IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 364

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. IELTS Essay Sample Answer (1)

Some people think that there are many pleasant entertainments and games we can do with our children, which can help us to improve their aptitudes and possibilities more than a book reading. I'm not agree with this state for several reasons. I think that people who are convinced on it - have no clue that there is the significant difference between playing and reading, on their root, and they are developing a variety of skills.

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"Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Regarding the fact that we are living in the modern world, there are quite a few people make an effort to determine new profitable approaches to parenting issues. Consequently, a considerable number of people firmly state that fathership ought to get the same hype and attention as mothership, while the other majority of people unanimously denounce and claim that motherhood is the most important and responsible side of the parenting. Personally, I hold the view that we should ponder over this tender subject equally and properly. The following essay targets to support the mentioned statements above with appropriate reasons and examples.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as uch information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Opinion are devided on whether it is good to share any information or whether important and valuable information must not be spreaded freely. While I may acknowledge the reasons behind the former view, I still firmly support the latter.

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The cost of international travel is decreasing, and so the trend of international tourism is increasing in many countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the rising trend of tourism for countries?

International travelling is lower the cost than before, therefore trend of global tourism is growing in many nations. There are some good positive ways to develop the economy and cultural exchange. Nevertheless, it has drawbacks which the regional culture will be lost and they will appreciate different cultures in the world.

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People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays health care plays a significant role in our life. Many illnesses are caused by bad behaviors of human, they choose unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets. That’s why they should pay more for their decisions to rescue their health. I absolutely agree with this point of view. In my opinion, this is the best way to teach people how to be directly responsible for their health.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some say that music is a good method of uniting individuals of diverse cultures and generations. This essay agrees with this opinion because , firstly music is a universal language and relished is enjoyed by everyone. Moreover, People are free to speak up, through music, some artists can deliver social messages that can reach people regardless of their without judgment by ages and cultures.

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People who cause their own illnesses through unhealthy lifestyles and poor diets should have to pay more for health care. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believed that Individuals who develop illnesses as a result of unhealthy lifestyles and poor dietary habits should be subject to increased healthcare costs. Personally, I completely disagree with this view as the root causes do not actually originate from themselves.

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News editor decide what to to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we bacame used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Regarding the fact that we are living in the modern world there are quite a few peopla make an effort to determine new profitable approaches to journalism issues. Consequently, a considerable number of people firmly state that it would be better to spread good news more than bad ones, while the other majority of people unanimously denounce and claim that it does not matter whether it is good or bad, any type of news should be reported. Personally, I hold the view that we should ponder over this tender subject equally and properly. The following essay targets to support the mentioned statements above with appropriate reasons and examples.

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The most important aim of science should be to improved people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is said that the most significant purpose of science should be to enhance people's quality of life. I strongly agree with this opinion because of people's challenges and their effects on their well being.

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Many people join distance learning programs ( study materials, post, tv,internet and study at home) but some people think that it cannot bring same benefits as attending colleges or universities. Do you agree or disagree?

In my perspective people who learn from distance are unable to achieve merits offered attending colleges and universities. Theoritical studies are not the only thing that college has to offer, it is a way of socialisation, learning communication skills, sense of competition, etc. People can learn a lot of things from distance learning programs aswell but in comparison merits of attending colleges are through the roof.

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Many feel that going to the gyms is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both view and give your own opinion,

It is true that, being fit is crucial to the population. Many people feel that staying fit is the best method for going to gym while others say that there are more productive measures. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory in high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A group of people discuss about the highschooler going to participate in free social work like raising funds, coaching kids sports, and helping their neighbours. This discussion is running about whether the unpaid social work for teenagers is mandatory or not and the reason behind them.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important

Individuals believe that exercise is important for immune system, while others think that taking a diet is more necessary to stay healthy. In this essay we are going to discuss both views due to the fact that exercise is a key to keep person physically fit and mentally wellbeing and a balanced diet plays a shield role for protecting against diseases. Doubtless, both views are needed for being healthy, however not being a fitness freak I mostly believe the power of the proportional diet.

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Regarding the fact that we are living in the modern world, quite a few people make an effort to determine new profitable approaches to charity issues. Consequently, a considerable number of people firmly state that affluent countries should aid other poorer nations, while the other majority of people unanimously denounce and claim that the governments of those needy societies ought to take care of their citizens by themselves. Personally, I hold the view that we should ponder over this tender subject equally and properly. The following essay targets to support the mentioned statements above with appropriate reasons and examples.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a lot of people are moving to cities from countrysides, as a result the population in countrysides is falling down. The society split into two parts, one group of people thinks that this has a positive impact, another group thinks the opposite.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, students in universities have dilemma about the educational system. One group of people convinced that it is important to concentrate on the specialization that you learn, however another group thinks that it is positive activity to learn another subjects besides the major one. It is important to sort out the pros and cons of these opinions.

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Many countries face the problem of low voter turnout in their democratic elections. What are the problems associated with it and suggest solutions?

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All over the world, people watch foreign films much more than locally produced films. Why? Should the government provide financial support to local film industries?

Many people around the world prefer to watch foreign films rather than that are produced in their own countries. This essay will discuss some causes why this has occurred. In my opinion the government should support the local film industries by providing financial aid.

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In some countries, more and more parents begin to teach their children at home rather than send them to school. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, home schooling has been popular in many countries, where Parents prefer to teach their children in their own house rather than take them to school. personally, I feel that the drawbacks of this are more considerable than the benefits, which I will outline below.

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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly. Why is it? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is true that today everything can be gained easily, and this causes people to have strong desire to finish things instantly . There could be several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a negative trend.

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