IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 242

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets there is no need to go to the cinema other says to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. What is your opinion?

In this technological era, some individuals are in favour or watching movies using electronic devices at their homes while other opine that they should go to theatres. However, both have their own merits and demerits but I believe that cinema houses are better. In the upcoming pragraphs, I will elaborate further.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Competition is an act that can been seen in many settings like in schools, workplaces and daily activities. Some people claim that competition is a positive aspect while others argue that the drawbacks of competition are more than the benefits. In my opinion, competing against each other is essential and useful if done in a healthy way.

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Some people say arts such as music and painting cannot directly improve the quality of people's life, so the government should not put money on art such as music and painting, instead, they should spend more money on construction of public services. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that state should pay for the public life works rather than raising the funds to the educational arts subjects because these are not contributor in their future growth. I strongly disagree the statement since such creative sectors provide learners more platforms to show their hidden talents and also give them financial freedom.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to suburban areas from large urban centres. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some individuals believe that it would be beneficial for the large scale industries and companies to shift at suburban areas from urban sites. In my opinion the advantages of this shift in location of companies surpasses the disadvantages. This essay explains my viewpoint further in detail.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the question of changing financial support to another type of help to poorer countries from wealthy ones become a field for debates, because today's measures are not helping for solving poverty. I, personally, can strongly agree with the idea of replacing existing ways to more effective strategies in terms of providing sustanable economics of third world countries and limited recources.

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Some people believe that authorities need to plan for more vertical cities with really tall buildings since our land for the expansion of cities is limited. What are the advantages and disadvantages, in your opinion, of vertical cities that have really tall buildings and everything within these buildings? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many societies, people hold the opinion that due to the limited amount of residential land, it is more useful to design and consequently construct vertical cities. There are some advantages and disadvantages of this fact which will be covered below in this essay. Personally, I am inclined to agree with this statement, and think that skyscrapers are compact and can include all necessary facilities.

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Some people think the government should not spend on international aid because there are disadvantaged people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is conventionally believed that developed countries should participate in assisting foreign ones which are in poverty and an unlivable situation. Despite the fact that it is philanthropic tendency, some people have a negative orientation towards this statement; in light of the fact that the assistant country would cope with other issues, such as homelessness and unemployment. This essay will express my positive perspective on this statement and supportive reasons.

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More and more people around the world are learning English as a second or foreign language, even in countries where it is not used in daily life. What are the advantages and disadvantages to this?

These days,more and more folk are taking up the courses of English,which can be their second or foreign language regardless of that they require speak English or not in their life.In other words,the eagerness of learning English has risen dramatically in this modern life.There is no doubt that there are various advantages and disadvantages of learning English when people particularly do not need it.In this essay,I will address some benefits and drawbacks of this subject.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years Medicare reached fantastic discoveries and results in treatments so people can enjoy longevity and want to explore life further to get all the benefits despite their ages. While the changes brought many benefits, there are several drawbacks. Both views will be illustrated in this essay. Personally, I tend to see only the positive sides of this phenomenon and think life is too interesting to live it short.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

The assertion that people should be encouraged to pursue vocational training rather than go to university for academic study is a considerable topic of discussion. Many people argue that there is a lack of qualified tradespeople like electricians, carpenters and plumbers. This has nothing but significant implications on society. I personally believe that vocational training is as important as academic study.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.

Nowadays, some people think that doing experiment on animals is not allowed and we should stay away from, but other people believe that significant scientfic researchs can be done by animal experiments, personally, I prefer to stay away from hurting animals and the whole enviroments in general and try hard to find any alternative.

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An increasing number of people choose to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why do people want to change the way they look? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, physical exercises have a great impact on the human development. Few masses tend to do little and no physical activities that lead to health issues. This essay will analyse reasons for above statement along with solutions in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some believe that children nowadays have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, some individuals argued that children usually take a lot of time to do freedom activities. In my point of view, i disagree with the essay because with the advancement of technology, parents are able to control their sons or daughters to have a positive impact on their children's lives. Moreover, they will protect their children in safe areas for their children from criminal activities. So the children do not become criminals or victims in the future.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Pesronal development is a must for children growth, for which children needs to learn the difference between right and wrong. Many people believe that punishment is necessary for them to learn the difference while others believe that time and experience will help them understand this difference. Using this essay I will try to explain my reasons to believe that punishment is sometime necessary to help children distinguish the difference with specific examples.

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Nowadays many people prefer to study or live in foreign countries. While studying and living abroad brings many benefits to individuals, it also has a number of disadvantages. What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

In this contemporary epoch, a large proportion of individuals choose to live and study in foreign nations. This essay will delve into the various pros and cons that people face in their lives while living abroad.

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Some people think that team sports prepare children for work life but others think individual sports are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people think the best way for children be nimble, leader is to through in different team sports. It is undeniable that doing sports and interaction become an essential part of our life. Personally, I tend to think that it is not necessary to send your child to a sports section for his interaction with people.

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Topic: Obesity is a major healthy problem. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, A primary health issue is Obesity there are many causes of this problem. I personally believe, a behavioral diet and lack of exercise are the main roots of this problem. However, this point can be improved by the government and community.

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Present-day schools are as effective as it needs to be. Also, teachers at school do not attach enough Importance to the classes they run. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern era educational facilites are so efficient .As well as ,teachers at school do not pay attention sufficiently to the class .So ,I tend to agree with the 1st opinion because of some convincing reasons,but I can not go along with the 2nd idea for plausible reasons.In this essay I will touch the reasons of given statements whether I agree or disagree.

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Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers who make greater contributions to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many argue that the people who are employed in the most significant branches, such as medicine and education, should earn more than those who busy with sports and entertainment sectors as their importance is more. I totally disagree with this view. I believe that funding amusement and sports are also important for people's mental health and they contribute country's recognition.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry payment and land. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Despite the improvements in farming , a myriad of individuals are still hungry. Due to the poverty, many people faint from hunger all around the world. The best method to solve this issue is to give humans jobs that they are able to do.

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