IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 367

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

band

Today many young people change their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

It’s common that today’s youngn people change their jobs frequently.I think this state of affairs due to two main reason, futhermore I think the state has this own advantages and disadvantages,however the former is greater than the latter.

band

Many people in the music business feel that illegal music sites on the internet are a serious threat to the industry and more should be done to prevent them from operating. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Overall, I agree with the statement that there are so many websites on the internet which are not legal, and these sites impose a serious risk to the whole music industry. Also some actions must be taken in order to stop these sites from working.

band

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answers. Include a relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

It is principal for people to take risks in personal and professional lives. People who can take risks will receive new experiences and knowledge for their lives. I think the benefit of taking risks outweigh the drawback because people who try to take risks will more satisfied about their lives. In this essay, I will compare the benefit with the drawback of taking risks.

band

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the number of people who live in cities are increasing due to existing of welfare services and entertainment facilities. In the majority of countries around the world, people are emigrating from village to city. Although, It seems to me that it can be a negative development, In this essay I will explore the aspects and give my opinion.

band

Some people feel that developments in science are happening so fast that it is difficult for people to appreciate the effect of such advantages. Others feel we should trust scientist more and stop worrying.

Several people have this sentiment that science is developing rapidly and it causes people to take it for granted of its benefits. The opposite argue that society should put more trust in scientists and seeing it in optimistic manner. I would say that the later opinion is more compelling for me and I will explain it further in the next paragraphs.

band

In many countries, the scale of deforestation has increased over the past few years. What are the causes of this issue and what potential solutions can be proposed?

Deforestation has been said to grow into a worldwide problem in recent years. The writer of this essay believes that the situation stems from the illegal logging and the expansion of farm land, both of which can be addressed by the proposal of national parks.

band

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads

Nowadays , Governments are showing high interest in developing the countries as well as cities. Some people argue that the government should not spend more money on developing roads rather than they should money on constructing railways. I agree with the statements and reasons are discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.

band

some people get into debt by buying things they dont need and cant afford . what are the reasons for this behaviour? what action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

In many nations people are getting into debt by borrowing more money from bank, financial houses and from other investment firms this problem is getting bigger everyday. Several people are buying unwanted things which is not needed for their life and they are paying too much for those products and service. This essay gives the major causes for this unwanted buying things and solutions to prevent this problem.

band

Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own

The debate over whether playing sports as part of a team or as an individual is more effective remains contentious in the realm of sports. It is evident that Assessing the significant impact of each playing style on a player's performance is a challenging task. While team play appears to offer greater competitive advantages, some athletes excel when performing individually. This essay seeks to delve into both perspectives.

band

Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Establishing a good work environment is essential for every buisness. It is sometimes argued that building strong bonds with other colleageus are not necessary, as the main goal is to concentrate on the work. I completely disagree with this view, and following I will explain in more details.

band

People's shopping habits depend on the age group they belong to than any other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Individuals in different age stages may have various appetites for shopping. Although age may impose some influences on people's shopping decisions, I do not consider it is the dominate factor.

band

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option? What sort of punishment should teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Never before has teaching young individuals what is correct or incorrect become significantly crucial during the early development stage. Considereably, punishment is used as a tool to provide lessons to student in the light of knowing the right and wrong. However, it is argued that education at the nurturing stage should not been entirely supplant by executing punishment. Analyzing the counteractive impacts of punishment to student's mental health and maturity development.

band

In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

In ancient time, teachers used to teach majority of the scholars in classrooms with face-to-face methods. In this modern era, most of the teachers are using digital technologies to teach their sophomores. Although, using new devices for teaching their trainees are not effective as compared to physical attendance in the classrooms. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of traditional and using up-to-date gadgets.

band

In some countries, birth rates are falling and experts say that by 2050 these countries will have far more adults aged 65 and over than children under 15. What problem might this cause in the future? Can anything be done to solve this issue?

In numerous countries around the world, a profound demographic shift is underway, characterized by declining birth rates and an aging population. Experts predict that by 2050, these nations will face the unprecedented challenge of having a significantly larger population of adults aged 65 and over than children under 15. While this demographic trend reflects advancements in healthcare and socio-economic development, it also presents a host of complex challenges for societies. This essay will explore the problems posed by this demographic imbalance and propose potential solutions to mitigate its adverse effects.

band

Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often said that developments in science, technology and society in over a decade have brought us a different life that could expand our living quality, so that is why we are living the life that is worth the most. From my perspective, I partially agree with this opinion and I will elaborate on it in the following paragraphs.

band

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today’s world, people often gain fame more for their glamour and wealth than their achievements, and this is a bad example for the young generation. In my view, this can be both good and bad for young people and in this essay I will provide reasons to my point.

band

Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions.Do you agree or disagree?

People argue that spending money on developing public libraries is not suitable in today's technology-driven world. However, integrating modern technology can be an effective way to reduce maintenance costs. I agree with this statement, and in this essay, I will discuss the advantages of using technology.

band

The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future.

In this fast growing world, people cannot rely on doing the same work or having the same working environment for their whole life. It could be because of the growing technology where most of the repetitive works are substituted by the machines and robot and less man power are needed and also people tend to look for new talents and challenges in new working conditions rather than locked themselves in their comfort zones.

band

As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Advancement of technology in communication and transportation has catalized glabalisation. This phenomenon created more shared common things and values within global citizen. Some people assume that globalisation can disrupt nation's identity and eventually will make cultural heritage vanished. I am agree with people's assumption because new generations are prone to adapt the new culture and many of them are passionate with assimilated culture.

band

Recently, many people around the world prefer buying imported food to local food. Personally, this writer believes that because of the excellent quality and the local climate have created this trend and it can be solved by raising more fund to develop the local agriculture.

First of all, it must be understood that the quality of imported food is one of the factors that affect people’s decision. This is because food which is exported to another country always nutritious and they were cultivated in modern environment. Furthermore, imported food such as vegetables or fruits are usually exotic to the local region. Therefore, they will appeal local people to buy and ignore local products, leading to the reduction of local food’s sale. For example, nowadays, many people in Vietnam prefer buying strange food from other countries due to their good effects on health.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.