IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 363

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development?

Technological headway, both in software and hardware, has brought about a great deal of changes in our lives, one of which is the increasing use of robots both in our homes and in the workplace. I believe that it is a change for the better.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case ? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Mobile phones are becoming more popular among younger age and some of them spend more screen time than others on a daily basis. The root causes of this situation are the easy access to gadgets and lack of parental control. Therefore, I believe it can be seen as a negative trend because it leads to bad social development along with academic performance.

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Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, most of the people believe that using electronic devices like phones and computers has a harmful influence on children's reading and writing skills. I strongly disagree with this statement. People know the benefits of using smartphones and computers in reading and writing. So, why do they do not allow their child to use it ?

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Some people think that the best way to reduce the time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals argue that replacing parks and gardens close to city centers with apartment buildings for commuters is the best approach to reducing commuting time, while others oppose this idea. Both perspectives have valid points, but I believe a balance between urban development and green spaces is essential for a sustainable and livable city.

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Some people say that Art ( eg Painting, Music, Poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an opinion that just naturally talented people should make art, while others believe that art can be produced by everyone. Art as any other profession should be tought at unversities, and it requires special skills. However, art is still more about emotions and if individual can create something that provokes feelings they can surely call themselves an artists. In my opinion, art is for anyone who wants to express their emotions through music, painting or poetry.

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Nowadays, some buildings such as offices and schools have open space designs instead of separate rooms. Why is it so? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, a number of architectures usually design open space for encouraging community activities as there are some society trend that the interaction between thee people is less than before. It is because the people are more incline to spend time to enjoy their own hobbies. I believe it has positive affects on our whole society. I would like to introduce some reasons why I think that.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Instead of staying in rented house, it is preferred to stay in own home in many places of the world. This essay will discuss the possible causes of this situation and also in my opinion it is positive thing, and I will advocate in favor of my Opinion.

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some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Although many people believe that advertising are becoming to something ordinary and unimportant due to grab people’s attention, others are stating that advertising convince us completely in order to purchase their productions. In my point of view, I consider that advertising is constantly more powerful than imagine.

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Climate change is a phenomenon that affects countries all over the world. Many people strongly believe that it is the responsibility of individuals, rather than corporations and governments, to deal with this problem.

Some people believe that environment issues is not important because the climate change is a regular cycle of the Earth, which happening independent of human actitivities. Others think that the impact of human being in the nature in the last fifty years is much more harmful than scientists and media say. I tend to agree with the second group. In this essay, we will explore both aspects and discuss the implications of each point of view

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Beyond daily communication, social media has also been used as a platform of spreading news events. Owing to this development, many people now have instant access to current issues. Despite the convenience and efficiency, I personally believe there are more disadvantages in such excessive use of social media.

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Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals posit that how a building looks is crucial, while others believe that the purpose of the building plays an essential role in design. Personally, I believe that the aim of the building is a vital factor in the construction since it must have demand among residents and have financial potential in the future.

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Many feel that happiness is mainly an individual responsibility while others feel that there are important external factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Happiness plays a crucial role in people's lives. Many say that individuals are the reasponsible to get ownhappiness where as others argue that there are some other external factors also contribute to getting happiness. This essay discusses the both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Most people think that it is better for children to start learning a foreign language earlier. This statement has its both prons and cons. I will try to focus on the most importants facts and answer the question that might appear in future parents mind. Do advantages outweight the disadvantages?

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Many children who are home-schooled are not prepared for university at the same rate of children in government-funded schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

In present day, some children are being home schooled with private teachers for various reasons. Children who are home-schooled do not get the same opportunity to make contacts and connections or have the same social context compared to their peers who are attending government-funded schools. This essay will explore the causes of this and what consequences this has on the society.

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Nowadays, more people would instead purchase food than cook at home. ‎What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?‎

In recent years the trend of eating outside food has become common, because people feel it is easier and convenient rather than preparing

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Government should spend money on railways rahter than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In the modern world, transportation plays a crucial role in many people's lifestyles and impacts their environment. There are impacts to the cost of living of people. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this viewpoint because transport by train is less price and can solve the traffic jam problems.

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Task 2 : What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

Nowadays, no one can be negative the importance of biodiversity, in recent years, it is dangerous because of humans destruction. In my opinion, we need to have actions coming from the side of government and individual to protect the world is plants and animals.

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Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we much return to the older and more traditional of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To begin with, it is very important to respect our families and people who surround us. Nowadays, our young generation would like to be more careful with this statement. Their must understand how to respect older people and they affect to our generation with a bad attitude. I am definitely agree with the statement that we must show respect to older people and local community.

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Some people believe that criminals should be put into prison as long as possible. However, others believe that it is necessary to educate those people in local community. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowdays, there is an opinion that criminals should be prisoned for a longer time periods, however some believe that it would be better for a society to educate those people. It is not a trivial question, and have complex sides, it would be better to help find a way to return an ordinary live for some criminals, on the other hand some of them do not deserve a second chance. For my personal opinion, those who killed, raped, physically abused others do not deserve to have an access education.

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Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that aid money is misspent by the governments that receive it and therefore international aid should not be given to poor countries. Discuss these two points of view and give your opinion.

In this modern era, helping tendency is reduced around the world. A large number of people think that nations should have a moral policy to help each other while others opine that assists are misused by the local officials and governments besides help for needed residents, so International aid should not be provided to the developing nations. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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