IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 464

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some believe that sport competitions are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore, youth should be banned from participating in sport competitions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Allegedly, sport competitions and their effects in youths' lives are given significant attention. Many individuals believe that youths should be banned from participating in sport competitions, so as a consequence they give additional emotional stress. I agree youths should be aware about their mental well-being, and some sport races may disrupt their mental health, but engage in competitions can edeavour them to be more contious about real life issues.

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Some people think it would be better if the whole family (uncles, aunts, and grandparents) were involved in bringing up children rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

some people hold the view that was close relative to participate in raising children, it would be beneficial instead of only mothers and fathers. In my opinion, due to people's differences in terms of giving the amount of love to the child as well as the diversity of behaviour, I tend to disagree with this approach.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own pinion.

Many folks state that main aim of studying a foreign language is only to do trips or occupation in a foreign country. Whereas said that they are not the only purpose why individual have to study about a foreign language. I will explain both opinions regarding this issue.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The advancement in technology is effecting the education sector in numerous ways. Now, lessons and classes are not restricted to traditional ways of using black-board and chalk, but through laptop, tablets, and smart-boards. This evolution has both prons and cons and I feel that disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Most museums require a entrance fee while the rest are free.I believe that this generates income to the survival of these places, and gives a value to the history and generate foreign revenue to a country. However , the unaffordability for the poorer is the major drawback of the above. Yet , I think benifits of taking a fee from entrees outweight the drawbacks of it.

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It Getting promotion is one of the biggest driver for people to apply to themselves and work hard in the modern workplace. Why do you think people are so driven to get promotion? What other factors influence people to work hard?

It is true that promotion plays a crucial role in human lives. Promotion is one of the most required aim for the population through hard work in these modern-era. Salaries and passion are the main reason for people like to get that and there are some other factors also influenced to put hard work which is satisfaction. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Each person’s condition in this world is not the same. Some people are rich while others do not even have a dollar in their wallet. Some people think accepting a bad condition, for example lack of money and unsatisfying job, is better than trying to improve such conditions. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail then provide evidence as to why trying our best to change the situations is better.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is claimed that, punishing is very important for young ones to differentiate good and bad at an early childhood.In my conviction, penalties create strong memories to distinguish correct from wrong .Therefore, the writer wholeheartly agree with this statment but these punishments should be well crafted and it should be non physical in nature.

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As Earth runs out of natural resources, we have to started to look to space for solutions. However, some people argue that this is wrong thing to do, and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on Earth. To what extent to do you agree with them? What alternative might there be to exploiting space for natural resources?

People have started to look to space for the solution with our earth running out of natural resources problem. Although, some people think that it is not a right thing to do. They think that people should look for alternatives solutions on our Earth. What statement is actually right? Are there any alternatives that might avoid exploiting space for natural recourses?

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Some people think that the government should decide which subject should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

On the one hand, many people are of the view that students should have choice to select their fields of studies. On the contrary, other are in ther favour of constant supervision for education. In my perspective, both authorities and individuals will get benefits, if scholars are properly guided.

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Some people work for the same organization all their life. Others think that it is better towork for different organizations. Discuss both thiese views and give your own opinion.

Whilst some people prefer working for the same organization their entire adult life, others argue that it is better to work for different organizations. I firmly believe that it is better for a person's career to change organizations, and, remaining loyalty to a firm is unlikely to be rewarded in the form of promotion or bonuses.

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in many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to latest fashion. why is this happening? is this a positive or a negative development?

It is true that fashion industry has been developing since the globalisation. In many nations, people adhere to the latest fashion by choose variety hairstyles and buy trendy costumes. People have more fashion sense and the media assists to the population to become more fashionable. This is a positive breakthrough and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their study. Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages.

It is true that studying in a foreign land is quite popular across the globe. These days, this is a part of their studies to going to abroad. This phenomenon has more benefits than drawbacks because it brings more benefits to students and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Intelligence is the most important component for leadership. Do you agree or disagree?

A common belief is whether intelligence plays the most significant part in human’s ability to lead a group of individuals. This is the opinion of this writer, however, a good leadership consisting of clear direction coupled with connection.

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Some people believe that universities should only offer places to students with high marks. While others believe that people of all ages should be allowed even if they don’t do well in school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education indeed plays a crucial role in people's lives. Some say that a university education is only for those who get high scores at their high school level whereas others opine that should be permitted all students without barriers of high academic scores even if they get lower marks. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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In some countries increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food.government should improse high tax rate agree or disagree

No doubt, In some nations high number of citizens having fast food in their diet, therefore they also deal with many health issues as well. I completely agree, if authorities increase taxes on the kind of food it saves their people from health problems such as obesity and leads the people towards healthy food items.

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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people feel that younger generation is happier than the older ones however, There are some individuals who are of the thought that adults are more happy then teenagers beside having more responsibilities.I personally feel that life in teens is better.I will discuss both the views in further paragraphs.

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Some think dangerous extreme sports such as skydiving and rock climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's generation, there are some individuals who love to live a life full of adventures; therefore to accomplish their goals, some take part in extreme activities including skydiving, rock climibing , river rafting etc. Few believe that these sports are dangerous and should be banned. Although there are arguments on both sides but I strongly feel that ban is not fair for some individuals who are professionally trained to participate.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Taxes, which belong to public schools should not be allocated by those parents, whose children are participating in private ones. I strongly agree with this view.

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Colour is a powerful tool that is used to great effect by manufactures and retail companies when they try to sell us something. In fact, many of the purchasing decisions we make are partly or largely influenced by colour. How true is this statement? How much does colour influence us when we buy something?

I think this statement is true, colour is a very powerful tool to sell us something. Colour plays a huge role in perception and influences human behavior and decision-making.

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