IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 368

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the fact that making a reduction in the amount of pollution from environment and housing problems may prevent humans’ beings from illness and disease. This essay is devoted to discussing why it is entirely necessary for the ministry to concentrate on this action.

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There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In contemporary times, globalisation has benefited the world by accumulating people, business and nations. Where as a few people are not satisfied by this change and are standing in the way of progress. This essay agree with this statement. It will discuss how the businesses are benefited with the help of globalisation. Followed by that, it will discuss how it is contributing in developing and gathering people or nations together.

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People continue to recommit crimes even after being penalized for their wrongdoings. Why do you think this happens? How can crimes be stopped?

It is becoming a trend where, criminals commit repeated felony despite being punished in the past. There are plathora of reasons contributing to this behaviour such as depression, unemployment, etc,. Government and other Health Institutes should come forward and aid people with criminal past to overcome their bad attitude towards society.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Several processed food and beverage products have been known contain high amounts of glucose, which in return deteriorate the medical state of humans. However, there is contention over whether their prices should be increased in order to discourage their consumption. I personally believe that such harmful produce should be made less affordable as not only will this encourage consumers to look for further, healthier alternatives, but it also has the potential to decrease the frequency at which they intake such damaging items.

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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have a greater role in raising children. Others claim that men are just as good as women in parenting. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

It is argued that females are better in parenting as compared to men and that is why they have a major rule in child upbringing. While other people believe that both men and women are equal in parenting. In my point of view, women win in this arguement . This essay will describe both views in detail.

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some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both these views and give yourown opinion.

Some individuals claim that professionals, like doctors and engineers, should be enforced to work in the country where they received their training. On the contrary, others think that such professionals should have the freedom to work in another country.

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advnces technology and automation have reduce the need for manual labour To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology is flourishing in leaps and bounds in every field and therefore, there has been a constant decline in man power. It is an undeniable fact that robots are replacing humans. I will discuss the effect of aforementioned statement conclude my opinion in the following passages.

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It is important for children to learn what is right and what is wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree? What sort of punsihment should be given?

It becomes very vital to understand which the matter is right or wrong for kids at an early age. Society believe that punishment is crucial as a way to assist children learn about difference. I totally disagree with this statement because this will provide an emotional pain and children are unable to learn in dept maximally. Moreover, I strongly believe that firm warning is best method for this case.

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some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from should be raised considerably.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, many people are living longer than they used to, there are some of reasons why people think the age of people retire is too soon and should be raised. One of the reasons is when they have retired, they do not have enough money to live and do not know what to do in their retirement. It can make them frustrated, bored and hopeless. But at the other point, when people have prepared for their retirement, they can enjoy their pension and live happily.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In some nations, people are getting keen on exploring the history of the building they live in. They feel curious looking for hidden story of the house. There are some reasons that will be explained in this essay why buyers desire to investigate the resident.

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Some people believe that scientists have the greatest influence on the world. Other people think that the influence of politicians is greater. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There have been arguments that people in scientific fields hold the largest impact on the world, whereas many believe that the political people's influence is much greater. In my opinion, although the advance in the fields of science brings about influential developments that could affect other's lives, it is those who work in politics who have the power to affect the way the world functions.

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Many people believe that it is better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are many methods to have an information or knowledge by the society or by themselves. Some people said that learning in groups could be more beneficial compare to seeking information knowledge by independently. However, I strongly agree that acquire a knowledge in a group more effective than individually.

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Water is a natural resources that should be free. Government should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environment is playing a crucial role in people's lives by providing fresh air, water and other important resources. Many individuals stated that water is an essential need, so it should be provided cost-free.Therefore, higher authorities should take a strict action on the business of water. I am partially disagree with the above notion and my supporting viewpoints are mentioned in the following paragraphs.

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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaurs, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

, There is many consideratons that whether or not people are responsible for protecting animal species from extinction. Although it may be true that people do not need to intervene in the extinction of animals, the writer agrees with the former and holds a belief that there are several reasons to protect them.

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These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. Do the advantages of online shopping outweigh the disadvatages?

Some people today choose to do online shopping rather than old way shopping because more benefit has been offered than the disadvantages. In my opinion, online shopping have several benefits and less disadvantages. This leads to more society has influenced to do online shopping more than the conventional one.

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International communities should act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce their consumption of fossil fuels, e.g. gas and oil. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there is a significant increase in the consumption of fossil fuels in order to spur economic development. However, this causes a range of ecological problems, such as air pollution and energy crisis. Therefore, some people claim that all countries should reduce the use of fossil fuels. I tend to agree with the view.

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In some countries, many people do not have enough money to access the internet. Should governments be responsible for ensuring that everyone can get access to the internet?

The Internet has changed the way we perceive day to day activities. It has affected major walks of life and given entertainment a new perspective. Majority of the western countries have digitally revolutionised and everyone has access to the internet while in other parts of the world it is still considered as a luxury. It is often argued that governments should be responsible for ensuring that everyone can get access to the internet. I personally do not believe that it is the government’s responsibility to provide free internet access to everyone as it is quite an unreasonable demand. In this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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Today, the majority of children are raised by their grandparents since their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family

Today, childrens are taken care by their grandparents because their parents choose to have 9 to 5 job. I am of the opinion that it does not cause hindrance to a large extent as they are surrounded by well support system. However, this phenomenon has some downside which shall be discussed in the following passages.

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Around the world, people are now living longer than ever before in the past. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a discussion that, nowadays, people are living longer rather than before. Some problems appear from those phenomena. This essay will explore both the advantages and disadvantages of these issues.

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CYCLISTS AND CAR DRIVERS TODAY SHARE THE SAME ROAD CAUSE SOME PROBLEMS. WHAT ARE THE PROBLEMS? WHAT CAN BE DONE TO REDUCE THESE PROBLEMS?

Two wheeler and four wheeler vehicles share the same path leads to different issues specially in the urban areas. It causes a heavy traffic congestion and because of that people get frustrated and it leads them to a serious fight and arguements.

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