IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 489

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The quality well-being of the citizen has been a contentious topic for a long time. It is thought by some people that raising the amount of activities, such as sports, would enhance the health conditions of people and recognised as an optimal way to foster healthy habits. On the contrary, opponents of this view point argue that a more comprehensive way must be introduced to cultivate healthy society and creating more sports facilities are not sufficient. Both parties represent merits , however, raising awareness, educating people along with fostering more sports related opportunities is a proper way to increase healthy habits among people which in turn ensures quality public health.

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please describe the process of brick manufacturing?

The given chart illustrates the stages of manufacture of bricks.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology that can prevent and solve crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Crimes have always been an impediment to the development of society. Over the ages, as the range of violations has increased, the investigators have refined the ways to solve the transgressions. As a result, it is true that the crime rate is decreasing due to progress in technology that is used to resolve criminal activities.

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Many people believe money is a very important factor for achieving happiness. Others, however believe that money has nothing to do with happiness. Discuss both views.

It is often thought that some people believe that money is a very important factor in achieving happiness. However, some say that such a mindset is not related to people’s emotions. In my opinion, I believe that wealth does affect our emotional state. This essay will list the debatable statements of both sides.

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Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work that with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

Nowadays, there is an increase in the number of youngsters involved in social problems. Does this issue causes by a lack of attention from parents? While some people believe that it does not affects their children’s morale, in my opinion family situation plays a pivotal role and should be taken into account.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Generally, people consider media, pop culture, and friends to be fundamental aspects of children's development. On the other hand, some people claim, the biggest significant development of a child comes from their family itself. In my opinion, a combination of the two has many effects on children.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Certain undergraduate students attempt to gain diverse knowledge on multiple streams while the rest believe specialization in one aspect makes them more qualified. In my opinion, studying hard in one field can lead to job insecurity, and working more than one stream would produce more work opportunities and create more entrepreneurship. Therefore, in my conviction, quallifcating different subjects would make a better future for students.

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Some people think that parents should limit their children’s time to watch TV and play computer games and encourage them to read books. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals argue that parents should set a schedule in order to limit children's screen time, such as watching TV and playing computer games. Therefore, the youths are encouraged to read books instead. I firmly agree with this stance and think that this is a pivotal action which should be taken by every parent.

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Many people nowadays decide not to work for a large company but to become self-employed. What problems might this decision cause? What can they do to solve these problems?

Recently, there are many individuals that make a decision to become an owner of their own company or they work for themself instead of working in a large company. This essay will express what is the root of this circumstance and how the big company should address this issue.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In line with the shift in time and growth of the trip facilities, international traveling has become more convenient than before resulting in the attraction of a significant number of tourists to various countries. This trend causes exceedingly controversy among individuals as there is a widely held belief that visitors are obliged to obey local customs while others reject this belief and suppose that the host country should accept its guest the way they are. I want to be on the side of those thinking that destination countries must welcome cultural differences.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. others believe children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a widely held view among some parents that upbringing kids with a sense of competition resulting in their progress in the future. Despite the fact that latest surveys indicate that if youngsters follow cooperation instead of competition, they will be more effective adults. In my point of view, internalization of collaborative habits can have a significant beneficial consequences in all aspects of their lives.

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there is an increasing trend around the world of marriage couples deciding not to have childern.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Marriage is a process of joining a male and female through a sex relationship and bringing children for the next generations. Nowadays, we can see that many couples do not want children for many reasons. In this essay, we discuss about the pros and cons of this statement.

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Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families, this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families this is because many people want to be independent and like to make their decisions on their own.

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Many people use written language in a less formal a nd more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages and disadvantages?

For the past 30 years amount of internet users boomed from less than one billion people to over five billion.

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Some people say that now we can see films watching movies at home is easier and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, movies need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two different points of view about a better place to watch movies. Some people reasonably prefer to watch films at home while for others seeing them at the cinema is the best option. In my opinion, the cinema offers a much better experience.

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clubs and societies are an important part of life for some people. why are these important to people? Discuss reasons to support your answer.

Public places like clubs and societies are necessary for various people to socialize more and acquire benefits rather than drawbacks. This essay will discuss why this case is important.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

A lot of people think that recent advancement in technology has united us, but however, others argue that it has split them. I personally side with those that say that technological developments recently has brought us together.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT IT IS BETTER TO EDUCATE BOYS AND GIRLS IN SEPARATE SCHOOLS. OTHERS, HOWEVER, BELIEVE THAT BOYS AND GIRLS BENEFIT MORE FROM ATTENDING MIX SCHOOLS. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Some argue that it is beneficial children attend in the unisexual school, others say that it is better girls and boys study together. I believe that studying in the mixed schools is more advantagous because children become more compromising and compassionate towards others.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Technology has improved a lot, and some people believe that computers are the most crucial development of the last century. However, I believe that while computers has revolutionised many aspects in human lives, yet other innovations, such as the invention in transportation and machinery sectors, also play an important role in the life of human beings.

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Some people believe that its not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

Thesedays, people completely depend upon the internet to maintain the balance between personal and professional life. I also think internet become a main part of everyone's life and in the following essay, I will support my view points.

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