IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 568

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary epoch, there are umpteen researches in the field of science, business and academic that has been published for public's social awareness. Some say that this approach has numerous advantages while others believe that some details should be kept in secter. In the following essay, I will discuss both views and share my own opinion.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compusory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Handful of people think that volunteering activities are very necessary for the students, especially those who are now in highschool. And I strongly agree that these programmes will help students to develop their physical health, mental health and also increase the opportunities to have a career in the future. First of all, when students take part in unpaid community service they can enhance their social skills such as communication skills and also relationships. It also means that they will be more self-confident to interact with others and gain life satisfaction which they can not have if they are at school or home. For example, nowadays, Vietnamese students tend to participate in some clubs so they can gain more soft skills and life experiences. In addition, when unpaid community service becomes a compulsory part in school programmes, this will allow students to reduce stress after school. Because this day, students have to learn a lot of things not just at school but also in som...

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Young people are changing their jobs or careers every few years. what do you think are the reasons? do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, hesitation in switching jobs or career has fallen. People are looking to change and grow their career after every few years. There are multiple reasons for this trend and as far as my opinion is concerned, I believe that it has numerous benefits over the drawbacks.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, more people than in the past prefer to have plastic surgery to change their outlook. Personally, I think this is a negative development, and there are some reasons cause this situation.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Usually, wealthy countries give away money to poorer countries, meanwhile it does not solve most problems such as neediness in foods in these countries. In addition, rich countries should donate other type of help to the poverty countries rather than financial aid. In this essay I am going to argue about to what points I do agree and disagree.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Widespread of technology has changed everyone's daily routine in various ways. Nowadays, smartphones have been a crucial part of people including children's lives. There might be several reasons that indicate why young generation spend some hours on their phones daily. Also, this attitude toward mobile phones might have some consequences.

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Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Whether governments should ban high-risk sports becoming a hot issue around the world, whilst such activities could endanger the safety of participants, and increase the cost to society sources, I personally agree that people should have the freedom to decide if they want to be part of such events.

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The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

In today’s interconnected society, it is prevailing proposition that the tradition of families getting together to eat meals experience significant fall, due to number of considerable circumstances. This essay will illustrate major reasons of this phenomenon and its effects in people’s life.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s interconnected society, there is prevailing proposition that governments instead of private companies, should be responsible for scientific research. I completely agree with this phenomenon.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all the shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The Internet is a widely used structure, especially in shopping. The future of classic shopping models is under threat on a platform where many alternatives are available at a fast and affordable price. However, there are so many shops in towns and cities, the Internet is spreading so rapidly that it will become more important in meeting our needs in the near future.

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that there is no need to spend money for public libraries since computer technology can do the same work better. From my point of view public libraries can offer better opportunities for users.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays the number of individuals believe that it is more important to take part in sports which are played in teams, while others argue taking part in individual sports is more beneficial. From my point of view , both opinions are correct and it is better for people to attend various activities in order to achieve wellbeing as well as personal development.

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Nowadays, young people tend to rush into independence. Many of them leave home to study or work while still in their teens. Do you think it is positive or negative?

Independence of the youth is one of the burning issues of today's modern society. As the teenagers grow up, they are more likely to want to live without their parents and manage their own lives without anyone to tell them what to do. In my opinion, this approach has both its pros and cons. We can not give a certain answer to this question.

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People are responsible for their happiness. Others feel happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Joy is something that everybody wants to feel. Many people indicate that the citizens can make their own joyfulness, while others comment that other factors in life might also contribute to humans' good mood such as weather, surroundings and so on. This essay will try to explore both sides and at the end, I will share my point of view.

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Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

In all modern societies, universities are a place for researching and learning deeper. In the university, students can be led to their interests and meet other students who have the same joy for studying as they do. In my opinion, students should first graduate from the university and have the chance to study more precisely and then, get a job based on their interests.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people all around the world are deciding to migrate from rural areas to urban areas. I believe the disadvantages of this event outweigh the advantages.

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Some people move to other countries when they retire. Others think it is better to retire in their home country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

After retiring from their job, some people prefer to move their house to different countries, while others think it is better to come back to their home country. In my opinion, moving to other countries after finishing our career path is a good option. this essay will discuss both points of view on this topic and give relevant opinions.

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Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough. What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this

Medical professionals generally advice that the older population should exercise more, however the vast majority of the elderly are incapable of this. In this essay, I will discuss the possible causes of such a notion and some solutions.

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in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. to what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweight the disadvantages?

Increasing number of aged community has brougth concerns in some nations. Some people find this occasion beneficial to society, but others seem to not agree with elder society's advantageousness.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As we live in the age of information, people have different views about whether it is appropriate to exchange data about various fields or this kind of evidence should not be published. While keeping information can sometimes be useful, I believe that publishing them can mitigate society’s expectations. To achieve a clear picture; it is vital to put this matter into a larger context.

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