IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 242

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and are unable to afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Some people have the habit of purchasing products by their debt, which they do not require and are even unable to purchase. One of the reasons for this behaviour is some people consider buying goods as a form of showing status. Awareness campaigns can help to control this habit of buying unnecessary goods.

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It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary c. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt, that kids should be taught the descrepancy between right and wrong. Some people argue, rather a pinishment mandatory to help them learn this distinction or not. I agree with this measures and thiss essay will explore my position.

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In many part of the world, it is common for one parent to stay and home and raise a newborn child while the other works full-time to earn money. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is common in most part of the world that one of the parent needs to stay home for take care of newborn baby and other needs to go to full -time job for financial support . Although, this will help to save money for children future needs ,I believe that one of the parent should be stay home for safety of the children .

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What are the benefits of living in big cities,as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas, and how can they be solved?

There are many advantages of living in big cities instead of rural areas such as better medical facilities, job ooportunities and tertiary education. The main problems of rural areas are lack of infrastructure in education and career opportunities ,Which can be solve by investing on education system like infrastructure and building industry for providing job opportunities. This essay will discuss all points below.

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The teaching of Information Technology (computers) has become a standard part of the curriculum in most secondary schools. The same is now happening in primary schools, where children as young as six are learning how to use computers. However, there is a danger that IT skills are being taught at the expense of more basic skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that the computer learning is being used more and more in primary and secondary schools were students’ ages variate between 6 and younger, which could lead to the lack of their knowledge about basic skills while IT skills vastly exceed.

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Some old people today struggle with the use of modern technologies such as smart phones and computers. What is the cause of this, and what are some possible solutions?

Senior citizens face problems while using modern technologies like smartphones and computers. The main cause of this problem is lack of knowledge and the most viable solutions are communication with young kids with strict quality time in the family.

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Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

Within the dynamic landscape of contemporary discourse, the dialogues surrounding whether only useful animals are needed to be pretected have captivated the collective societal conscience. It is with profound concord that I align myself with the proposition advocating for only animals which are useful to human should be protected , because the benefits for human could be expanded and the lack of resources should be prevented.

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Some young people are leaving the country side to lives in cities and towns,leaving only old people in the country side. What problems are caused by this issue. What can be done to solve this issue

One of the conspicuous trends of today's society is youngsters leaving their elderly parents in villages and moving to urban area in search of better education and employment opportunities. This culture will create problems like reduced manpower in the country sides and increasing air pollution in cities. This eaasy will provide some solutions to eliminate this issue like creating opportunities in rural area and providing incentives for the people who choose to work for their respective villages.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think advantages of taking risks outweight the disadvantages.

Nowadays, People are looking for a durable work that let them have a good balance between personal and laboral lives. Everybody is seeking a continous growth in responsabilities and salary, but, for getting that, people need to leave out their comfort zone with a change of job. In this essay we are going to explain the different advantages and disadvantages of taking risks in professional lives that leave people to get success en their jobs.

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Many people believe that all zoos should be closed, while others feel that zoos have a positive impact. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Zoos are part of a daily life in society as educational resources, conservation and economical impact, but also ethical considerations are going to play an active role in this analysis. During this essay i am going to develop those aspects as positive or negative corrrespondingly.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool. To what extent do you agree with this?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is young people spending great deal of time in front of television, though it has nothing to do with their studies. I completely agree with this statement because broadcasting channels are not always informative, and someone needs to be present guiding youngters at all time.

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Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but put are in nurse homes or care homes. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this trend?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is sending older parents to the old age home, rather than looking after them at their own place. This eassy will explain that there are many advantages of this trend, including busy work schedule of family members, and the availability of advanced medical support for them.

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some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this contemporary epoch, a large proportion of individuals believe that technical gudgets have made humans more extrovert while critics say that it has drifted them away from society. In my opinion, technology has provided a better platform to youngsters to interact with relentless number of figures across the globe. This essay will delve into both the viewpoints and will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

Over the last few decades,tourism has provided a lot of advantages for destination countries.Eventhough international tourism has brought some merits for many areas,it might cause some drawbacks for local people and their places.In this essay,I will address some pros and cons of worldwide leisure industry.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this jet-set age, small roadside stop-and-go food cards compete with each other to survive, if they are going to open or not the next day depends on what they make on that day, so head to-head battle is always on in every sector of a business or life, it provides an urge to do better every day. My school of thought finds me in favour of the topic discussed above.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

MAny people have to leave their houseS and family in ordeR to get a joB.In my opinion,THE advantages of moving away in aims at finding work outweight THE disadvantages , because it stands the chance of having A higher liVelihood and upgrading life.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

In this jet-set age, with times worth being significantly more compared to an ancient period of life, with everyone working around the clock, chasing their dreams, trying to be the best in an every expect of whatever they do, they somewhat completely ignore their personal life and health. For these reasons being the hot topics around the globe, some people are highly emphasizing on having a four days work week. My school of thought finds me in a split between both views.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that extinct of some special animals and plants is the most important problem of environment while some people don't agree with this view. While, extinct of species is really important to our world, I believe that there are more serious environmental problems around us.

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Today more people are shopping online than ever before. Why do people choose to shop in this way? Are there disadvantages to shopping online?

In today's contemporary world, the shopping methods have evolved and there's a significant inclination in online shopping instead of buying physically from the shops. The covenience and comfortability provided by these services are unbeatable, this has caused evolution in the retail industry. People often argue whether it has more benefits or harms , this essay will evaluate some pros and cons justifying the notion.

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Some people say that large companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In the context of coporative social responsibility , the proposal of providing sports facilities and local communities has garnered attention. I totally agree with this, companies and public has both several benefits of doing this practice such as well-being and better image in public

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