IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 10

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress at work. They should only care about the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress at work. They should only care about the quality of their work. I disagree with this statement and in my essay, I will explain why.

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Nowadays, many people prefer to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reason for this? Do you think it is a positve or negative development?

Nowadays, well established brands in every industry including automatives and cosmetics etc have become first preference of majority of people. I believe this has lead to positive development for mainly two reasons which are that people can trust these famous brands for their quality and reliablity and secondly, to maintain their reputation companies are forced to keep up with thier product quality and the services they provide.

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The growing of over weight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lesons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people tend to become obese, which causes health problems, some individuals think that the key to solving these issues is to have more sports and exercise courses in schools. In my opinion, I completely agree that this approach helps to manage the issue to overcome worsening public health in terms of weight.

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

It has recently come to many people's attention that celebrities have higher incomes than politicians. Advocates believe that this is a postive development, while critics views this as a negative one. Personally, I strongly agree with the former party, as I will elaborate further in this essay.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, In many countries around the world countryside population is decreasing because they are shifting to urban areas, to improve their lifestyle. In my opinion, it is a negative development , this essay will discuss the reasons.

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Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today . Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be threat to life on earth . Discuss both views and give your opinion

Genetic engineering is a serious conundrum in current society. Some individuals feel that it will enchance people's life quality in various ways. However, others do not share this opinion, stating that genetic engineering is dangerous to life on earth. In this essay I will review both sides and prove why genetic engineering is going to be very helpful to humanity.

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Some toddlers are using mobile phones for hours each day. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

Many toddlers use phones for an extended period of time on a daily basis. This is because parents nowadays want to keep their toddlers entertained, and this could be a positive thing because toddlers can use it to access educational apps.

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Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think being a celebrity brings more benefit or more problems?

It is stated that being a famous personality has its merits as well as demerits. In my opinion, being a public figure has more disadvantages and the grounds leading to my perception shall be discussed in this essay.

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It is no longer necessary that animals should be slaughtered and made into either human foodstuffs or non-foodstuffs, such as fur and medicine. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's time, it is seen that protection of animal rights and animal safety is prevailing in our society. It is stated that there is no need to slaughter animals for various benefits of human race such as to fulfill their nutritional requirements , for scientific experiments and so on. I completely agree with the above given statement and support animal rights.

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More and more developing countries are expanding their tourism industries. What do you think are the reasons for this? Is it a positive development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays, the craze among the natives for travelling has increased drastically. Moreover, countries pactively promoting themselves and the influencers sharing their travel stories have made people influenced on how fun travelling can be, which has gradually increased the footfall of the citizens travelling to developing countries too, resulting in expansion of tourism.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present time, technology is advancing at a great pace. Even making payments has become easier with the discovery of credit/debit cards and cell phone apps. It is said that in the future, cash would almost be of no longer used and most of the payments will be made by phone or card instead. This completely looks like a possibility. Having said that, some people might not be happy with the change due problems such as battery reliability of a phone and stolen card which can be threatening for the bank account. Henceforth I've elaborated on this matter.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A large number of people agree that social media platforms,for instance, Facebook Book have side effects on both users and the community. In my opinion, I disagree with that statement as social media helps in building relationships and learning new skills.

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Some believe that is is the responsibility of people to take care about the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Many people argue that the tasks of the environment are connected to the government while others believe that people should consider taking on the environment. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own opinion. Firstly, I will explore why authorized personnel can make rules to save our environment and how it is implemented of the rules about environment, and secondly, I will examine requires that individuals play a vital role in tackling this issue.

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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree ?

Music and art seem to be less valued than researchers as well as technology experts/ or those who have experience/are experienced in technology. In this essay, I am going to provide the reasons, why I agree that the scientific field is more prioritized by the modern generation than the entertainment industry.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People often believe that the primary goal of science is to improve human lives.I completely agree with this statement because it plays a crucial role in improving their lives through discovers in technology and medical discoveries.

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Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extend do you agree to this statement?

Due to modern life amenities and comfort, it's observed that obesity levels are increasing significantly among children. There is an emerging view that schools should start monitoring the dietry and excercising habits of their students. I firmly agree with this view of educational institutes playing a positive and responsible role in this.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, some individuals believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should pursue their professional career in their countries. Others argue that they should have the right to choose where they prefer to work whether it is in their own country or abroad. Although I firmly agree with the former perspective, this essay will discuss both views and address my opinion.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance sports or music and others are not. however, it is sometimes claimed that any children can be thaught to become a good sports person or musician. discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people believe only persons who have a born talent can have success in their job. But at the same time, others are sure that anybody can achieve their aim at a chosen business. In my opinion, I would rather agree that any person can be successful if he or she puts in enough effort, but only a few people having special capacities may become extraordinary figures in their jobs. This essay will discuss both sides giving examples.

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The picture below shows the use of renewable energy accounting the total energy from 1971 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares six regions in terms of the use of renewable energy between four decades 1971 to 2006.

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raffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world. What can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level

Adolescents in many countries are thought to lack the required skills and traits to be employed. Meanwhile, there is a shortage in the military services, implying that compulsory military services may be beneficial for society. I strongly disagree with this statement. Compulsory military service takes away the right to choose a career, depriving opportunities for higher education. Moreover, Youngsters in Third World Countries may be exposed to danger, since the militaries aren't strictly regulated.

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