IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 242

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Write advantages and disadvantages of co education

Since the revolution of education in this era,we have been introduced to various different education systems .Co-education is also the part of this change,playing a pivotal role in bringing the minds of all genders.Despite the mixed views about the topic,it has become important to be aware of such change,creating both positive and negative impacts in our lives.

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It is a natural process of animal species to become extinct (e.g. dinosaurs, dodos, etc.). There is no reason why people should stop this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

Animal species becoming extinct is a hotly debated topic that divides many opinions. Some people argue that people can not stop this damage. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement because of the many solutions that people can take to preserve the natural world. The below passages will clarify this argument.

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In many countries, people like to eat more food from other regions than can be grown in a local area. As a result, much of the food has to come from other regions. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many people especially for young people are like to eat food from other regions or even other countries like Korea, Japan, and so on. Should the government preserve the local food for people? Some people believe that eating food from other regions is one of the good achievement. However, I would argue that this is a negative development for people because there are many disadvantages if people eating food from other regions. This essay i will explain and elaborate why people have to eat traditional food rather than international cuisine. Some people especially for young people nowadays change their food habit from traditional to international cuisienes. This happen because many youngster always watching korean drama or any international movie and they interest to try those food. This trend makes changing food habit people, because many people in the past eat traditional food like chicken soup, and fried rice but nowadays, they do not eat this food again, they prefer to eat...

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The diagram below cells have one type of coal is used to produce electricity

The diagram illustrates how electricity is produced using a certain type of coal. Overall, it can be observed that the coal-manufacturing process consists of eight key steps, beginning with the collection of raw material from coal mines and ending with the distribution of electricity for both plant and residential use.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In an era which advertisement is considered as an important part of people’s daily lifes, many enterprises highlight their products’ new features in their marketing campaigns. In this essay, its reasons will be discussed and it is decided that whether it is a advantegous or disadvantegous enhancement.

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Social media have a negative impact do you agree or not

Most nation think that social media have malignant effect on youth.other people think social media are crucial for our lives today. In my opinion I think social apps have brought the worst to humanity today.

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In advertising nowadays, businesses usually highlight and emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why do businesses practice this? Do you think this development is a positive practice or a negative one?

The content of advertising industry has evolved significantly, over the past decades. While in the past almost all of focus of businesses was on emphasising on the high quality of their products, thses days most of them aim to attract customers by bolding the new and unique features of their goods.This essay discusses the underlying causes of this trend and my point of views regarding the influences of it. First and foremost, in this technology-driven era with the emergence of sevral high-profile businesses, competing just in terms of quality, has become difficult for companies. Thus they have to entice people by highliting the innovative and peculiar features of their merchandise. This appeal to novelty taps into a psychological phenomenon known as the "novelty effect," where people are more likely to be attracted to and interested in something new and unique. Taking Samsung and Apple two giant companies in mobile phone market, as an example, which both produce best quality phones,...

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Editors of public information release TV broadcasts and newspapers based on different factors especially viewers' preference. Humans can be accustomed to hearing negative news hence it would be advisable to release more of endearing stories. I would discuss these views extensively in this essay.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a common belief among many people that commercials are very important for the sale of a product. Conversely, others believe that it has lost it’s appeal due to overuse. I think, though traditional advertisement has lost it’s edge to some degree, new form of marketing has taken it’s place.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and are unable to afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Many people are trapped into debt by being consumptive for buying things that are not really important which they cannot afford. In my view, this behavior occurred because often people want to impress their peers. Moreover, impulsive buying can happen because people do not have enough knowledge about finance. This can be changed by being mindful to themselves, not actually paying attention to what other people are thinking.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

Numerous people claim, that money rules the world and the majority of individuals prefer to opt for an unloved job with a high income instead of exploring themselves and passing through this limited lifetime alongside a beloved occupation. Some people believe, this has become to be more common due to deep social involvement and unfairly raised living wages in recent years, however, the consequences resulting from such accidents are deplorable for both - the employer and the employee.

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The world of work is forever changing at a fast pace. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions for how people should prepare themselves for work in the future.

Nowadays, the work life has altered so fast and the people can not depend on the today’s job. Sometimes, the employee can be suddenly changed by other individuals or even by artificial intellegent. The reasons of this phenomena are because the development of technologies as well as low level of human quality so that some of suggestions should be made to tackle this situations. Both causes and advices will be elaborated below.

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space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the recent advancements in technolog, the idea of finding a new planet where humankind can reside is becoming more and more poupular. Since exploring space is a costly program, some people argue that this fund should be allocated to more essential areas. I agree with this point of view, and in the following essay, my idea will be supported with some rationale and examples.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both school and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

An optimal lifestyle is crucial in regards to the growth of child. Particularly, the child's muscles transformation needs healthy ingredients to be well-built. However, lots of children do not prefer to eat a nutritious food. Because of this, I wholeheartedly agree that it is a mutual responsibility of both parents and school to prioritize providing a nourishing food for the children. I believe that an unhealthy cuisine may have detrimental effects on the child's constitution.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate regarding many schools are enhancing the education's environments by allowing students to comment or criticize their lecturers. Otherwise, the opponents argue that it will reduce the respectation between learners and teachers. From my perspective, although this proposal theoretically has positive effect in educational quality, it also should be used as a stringent method in teaching.

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In their advertisements, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It has been a trend that a lot of business show new and creative part of their products these days. As technologies are improving rapidly, firms need new ways to advertise their goods which is a positive phenomenon.

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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Novel development of the online platform has been a considerable impact for the business and educational meetings according to the recent studies. Despite of its drawbacks, it has many more benefits, in the view of the writer.

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that online classes are the different mutation of campus, some college would like to hold this type of classes in their curriculum. Although this trend appears detrimental drawbacks because of the students' health as well as the distraction, I believe they are eclipsed by the advantages due to the conveniece and operational costs.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars

Over the past decade, traffic jams caused by cars have become a major concern in people's lives. This worrying trend needs to be analysed thoroughly to tackle this issue. It is argued that one of the significant reasons is increasing car ownership among the population. I strongly agree with the latter opinion. Therefore, this forthcoming essay will discuss other alternatives to cars, and other regularities that can be introduced by the government.

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Environmental problems are becoming a global issue and are challenging the quality of life.do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or should be addressed by individual countries?

In recent years, the environmental issues become global and impacted people's live quality around the world. In my opinion, this situation should be carried out globally instead of by individual countries, as we know that the output of environmental issues could be affected worldwide and if it is addressed by the synergy of many region it could be done faster and better.

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