IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 10

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In the future, it may be necessary for us to live on another planet. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that space exploration is vital as we have to relocate to another planet one day. This essay is in the favour of this argument considering the limited resources on Earth and increasing population.

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It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s competitive world, an increasing number of young individuals aim to establish their own business rather than pursue traditional employment. While self-employment undoubtedly presents certain challenges. From my perspective, its advantages significantly outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people believe that children are responsible for their crimes and should be punished for them. Others think the parents are in charge and should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is widely asserted that only children should take accountability for the crimes that they have committed, whereas others hold a belief that punishment should be employed on their parents who are in charge of their violations. In this essay, I am going to demonstrate the two opposed viewpoints. Personally, it is my belief that only offspring who commit crimes should be punished for their actions for a variety of reasons.

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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

The wasted food volume has increased dramatically over the past few years. There are many reasons , such as the low price of food and groceries , and the widespread advertisement leading to consumerism. There are some solutions, which could lead people to a more balanced lifestyle.

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Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success?

The meaning of success is different to different people. Pursuing higher studies, or scoring excellent grades in academics, is a success for some people; while higher paid salary, high-ranked job, luxurious living style, mean success to other. However, there are some individuals who consider self-satisfaction, strong social bonds, internal peace and joy, are the real success factors. In my opinion, all the factors are important to consider someone as a successful person. Thus, good academic records, reputed job and peaceful mind, all are the significant factors to be a successful person.

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The use of phones, tablets and other devices when people are walking in public is causingconcern among many commentators. What dangers may arise when people focus on such deviceswhen walking in the street? How could these problems be reduced?

In today's world, where life without mobile phones seems unimaginable, the use of mobile phones, tablets, and other devices, by people while walking on the roads has immensely increased. It poses several threats to them, or others sharing the roads. The possible risks are, accident, death, surge in criminal activities. However, there are possible solutions, such as public awareness, and infrastructure improvements to mitigate this issue.

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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Due to medical advancements, various diseases are curable nowadays, but most of the people living in the underdeveloped countries are still dying with such diseases that are curable. This happens because of their affordability challenges for expensive medical treatments. So, it is opined by many that drug companies should provide medical products such as medicines, vaccines, and syringes to these countries at reduced prices. However, I agree to this view up to a certain extent as I believe the relevant government authorities, or other world-level organizations, should also come forward to help these countries.

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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

There is a debate over how fashion is essential for our life, some say that fashion items have sides that can change our life, I believe that we should spend money on other useful things which can help us improve our future life.

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Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Today's era is highly competitive for students academically. Along with academic subjects students are also learning subjects such as cookery and physical as a part of their school curriculum. Some people believe that those subjests act as an unnecessary burden for the students, however I strongly disagree with it and the following will illustrate the importance of studying those subjects.

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Some people think that universities should assign students to share dormitory rooms. Others think that students should be able to choose their roommates on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some that educational institutions should allocate the rooms to learners, however, others condemn that students should have the right to select their roommates. I will discuss both viewpoints along with my own thoughts on it in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this owthweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, a lot of authorities have assumed that learning different languages at primary school is better than learning them at secondary school. While this trend brings several advantages, it is also associated with a number of drawbacks. In my view, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will explore both sides.

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some people thinkthat is good to be ambitious. how important is it to be ambitious? do you think its a good characteristic?

There has been a discussion about the importance of aspiring in people’s lives. Being ambitious is greatly necessary and I suppose it might be beneficial for humans, but can also lead them to the wrong path.In today’s world, there are various disruptions for people, and they forget their dreams easily. Thus, if people have some goals which they aim to achieve, they can be successful due to their ambitions. For instance, many youngsters want to be famous footballers or popular actors although it might be considered as a far further aim. Their aspirations motivate them to take some related courses and be a participant in communities with the same aim whereas it might take many years to take the first step for dreams if they put their enthusiasm away.To my mind, even though ambition has a crucial role in individuals’ daily lives, it can bring several problems. Firstly, people who have this characteristic usually do not enjoy themselves in their leisure time. For example, they usually f...

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Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

School subjects is the topic that sparks huge debates nowadays. While some individuals believe that history should be taught more than other subjets, other people think lessons like science and technology have more significance in modern time. I assume that, in today’s world, students have to develop in various fields that includes all these subjects.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

t is sometimes argued that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities, while others contend that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and show why I favour the latter.

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In many cities, there is a lack of land that could be used for housing. As population levels in these areas increase, would it be better to use land for parks or for housing? Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that with increasing population levels, these areas would be better used for providing more housing space. Although it is understandable that parks should be kept for outdoor exercise and recreational purposes, I believe housing should be prioritized.

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Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, crime punishment is an important debate. Some people, including me, believe that prison sentences are not a practical solution in dealing with offenders. Education and job training should be used instead due to two main reasons , which will be explained in this essay.

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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less.

In recent years, the topic of more and more people applying drinking sugar-based drinks such as soda, energy drinks, or sweetened juices. This trend can be harmful to people’s health. There are some reasons for this problem, and also some ways to solve it.

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Copetitve sports have been argued to have positive effecton child education by some, will other oppose. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Social media is an important part of modern life. Many people use platforms like Facebook, Instagram, and TikTok every day to communicate and share information. There are both positive and negative sides to using social media.

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Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some humans think that in the far coming years the environmental problems will evolve so much that it will lead to the Earth being uninhabitable, and we will have to find an alternative planet. Although it is a scary opinion, I agree with it.

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