IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 480

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Something that everyone will agree about that we need to work to earn money and to meet our financial commitments. While some people prefer a casual or part-time job, I believe the full-time job is better than casual.

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Every year more and more students choose to study online rather than attend classes on campus. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Higher university students are now opting to recieve education through virtual lessons rather than take said lessons on traditional classrooms. This could be caused by the accesibility of virtual classes, as well as the popular use of digital platforms. Consequently, the solutions to this issues includes making attendance to the campus obligatory, as well as to adapt classrooms to a much modern setting.

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Some people believe that it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider the countryside to be more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some argue that raising their offspring in the urban area is more advantageous, while some argue that rural area has more benefits. While the countryside are more environmental friendly, the access to better education in the metropolis makes it a preferable place for children to live.

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Nowadays, there is a rapid increase of rubbish amounts all around the world. What are the main causes for it? What can be a solution, in your opinion?

Today, the amount of garbage on Earth is surging dramatically day by day. Our addiction of buying goods which we do not actually need and using too much synthetic materials every day cause this issue, and I believe this problem will be much harmful if we can shop at normal levels.

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Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat. Do you Agree or disagree?

Some people deem that parents should be liable for making their children obese. This essay agrees with this statement because healthy nutritional habits are responsibility of tutors and health problems associated to malnourishment on infants make even more kids become ill adults. However, even though these mentioned aspects, there are some moot points which we will discuss in the following lines.

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Teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage students . Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Educationists think that sending teenage students abroad via international exchange programs would benefit them a lot. Certainly there are both pros and cons of this so let me try to write my thoughts about it.

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Some believe that sport competitions are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore, youth should be banned from participating in sport competitions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Allegedly, sport competitions and their effects in youths' lives are given significant attention. Many individuals believe that youths should be banned from participating in sport competitions, so as a consequence they give additional emotional stress. I agree youths should be aware about their mental well-being, and some sport races may disrupt their mental health, but engage in competitions can edeavour them to be more contious about real life issues.

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Some people think it would be better if the whole family (uncles, aunts, and grandparents) were involved in bringing up children rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

some people hold the view that was close relative to participate in raising children, it would be beneficial instead of only mothers and fathers. In my opinion, due to people's differences in terms of giving the amount of love to the child as well as the diversity of behaviour, I tend to disagree with this approach.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own pinion.

Many folks state that main aim of studying a foreign language is only to do trips or occupation in a foreign country. Whereas said that they are not the only purpose why individual have to study about a foreign language. I will explain both opinions regarding this issue.

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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The advancement in technology is effecting the education sector in numerous ways. Now, lessons and classes are not restricted to traditional ways of using black-board and chalk, but through laptop, tablets, and smart-boards. This evolution has both prons and cons and I feel that disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Most museums require a entrance fee while the rest are free.I believe that this generates income to the survival of these places, and gives a value to the history and generate foreign revenue to a country. However , the unaffordability for the poorer is the major drawback of the above. Yet , I think benifits of taking a fee from entrees outweight the drawbacks of it.

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It Getting promotion is one of the biggest driver for people to apply to themselves and work hard in the modern workplace. Why do you think people are so driven to get promotion? What other factors influence people to work hard?

It is true that promotion plays a crucial role in human lives. Promotion is one of the most required aim for the population through hard work in these modern-era. Salaries and passion are the main reason for people like to get that and there are some other factors also influenced to put hard work which is satisfaction. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Each person’s condition in this world is not the same. Some people are rich while others do not even have a dollar in their wallet. Some people think accepting a bad condition, for example lack of money and unsatisfying job, is better than trying to improve such conditions. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail then provide evidence as to why trying our best to change the situations is better.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is claimed that, punishing is very important for young ones to differentiate good and bad at an early childhood.In my conviction, penalties create strong memories to distinguish correct from wrong .Therefore, the writer wholeheartly agree with this statment but these punishments should be well crafted and it should be non physical in nature.

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As Earth runs out of natural resources, we have to started to look to space for solutions. However, some people argue that this is wrong thing to do, and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on Earth. To what extent to do you agree with them? What alternative might there be to exploiting space for natural resources?

People have started to look to space for the solution with our earth running out of natural resources problem. Although, some people think that it is not a right thing to do. They think that people should look for alternatives solutions on our Earth. What statement is actually right? Are there any alternatives that might avoid exploiting space for natural recourses?

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Some people think that the government should decide which subject should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

On the one hand, many people are of the view that students should have choice to select their fields of studies. On the contrary, other are in ther favour of constant supervision for education. In my perspective, both authorities and individuals will get benefits, if scholars are properly guided.

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Some people work for the same organization all their life. Others think that it is better towork for different organizations. Discuss both thiese views and give your own opinion.

Whilst some people prefer working for the same organization their entire adult life, others argue that it is better to work for different organizations. I firmly believe that it is better for a person's career to change organizations, and, remaining loyalty to a firm is unlikely to be rewarded in the form of promotion or bonuses.

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in many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hairstyles according to latest fashion. why is this happening? is this a positive or a negative development?

It is true that fashion industry has been developing since the globalisation. In many nations, people adhere to the latest fashion by choose variety hairstyles and buy trendy costumes. People have more fashion sense and the media assists to the population to become more fashionable. This is a positive breakthrough and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their study. Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages.

It is true that studying in a foreign land is quite popular across the globe. These days, this is a part of their studies to going to abroad. This phenomenon has more benefits than drawbacks because it brings more benefits to students and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Intelligence is the most important component for leadership. Do you agree or disagree?

A common belief is whether intelligence plays the most significant part in human’s ability to lead a group of individuals. This is the opinion of this writer, however, a good leadership consisting of clear direction coupled with connection.

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