IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 367

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that there are many reasons that can motivate a person to keep working for the same company whereas others say that money is the main reason. Do you agree or disagree

There are numerous factors that drive our motivation to work for the same company for a long time period. Whilst proponents of a notion believe that the finance is the main reason that engages employees at work, others share an opposing view so to say they claim the number of factors that influence an employee to be loyal are far more than one. It is my contention that despite there are many points that can leave a significant impact on individuals' lives, one of them can be elicited depending on the conditions.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching television?

In these days, watching television is one of the most famous leisure activities among children.However, a large number of people worry about whether TV has good effects on children or if it is dangerous to them. In this essay, I will look at plus and minus sides and try to clarify both sides.

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Playing computer games only has negative effects on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays video game industry is a huge trend, and society claim that games has negative effect on children. I strongly diasgree with this statement, first of all, because most of computer games have a lot of positive ascpets, and can be used to teach children using gamefication factor.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these point of views and give your opinion.

Some people prefer working at one company whole life, while others believe that is a better to have experience at working in a different organizations. To have a job at one company gives stability and frees from worries about the future. On the other hand changing working places accelerate salary grows, and gives new experince. In my opinion, it would be better to try and change work place.

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Many people believe that the current system of both teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050

Most people thought the way of teaching and learning in the classroom will be disappear in 2050. I highly disagree with this notion as the current growth of technology, it will help to give new additional solutions to enhance current method of teaching and artificial intelligence will not replace human interactions.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people support the idea that wild creatures should not be kept in the zoos while others consider that there are pretty good reasons for having zoos. However, personally I am against developing zoos and in the following passage both of these opinions are going to be discussed.

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It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree?

In contemporary times, there is no longer an imperative to physically travel to a location in order to gain insight into its culture. Can one acquire knowledge about a place without visiting it in person? I contend that it is indeed feasible to familiarize oneself with a locale through online resources rather than being physically present there. If individuals have access to relevant resources, they can acquire a comprehensive understanding without the need for travel. I strongly support this notion and offer several reasons to substantiate my stance.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults,compared with a number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages

In our rapid world, the residents of some countriesare alarge proportion of young and adults, these quantities compared with the figure for the older population. These two groups produce advantages and some times disadvantages. In this essay, I will compare these groups and find whether the main solution outweighs this or not.

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People say it is the responsibility of the residents to keep the environment clean and tidy while others think it is the government's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion with examples.

It is believed by a group of crowds that to keep the environment clean and tidy is the residents' burdens, in parallel, a great deal of the folks reckon that the responsibility ought to be arranged by the government. From my prospect, I partially agree with both thoughts.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smart phones. Why is this, the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.

Progressing technology and availability of electronic gadgets have resulted in spending excess time on cellphones or tablets, especially, among the younger generations. While some would argue that the overall impact of this trend has been positive, in this essay I would contend that the utilizing smartphones by school children would constitutes some potential risks and also explain some sources of this phenomenon.

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The movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

Nowadyas, urbanization is one of phenomenon that is created by condition of fulfill human's need. The migrataion of people from rural areas to urban areas for work is more intensified recently as people want to get a bigger opportunity for the job. Hovewer, it might cause severe impact in both areas.

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Some people prefer to travel around town by car, while others prefer public transit such as bus, train or subway. Discuss both these positions and give your own opinion.

There are various modes of transport in the world we live today, some individuals prefer to use private cars in towns for better roaming while others love to use public transport due their relaibilty and less struggle for parking slots. I belive it is wise to use buses, trains and subway.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Some would argue that data from science study, biz and the academical world should be given for society without limits, while others say that strategical info must be accepted separately and used in moderation. While free access to any kind of knowledge provides to high increase of new discovery, I believe that it is better to be realistic and continue to limit some intelligence.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In contemporary epoch, a large proportion of the population is moving to metropolitian areas due to which the percentage of people residing in villages is reducing continously. I wholeheardly believe that it is a negative development for the nation because it leads to inflation and the environmental damage in cities is also increasing relentlessly.

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Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern era, there has been a growing tendency of individuals to eat fast food which leads some people to suggest that all eating places should give information on nutritional composition on each menu. Personally, there are many benefits of this idea outweigh the drawbacks and this essay will discuss about it.

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many University students live with their families, while others live away from home because the universities are in different place what are the advantages and disadvantages of both situation ?

A faction of students stay with their families during studying at university, while others live seperately due to longer travel distance from their home to university. This essay will delve into the merits and demertis of both phenomenon with relevant illustrations.

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Some believe that the government should provide free education for all levels (primary, secondary, and university). Others believe that students should pay for the university by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is opinion that government should finance and give accsess to all levels of education, starting from primary school and finishing with unversity, however on other hand some people believe that students should be able to afford their degree by themselves. Everyone should have right to education, and that is the governments role to provide citizens with it. Still universities teach more advanced knowledge therefore, not everyone need to have a degree. In my opinion, affordable education will increase level of specialists in market and that will improve economy.

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New editors dedecide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. what factors do you think influence this descisions? do we become used to bad news and would it better if more good news was reported?

these days broadcasting information edited and selected by reporters. In my opinion, there are

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There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this generation, most people are moving to other countries for their life development purposes. From my perspective, citizens are immigrating from their home country to another foreign land for a different lifestyles Because of this process, the immigrants can express their talents and skills. Most countries will demand for particularly skilled people, who are not available in their nation. Hence, the country is protecting the immigration level by implementing this method. On the other side, shifting citizens to foreign nations have both positive and negative impacts. So, I will discuss both topics in detail below.

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It is better for young adults to move away from their family home than to continue to live with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

Choosing to move away from the family home in early adulthood is a noble decision. There is a big segment of youths who are in a favour of getting away from their parents. Personally, I strongly believe that adult groups have to begin a new life without families in order to develop their personalities.

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