IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 570

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can benefit teenagers and the community as well . To what extent do you agree or disagree

There are different opportunities that designated as a volunteer position to build a society by using the young population and some people have proposed that It is a good way to empower society without a huge amount of expenses to pay to workers , however, it seems they don't want to see the harmful aspects in a long time ,because, teenagers must familiar with the cost of living and economical life as a human ,so, I disagree with the volunteer working for our young part of the society , because , it would growth unawareness of economical issues in their mind ,so ,I will explain in following sentences .

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There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities. Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.

Living in the big cities could be a big dream to vest majority of people, while some of them stand opposite this idea. This essay will try to identify the positive and negative side of this topic.

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

At present, a lot of news agencies are more likely to inform the story that concentrates on negative aspects rather than positive aspects. Some argue that it is damaging both the person and the overview of the community. I partially agree with this reason, because I think that there are both positive and negative sides. I will provide my point of view in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In certain countries, the shooting has experienced an upward trend, for the number of weapons at home has risen. I partially agree with the aforementioned statement because it depends upon the individual, who is keeping the guns at home. In this esaay, I will illustrate both perspectives and at the end will ultimately express my own opinion.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

During recent centuries, humankind has invented lots of things , accompanied by or due to the rapid progress of science and technology, such as cars, planes, medicine to cure cancers and various equipment used in factories. These have brought dramatic changes to our daily lives. People may have different ideas when arguing about which is the most important one, but as for me, I should claim that computers outweigh all others in their importance to us. Should computers not come into reality, it is extremely hard to imagine what today's world will be.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age .Purnishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction .To what extent do you agree or disagree ?What sort of purnishment should patents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children ?

Many individuals believe that children should be taught the difference between right and wrong at an early age. However, there is a debatable issue as to whether or not giving a punishment is helpful for children’s learning. From my point of view, I totally agree with that statement and there are some appropriate punishments that should be used by parents and teachers that will be discussed in this essay.

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Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same roads causes some problems. What are the problems and what can be done to reduce them?

It is claimed by some people that the incidents between cyclists and car drivers due to accessing similar roads create downside effects, namely traffic accidents. In order to decrease these issues, the government has to separate the roads by building new lines for those conveyances. In this essay, I will explain the causes and solutions of this problem in detail.

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Some people believe that studying at university of college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Several communities believe that in order to achieve good fortune, a person should attend university. However, others believe that a successful life is linked to entering the workforce immediately after school. In my opinion, if someone wants to have a peaceful life, they should start working right after school.

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The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of web? What solutions can you suggest?

Since the introduction of the internet its usage has been rocketing an reaches new hights every day. This is an expectable outcome of the vast range of applications it can provide. However, the more online people are, the more we relise the issues of this phenomenon. There are two main problems to deal with nowadays namely, the miss-use and the over-use. While there have been pathways defined to move back to the right track, the latter issue seems quite complicated to solve.

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Some universities students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is purely a personal preference whether to focus on core qualification to achieve the exponential good academic results in the desire qualification or alternative, the study few other subjects which can be benefit in the practical field after graduate from the universities. In this essay, it will be covering both sides of student’s preference with supportive justification and followed with opinion to support one side of it.

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There was a time when people only shopped out for necessity, but these days shopping seems to have become a new form of leisure activity, people don’t appreciate the value of money anywhere. To what extent do you agree with the view?

There is a significant change in terms of shopping by people. Nowadays, it is more about social class, which was previously to meet the basic needs and requirements of the family members. Importantly, the multi-giant companies have played a huge role by doing aggressive marketing campaign and penetrate to the people. I would partially agree that people forget value of money. This essay will discuss exponential increased external marketing activities by product companies as well as available online shopping option, which had created a social inequality within a society and value of money concept is being analysis independently only.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some students prefer to spend a significant part of their time to gain knowledge from additional areas. On the other hand, some of them focus and prioritize the time resources on the main fields, which are related to their curriculum. In my opinion, the first phenomenon requires considerable risks and time spent among the students. I’d prefer to follow the second statement because it can help students to improve their knowledge, and achieve success in their degree.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Behavioural changes regarding watching videos with content violence and playing computer games is getting a big concern among some people ,because,dangerous actions have been seen after these programs ,however, opponents have been claimed these effects are too small or these are not a real source of behavioural changes ,however, I agree with the first idea that violence contents on media have been affected on human mood and behaviour ,so , I will explain more.

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Many cities are now turning parks and farmland into new housing developments. Is this a positive or negative development?

Cities these days tend to prioritize offering more housing to people and these developments often come at the expense of farmlands and parks. While this trend brings some positives, it is an undesirable turn of events overall.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In the modern world, many people are concerned about discovering the background of their residence. This essay will analyze the reason for this interest as well as the ways that people can look for the previous stories of that place.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be useful and relevant. Others disagree. Discuss booth view and give your opinion.

Job seekers are often being asked of their personal lives when they got interviewed for finding new occupations. Some part of the society stand with the following condition due to its tangibility for gaining practical information while others refused to believe it. This essay will provide both view and my personal oplinion.

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Some believe children should be taught to give speeches and presentations in school. Why is this? What other skills do you think it is important to be taught in schools?

It is argued that lessons on public speaking and preparing visual aids should be included in academic programmes at school. One of the main reasons is to ensure that children develop an essential skill to communicate effectively in their future jobs. In addition to this, I am of the opinion that skills such as foreign language or computer coding plays an equally important role for the same reason and hence should be added to their routine lessons.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative trend?

It is prevalent currently for many people to give birth later in their life. There are many reasons for this trend based on the stable finance and childcare experienceo but it might bring about adverse trend.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is said that the fundamental purpose of science should be to develop people’s live. I totally agree with this because science can advise you by new numerous insights of environmental and food productions problems and improve the overall prosperity of communities.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that taking risks in our lives plays a crucial role in success. While it is a commonly held belief that success and risk are intertwined, there is also an argument that taking risks nowadays may create problems in our lives. This essay will analyze this topic from both points of view and present my opinion.

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