IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 243

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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the plans show how a coastal land has developed into coastal park

The maps describe the transformation of coastal land into a park.

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“The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion? State your point and give reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is argued that to study English efficiently one should seek tutors who speak English as the first tongue. While others believe that it is equally beneficial to be taught under teachers whom English is not their first language. Moreover, foreign teachers will have a better understanding of the challenges one need to overcome to be fluent in English. However, I strongly disagree with the latter opinion. This forthcoming essay will discuss why I believe that being taught English by people who are originally from countries that have English as their first language.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

n today’s world, many developed countries are experiencing a substantial increase in life’s duration and that caused a big obstacle for the government. This essay will illustrate major problems and possible solutions to reduce detrimental impact for this issue.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is imp for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give opinion.

A number of individuals believe that adults need to involve their children to participate in group iniciatives, while other consider that young must be able to entertain themselves. This essay completely agrees with the first point of view, due to the fact that one of the parental duties is to help minors to learn right values and socially approved behaviour through collective interactions and cooperation.

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that working for global companies is better than a small one's. I agree with this statement because big company provide high chance of promotions and professional advancement for it members.

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Most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

, Social media just like any other thing in this life has its downsides and upsides, In that case, the downsides of social media are it separates the population from reality, folk get used to texting their friends instead of meeting them, it seems to me that it made social anxiety affects more individuals than the past.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

In today’s world, many developed countries are experiencing a substantial increase in life’s duration and that caused a big obstacle for the government. This essay will illustrate major problems and possible solutions to reduce detrimental impact for this issue.

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in recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to combat this issue?

From the past few years, the use of banned drugs in the competitive games has become surged drastically in order to boost athlete's' performance, resulting into a number of alarming consequences what should be highlighted and be addressed at the earliest by finding out some appropriate solution of the same. Both are the outcomes and solutions will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think competitive sport is important for a child's education. Others think it has negative effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued that competitive sports in important for children’s education. while other believe it could be detrimental for the child. This essay believes that, although it could be distracting for students, it has greater good because it could teach them to be more sportive in nature.

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Children can learn different things about the world by watching films. What kinds of things do children learn by watching films? Are all these things good for children?

It is generally said that videotapes teach offspring various concepts and skills. Though I think this is true to a great extent, I hardly think all that they learn from those are beneficial.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Few people thinks that in order to be happy in life, one should have lot of money. Because with more money indivisuals can fulfill their dreams and might help others by giving charity and as well as donations. However, gaining happiness in life through money is not the only way, this is something others might gain by loving their parents and also by hangingout with friends.

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Write advantages and disadvantages of child labour.

As we explore our culture , we are known to silent struggle of innocent adolscents behind the doors of factories,farms and industries.Such suppression of innocent smiles is considered child labour.Beside the mixed reviews about this topic,child labour has become a growing trend nowadays,making it a crucial scenario to discuss.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Financial support from governments is crucial for the quality of individuals' lives. Some dwellers insisit that related department should extend the funds on railways instead of roads. From my perspective, although railway system ought to be supported, I do not consider that the development of roads are supposed to be regardless.

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Global companies are gaining more popularity among third-world countries. The main advantages of this are that they generate more employment in a country and provide good benefits to employees. However, the major drawbacks are long working hours and unsecured jobs.

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Due to aircraft will pollute the environment and affect climate change, and should not be grounded. Do you agree or disagree?

It’s sometimes argued that since flights produce air pollution with emissions, it’s necessary to remove airplane from transport services. In my opinion, it would be wrong to ban flight services in any country. Airplane is a convenient and indispensable transportation, and it helps people across the country and reach anywhere by only taking a short period of time. Without the services provided by airlines, it can cause a big change in people’s transportation behavior and further damage the global economy.

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Studies have shown that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave. Do you agree or disagree?

A group of people believe that the best option to reduce crime is to educate prisoners in prison. Because the researcher's results have illustrated that many criminals have a low degree of education. I completely agree with these thoughts.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings other create housing by building houses on a wider area of land what solution is better?

Some cities prefer to build taller properties for their residents and some prefer to build wider ones. Building skyscrapers and high rises is a better idea in these days, because we are facing problems about space for living and also tall buildings are more attractive for people who want to buy them.

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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problem in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, in the modern age, the internet has brought advantages and disadvantages to our world. It makes our life easier. Furthermore, people can do many things without standing from the sofa. Let’s discuss the pros and cons that we have on the internet.

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In many countries, young people are granted certain privileges and responsibilities at the age of sixteen. Clearly parents have responsibility to both care of and prepare their children as they approach this important milestone. To what degree should parents intervene in in the lives of their fourteen and fifteen year old children.

In most of countries teenagers with age of sixteen and more are awarded some superiority by government which makes them to become more responsible about their actions and watch out their behavior properly. It is obvious that as a duty for parents of under the age of sixteen children, they are destined to guide their children how they need to assume their responsibilities correctly.

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The government is spending a lot of money discovering other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problem of the public. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, with the development of new technologies, governments tend to pay money to explore the universe. Some citizens believe that the government wasting money and must spend money on solving community issues. I partially disagree with the statement. In this essay, I will argue my own opinion.

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