IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 247

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Too much attention is given to headline-grabbing disaster like earthquakes and floods. Governments should concentrate their resources on educating people about their risks they face nearer to home, which can cost far more lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this.

It is undeniable that a headline-grabbing disaster such as earthquakes and floods is paramount for governments across the globe. Some people claim that this issue is exaggerated and there is more important educating people about other tragedies which have more victims. Personally, although I do not refuse this option, meanwhile, I believe two sides are vital for protecting lives.

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Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession. what factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be done about it?

On a large scale , the best scenario is everyone start and continue the career related to their studying field . Of course , when you spend years to learn some skills about an occupation and then get hired in a non-related job then you had wasted your time .

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Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think they should be knocked down and give way to modem building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that some people believe that the government is spending too much money in ancient buildings rather than giving a chance to modern buildings.while it is commonly held belief that investing in modern buildings may be more effective. there is also an argument opposes it.

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the pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The pictures illustrate the fifteen steps involved in making tomato ketchup, from picking the tomatoes to enjoying your food with some tasty tomato ketchup.

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There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, encouraging them to buy toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisements put too much pressure on children, while some advertisements claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the advertisement of every products including toys and snacks for teenagers are easily available everywhere, not only in the TVs but also in the gadgets. Some people believe these advertisements will be dangerous children, while another group of thinkers support that there are bunch of useful details for children. Personally, I completely agree with the first statement, and in this essay, I will discuss the supported arguments.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Whether experimentation on animals should be banned or encouraged, is a difficult question to answer. I believe, that there are many advantages when it comes to inquiring scientific data and helping research move forward. However, there are alternative methods to explore, without the need to experimenet on animals.

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Write an essay of 250 words on the topic below. You have 30 minutes. ( May 2023) People are working harder and longer hours in our modern society. That means they are also earning more money for themselves and their families. But does this lead to a happier society? Why, or why not? Discuss your ideas and support them with reasons and examples

In modern days, people always seek for the happiness. As a result, it is very common that people want to earn more money by working harder. I side those who feel that money could not buy happiness. Moreover, it could lead another problem that make them more suffer, so in this essay I will elaborate my argument for two main reasons.

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Today tourism is one of the world’s biggest industries, and many poorer countries are depending more and more on tourism for their economy. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a large number of tourists visiting a country?

With tourism being one of the largest industries, counties are becoming more reliable on attracting tourists in order to strenghten their economy. There are many advantages and disadvantages to being a popular country among tourists with negative effects being in the lead.

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It seems like you're writing an essay about the debate on building new homes in the countryside versus preserving the natural environment. Here's a rewritten version of your text with corrected grammar and clarity:

"In today's developing era, new shelters are essential for individuals, but space limitations pose a significant future concern. As a result, more space is being utilized to construct new buildings in the countryside. While some people believe it's crucial to protect the countryside and not build new homes there, I agree with the latter statement. There are several reasons to develop new houses in rural areas.

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree?

Having the opportunity to study English in an English-speaking country can be a big advantage when it comes to learning a new language. I mostly agree that is can be a very effective way of learning, however, there are many other methods a person can try to reach the same results.

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Vehicles should be driven by computers, not by people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, there are conflicting opinions about using auto-transportation to replace vehicles controlled by people. I completely agree with this view and I will explain the the reasons behind this aforementioned opinion in two paragraphs below.

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in your opinion how can government of each country eradicate or lessen the crimes commited by their own people use specific reasons and details to support your answer

What strategies can each country’s government take to decrease or eliminate criminal behavior committed by its population?

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In many countries, the amount o f crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes o f crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Nowadays, crime is in increasing trend all over the world. Every day, we hear news of new ways cruelties are committed. One reason for more lawlessness is because of the increasing unemployment rate and authorities can solve it by creating more job opportunities.

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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

While it is widely debated that modern communication technology can be like a two-edged sword, others argue that such technologies can disrupt the society negatively, especially on social relationships. The reason why I agree with the aforementioned claim will be elaborate on in this essay.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued by some people that advertising could lead to unnecessary consumption while others believe it helps popularize new goods that could enhance people’s living standard. To a certain extent, I believe that promotion contributes to people using their money for unnecessary purposes. This essay will discuss both views and give a nuanced approach.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this modern age, advertising becoming more and more advanced. A significant number of people argue that advertiments can promote society to purchase many objects which is not really necessary. While others believe that advertisements are able to give us more information about various equipments that may improve our lives.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that advertising is now encouraging people to buy unnecessary things. However, some individuals say that the advertisements which help popularize new goods enhance people’s living standards. According to these statements, this essay would cast light on it through these passages.

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Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question about right age to get married still remain unanswered and controversial to answer, after several decades of research and scientific advancement. The government bodies has set the minimum age of 18 to get married, but one part of society believes that it should be moved to 21 and I am going to advocate it.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Unnecesary consumption helps popularise new goods that enhance people’s living standards. Advertisement online in social media is leading people to unnecessary purchases.

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Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree?

In this scientific world, one can smoothly fulfil the nutritious requirements of the body from plant plant-based diet. On the same note, some people find it ethically inappropriate to consume meat, and I strongly favour their viewpoint.

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