IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 487

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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in many countries today, if people want to find works, they have to move away from their friends and families. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the dis advantages

In many lands nowadays, people have to go far from their parents and relationships to have a better job opportunities. I think the benefits of this development totally outweigh the dasadvantages. In this essay, I will prove my point of view.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often believed that a person is said to be healthy, if he maintains good idet, try to be stress free, and do a lot of exercise. In my country, people should follow healthy routine to stay fit. In this essay, I will discuss, and provide necessary examples to support my reasons.

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Some people believe that a good way to reduce crime is to have longer sentences. While others think that are alternatives to this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is an intensive debate about how the best method to decrease offences. However, a lot of individuals are proposing that the guilty persons must take strong punishments while others are going towards creating a substantial way. In this essay, l will discuss both perspectives as well as opinions' given in the end.

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In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

Recently, most of reserach activity has been funded and operated by private companies. Although the process may consume an effective amount of time, it actually can restrain the knowledge and information delivery. Considering those points, I do believe that the disadvantage outweighs the advantage.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage?

Children are able to get goals if they put their effort upmost and it is told by several societies. Some people believe this message is a good way to raise motivation and independence of children, while other people claim that it is not good for them because sometimes the effort betrays the result. Personally, This essay will discuss about beneficial and drawback of giving this advice. (harus ada positioning)

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some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Today, advertising is an integral part of our modern life. Although there are some argue that advertising is persuaded us to purchase goods, other believe that it is not attractive in long-term. In point of my view, advertising can help us to make a better decision for choosing our needs, however, time to time advertiser may stray they way. This essay will discuss both sides.

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Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern machinery and automatic processes have decreased the manual working opportunity of people. Therefore I would suggest manual labour should be reduced which makes life easy for the people but has a huge disadvantage when it comes to the community who faces tough challenges every day trying to endeavor opportunity and freedom to earn for their families.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effectiv

Nowadays, It is clear that there are an raising up in both traffic congestion and pollution problems. One of the best suggestable solutions for these problems is to expand the price of petrol. In my opinion, I am partially agreeing with this statement as there are other effective solutions such as expansions of public transportation networks.

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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the the past few years, direct communication has been substituted with online interaction among individuals around the world by the emergence of social media platforms. Despite its major drawback on the time-consumed response, the arrival online interaction provide the equality to interact with each other. Thus, I think the benefit far outweighs the drawback.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinionFind essays with the same topic.

It is considered by undergraduate students that learning additional subjects is crucial while studying madatory topics in universities. Meanwhile,others consider it is more essential to give their total time and focus on their main field to graduate with high grades. while allocating time effectively might be challenging for some people, I personally believed that expand our horizon knowleadge is important in life.

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An increasing number of us travel abroad for tourism these days. What can be done to ensure that we do not ruin the destinations we love to visit?

These days, people’s enthusiasm for traveling to tourist destinations is higher compared to the past. As a part of that growing number, we potentially cause destruction on the sites we visit. This essay will take a closer look at the reasons and propose some solutions.

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The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assignments over the school year. What do you think of this trend?

Education centers around the world have tests with different styles. Nowadays, they have been a lot of concern on how this exams should be done and there have been activities on shifting from dated appointments dates to ongoing assesments. This essay will discuss in details on how education centers should monitor and evaluate students over the year resulting in student benefits as well as lecturer benefit.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want on web or phone without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is generally claimed that technology development makes it easier to access published material. In the coming days, fewer people will purchase physical material such as papers and newspapers or books because the internet has provided them for free. I personally agree with this statement that everyone may use online platforms for reading in the future.

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Crimes committed by teenagers are increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

The number of crimes committed by teenagers is rising. This is case appear because of lack of supervision from parents to children. To tackle this problem parents and schools must work together to regulate and direct teenagers' interactions.

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1/ Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and the governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

the affordability of higher education appears as one of the most arguabl6e topics in society. The majority believe that education regulators should consider eliminating tuition fees for all individuals, irrespective of their socio-economic background. I personally hold the opposing opinion about this initiative and will provide further explanation in this essay.

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1/ Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and the governments should make it free

the affordability for higher education appears as one of the most arguable topic in society. The majority believe that education regulators should consider eliminating tuition fees for all individuals, irrespective of their socio-economic background. I personally hold the opposing opinion about this initiatives and will provide further explanation in this essay.

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Eco-tourism often involves visiting remote and fragile ecosystems, which raises concerns about the impact on local cultures and indigenous communities. What problems can this cause? How can these problems be resolved?

The practice of visiting natural environments can lead to the treespassing of delicate and conservated ecosystems. Which could certainly have consequences on local cultures and indigenous communities, such as irreversable damage to endemic species, and invasion of sacred places for indigenous communities. Thus, in order to fix this problem, it is necessary to stablish local policies to protect religious areas, as well as to warn the tourist about caring for endemic animals, or silvester flora and fauna.

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Some people believe that anyone can create art, such as painting, poetry, music, etc. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is no secret that art is the main source of inspiration to express feeling and transmit values.In today’s climate, there is a debate regarding the fundamental of creating art. While some people argue that art does not need any specific ability, another group, including me, believes that individuals need to be talented to be an artist.

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some think increasing business and culural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the dissappearance of national identity. Discuss both Views and state your own opinion.

Around the globe, success of any country hinges on widen business and sharing traditional customs with other regions of world. Some individuals are considered it is a positive approach, while other beliefs it intends to diminish the personal identity of one nation. In this essay, both perspectives will be elucidate in detail with paramount examples. I myself, personally think it is beneficial to build up relation with other countries.

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In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more

The number of people attending classical music concerts or playing musical instruments has been decreased in many parts of the world. There are some pragmatic reasons why a decrease in the visitor numbers ensues and some of the benefits which young generation can invariably take advantage from.

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