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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The number of people who are fat and overweight are much higher than previous generations. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve those problems?

Nowadays the figure for people who are obese is much larger than the generations before has gained in popularity. This essay will attempt to analyze some causes and propose some solutions to this issue.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Millions of individuals around the globe are facing health problems due to rise in their body weight. Physical classes can educate people on how to make their body fit and slim. This leads to reduce most of the illnesses. Certain humans believe that this problem can be solved by introducing more physical education lessons in school. I think it is a good idea to do so which is inexpensive and effective.

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Some people think that those working in creative arts should be financially supported by governments. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is a highly debatable issue whether the state should provide the monetary assistance to people indulged in arts or not. However, I, believe that government should not support the people by giving money to them as it increases the burden of government as well as people can loose the urge to earn the money . The same would be discussed with relevant examples in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Living in a world where changes are constantly happening, supported by the advanced innovation nowadays, leads to most people looking forward to a new experience and adjustment. While some might argue that they are more comfortable living the same way as they did before and keeping their usual traits.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many food companies produce unhealthy products with high level of harmful content which leads to many disorders. Some individuals strongly support the nation that the cost of these materials to be increased remarkably eventually limiting their use. Admittedly, I completely agree that the increasing price of these kinds of products will lead to less consumption of them.

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Some people think that patents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that children have to learn how to be a good members of society in school, while others think that parents should take this responsibility. I would argue that the family have a key role in this situation, and parents are more important in shaping children personality.

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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

Many people believe that Luck is the most crucial factor, which leads to an individual’s success. But I do not agree with this notion, because hard work plays an extremely important role in achieves the goals.

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parents should spend more time helping their children with homework. do you agree or disagree? give reasons for your answer

When it comes to homework, parents often tend to support children with its completion by utilizing their knowledge. However, this approach is believed to be impacting children in both positive and negative way. While I believe that parents’ support for children in the completion of their homework helps them academically as well as with their child-parent bonding, it happens to make children rely on parents forever.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effect will this have on society?

The rate of crime recommitment in people who end their emprisonment period is remarkably high. This can be due to the negative view that society holds towards past prisoners and the fact that it is challenging to get a reputable job once someone has a criminal record. The aftermath of this issue is that instead of one-time offenders, the sociaty will have criminals who believe illegal activities are their only choice which makes it easier for them to commit them.

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It is suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

Recently, people suppose that primary pupils ought to learn the way to grow vegetables and protect animals. In my perspective, these advantages overshadow its disadvantages.

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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that they have made life more complex and stressful. Discuss both views.

In this day and age of fast technological innovation, the influence of computers on daily life is debatable. While some argue that computers have made life easier and more convenient, others argue that they have made life more confusing and stressful.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governmentsand individuals do to address these problems?

It is true that people in the world are polluting environment. There are a number of problem have resulted from this tendency and they should be tacked by a number of effective solution from individuals and government.

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parents should their children screentime. Do you agree ?

Many children nowadays spend too much time on digital devices. I firmly believe that parents should strictly limit their screen time for two reasons. First of all, spending too much screen time on digital devices can lead to make a person an introvert. For instance, scientists have been noticing increasing rates of children who would rather spend time with online friends than hang out with real friends. In addition, spending too much time on screen is bad for children's health. Looking at a computer or smartphone screen for a long time can damage their eyesight and cause headaches. In addition, their postures remain in the same post repeatedly and cause muscle pain. Last but not least, spending too much time on digital devices could interfere with children's development in their social skills because if they only spend their time in front of the screen, they will have less experience in real discussions. To summarize, it is important to minimize time spent in front of screens to pro...

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Some student work while studying.This often results in lacking tome for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the cause of this? What solution can yoi suggest?

In this present scenario mostly student found working and studying at the same time. Some of them manage their work and study while other gets frustrated and depressed. Many student lack financiallyand tents to be work for their own by themselves. However, some of them thought that working in any institution would grab the experience for future benefits and they were more secure to get higher level of job after completing of their study level.

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Many cities around the world these days are becoming more and more polluted. Why is this happening? What solutions can you suggest?

Air pollution is a significant and growing concern in many cities around the world. The primary contributors to urban air pollution include industrial activities, vehicle emissions, construction dust, and other anthropogenic sources. Pollution can consist of various pollutants such as particulate matter (PM), nitrogen dioxide (NO2), sulfur dioxide (SO2), carbon monoxide (CO), ozone (O3), and volatile organic compounds (VOCs)

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News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?

The role of news is paramount in people's day to day lives. This is so because human beings are interested to know about what is happening around the world. The majority of the news is however negative news as negativity spreads faster than positivity. News channels should have a tantamount of good, and bad news broadcasted.

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Some people say that outdoor activities bring benefits to children's development rather than computer games, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that children should spend their leisure time on participating in outdoor entertainment that is more effective than video games. While it is undeniable about the merits of playing computer games, I personally believe that outdoor activities would bring more positive impacts on school students as a whole.

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Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water they want, but others believe government should control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource.

In our modern life, the majority of individuals prefer to use as much as fresh water while others point out that local government ought to control the utility of potable water since it is a non-refundable resource. In my point of view, human beings need to protect the need to protect irrecoverable this wealth.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Through decades people have tried to solve their health problems both with traditional methods like going to a doctor or with alternative medicine. Today, the number of people who trust alternative medicine is increasing. In my opinion, although this situation may be considered a positive development, there are also negative aspects that outweigh the positive sides. This essay will discuss both sides.

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Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.

7. What changes do you think we will see in the next 20 years?

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