IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 488

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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some think increasing business and culural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the dissappearance of national identity. Discuss both Views and state your own opinion.

Around the globe, success of any country hinges on widen business and sharing traditional customs with other regions of world. Some individuals are considered it is a positive approach, while other beliefs it intends to diminish the personal identity of one nation. In this essay, both perspectives will be elucidate in detail with paramount examples. I myself, personally think it is beneficial to build up relation with other countries.

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In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more

The number of people attending classical music concerts or playing musical instruments has been decreased in many parts of the world. There are some pragmatic reasons why a decrease in the visitor numbers ensues and some of the benefits which young generation can invariably take advantage from.

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These days, school should focus more on producing young people who have the skills required to join the workforce, rather than focusing on academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is widely accepted nowadays that proffessions need manpower who is skillful. In this regard some believe that education should be based on these kinds of skills to introduce them to the actual job market rather than concentrating just on written and non-practical courses. This essay will argue that how significantly it is important to have talented and skilled workforce rather than educated only.

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Many people believe that formal "pen and paper" examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Paper-based examinations have long been part of a complex educational compatibility tests. A majority of people contend the notion that this methodology is not the most pragmatic way of measuring success in education centres. It is my contention that although handwritten exams are still popular in both schools and universities to validate someone's ability in education, I advocate that participating in case studies or problem-based exams are the most reliable method to conducting an educational background assessment.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, due to technology booming, most of the juniors are interested in using smartphones for its wide variety of functions. These kinds of gadgets bring innumerable merits for the children. However, it can have some irreversible negative impacts on youngsters. In my opinion it`s positive effects can easily overcome on its drawbacks.

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The most important aim of science ought to be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, some argue that the most noticeable purpose of science should be about fostering humans’ lives, while some others lay claim that the science is not just about human beings. Despite the fact that nowadays, science should be dedicated to every single creature, it appears to me that the whole aim of it is about people. The in-depth analysis in the following paragraphs intends to discuss why this essay agrees with this perspective.

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Some people move to other countries when they retire. Others think that it is better to retire in their home country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.

It is true that elderly people like to take rest when they getting old. Some persons migrate to other nations in retirement age whereas others say that getting relax in their territory rather than other places. This essay discusses it both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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Studies have suggested that children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons and what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things?

There has been a trend suggested by studies that children spend more hours watching TV rather than implement active and creative activities. This phenomenon can be ascribed to several factors and some solutions should be proposed to stimulate them to engage in more positive things.

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in some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. discuss both views and give your opinion

In various societies, while older people are considered an important part of society the younger generation is highly valued in the rest of the world. This essay will consider both views and then advocate the second view.

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Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

It is generally believed that the elderly people in search of career should struggle by contesting with younger generation in order to find suitable job. This essay will discuss main causes of this issue consisting lack of job opportunities and economical problem. This will also suggest solution to these problem including prioritizing based on senior citizens and creating more occupations.

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Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. •Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.

•While some reporters believe that grandparents have to reside with their immediate family, others suppose that those elderly should be persuaded to live on their own. Since experiences have proven peaceful co-existence leads to efficient consequences, I also believe this approach outdo the opposite one.

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As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that drivers should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this modern world with a fast-paced technology, vehicle number is experiencing uptrend which causes the roads to be restructured along while spending great amount of money. There are a thought that say drivers themselves should pay for expense of roads repairing while I believe states are responsible to conduct such actions.

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In many countries, truancy* is a worrying problem for both parents and educators. What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community? * truancy = the situation when a child pretends to go to school but in fact goes somewhere else, for example to play unsupervised. The verb is 'to play truant from school.'

Parents and school teachers are complaining and worrying about those of students who are leaving home in order to attend school but in fact they aim to somewhere else to conduct their wishes. There are potential causes for this issue as well as some drastic long- term effects.

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Typically there is trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. however, at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree to this statement.

There is an undeniable fact that consuming diverse range of medicine these days experiencing upward inclination, while it is believed that they are either harmful or unproductive. This essay will argue that why using different medicine are totally useless or hazardous.

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Some believe that history has little to teach us about today while others think that the study of the past helps us to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

When it comes to history and its importance in present, there are differing opinions on the matter. A few people believe that history provides very limited lessons about present. Whreas, the other part pf group thinks that past assist us to comprehend today's situation.It is importany to explore both the sides of the argument to gain a comprehensive understanding. In this essay, both the views will be discussed followed by my opinion.

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other culture, youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, debates about the value of age are common, with some using age as a measure of worth. The question of whether old age or youth holds more importance is often raised, but I believe both are significant albeit in different ways.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Nowadays, we are confronted with numerous challenges that ask for our attention. One pressing issue that requires our immediate focus is huge debts due to unnecessary and unaffordable shopping. The problem has far-reaching implications for individuals, the environment and society in general. Nevertheless, there are some practical and effective resolutions for them which this essay will elaborate on.

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Some people think every human being can create artworks (e.g. painting), while others think only the people born with the ability can do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.（2015/10/31亚太）

In today's world, people are having hard time reaching consensus whether creating an artwork can be done by all individuals or it can only be achieved by people with god gifted ability.It is important to explore both the sides of the argument to gain a comprehensive understanding. This essay will discuss both the point of views followed by my opinion on the same.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The business industries put hevay emphasis on advertisments, stating their products contains new features or functions. I am increasingly doubious regarding this being a positive development. This essay argues against the customer's benefits and business's innovation.

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In some place old age is valuable, while in other cultures youth is considered ,ore important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people argue that elderly persons are more important, others believe that teenagers impact is highly valuable. This essay will discuss both views and give some reasons.

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