than necessary and less importance should be given to higher education. Some holds the view against to this. This essay will explore both views and I will discuss each perspective and give my opinion.

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