IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 568

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss and give opinion.

Nowadays, the right age of schooling become an intellectual conflict among the experts. While, defenders argue that kids should attend school as early as possible, opponents think that the appropriate time of schooling is over the 6 or 7. In my point of view, not the former but the latter group’s ideology is more realistic and worth to be supported. This essay delves into these opinions and expresses my notion before drawing a reasonable conclusion.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays internet are becoming the most popular option, in order to gain the latest information. Some people say, the online media will replace the position of newspapers, as the latter are considered as a part of the past. In some ways, the newspapers might lose its place in the market. Through this essay I will explain my position, why I agree with the statement.

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Smoking should be banned in public places because it not only harms the smokers, but also those who are nearby. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the issues of today's society is how people behave in public. Although smoking is a harmful and deleterios habit, many people smoke and the most unfavorable part is when they do it in closed public places. I fully believe that smoking should be banned in public and smokers must do it in determined areas to avoid disturbing the others.

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want? Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Right parenting is vital for the development of a society. Many guardians spend their money on fulfilling every the demands of their kids, and permit them to indulge in all kinds of activities without restrictions. This essay will explain why this is not the right way to nuture a child and how it can impact their future.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays, due to enhancing the number of vehicles, humanity is suffering from traffic congestion and encountering various challenges in terms of pollution. Although some believe that the high prices of petrol can manage these problems, I assume that these can cause other problems, so other remedies might be more practical.

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In the future, nobody wii buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With advancement of technology, people will find everything they need at online platforms for free, hence printed newspapers or books will be left behind. I agree with this statement since online platforms can provide live news and events across regions. Moreover, buying printed books and newspapers will consume space and difficult to be maintained.

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People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days more and more people using credit cards.the main way monthly purchases. While accepting that. I consider that more prone and cons. In this essay, I will discuss about cons.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be a good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often said that parents are responsible for their child's mortal growth, whereas others oppose this idea and mention the important role of schools in educating them. In this essay, we will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary epoch, there are umpteen researches in the field of science, business and academic that has been published for public's social awareness. Some say that this approach has numerous advantages while others believe that some details should be kept in secter. In the following essay, I will discuss both views and share my own opinion.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compusory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Handful of people think that volunteering activities are very necessary for the students, especially those who are now in highschool. And I strongly agree that these programmes will help students to develop their physical health, mental health and also increase the opportunities to have a career in the future. First of all, when students take part in unpaid community service they can enhance their social skills such as communication skills and also relationships. It also means that they will be more self-confident to interact with others and gain life satisfaction which they can not have if they are at school or home. For example, nowadays, Vietnamese students tend to participate in some clubs so they can gain more soft skills and life experiences. In addition, when unpaid community service becomes a compulsory part in school programmes, this will allow students to reduce stress after school. Because this day, students have to learn a lot of things not just at school but also in som...

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Young people are changing their jobs or careers every few years. what do you think are the reasons? do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, hesitation in switching jobs or career has fallen. People are looking to change and grow their career after every few years. There are multiple reasons for this trend and as far as my opinion is concerned, I believe that it has numerous benefits over the drawbacks.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, more people than in the past prefer to have plastic surgery to change their outlook. Personally, I think this is a negative development, and there are some reasons cause this situation.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Usually, wealthy countries give away money to poorer countries, meanwhile it does not solve most problems such as neediness in foods in these countries. In addition, rich countries should donate other type of help to the poverty countries rather than financial aid. In this essay I am going to argue about to what points I do agree and disagree.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Widespread of technology has changed everyone's daily routine in various ways. Nowadays, smartphones have been a crucial part of people including children's lives. There might be several reasons that indicate why young generation spend some hours on their phones daily. Also, this attitude toward mobile phones might have some consequences.

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Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Whether governments should ban high-risk sports becoming a hot issue around the world, whilst such activities could endanger the safety of participants, and increase the cost to society sources, I personally agree that people should have the freedom to decide if they want to be part of such events.

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The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

In today’s interconnected society, it is prevailing proposition that the tradition of families getting together to eat meals experience significant fall, due to number of considerable circumstances. This essay will illustrate major reasons of this phenomenon and its effects in people’s life.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s interconnected society, there is prevailing proposition that governments instead of private companies, should be responsible for scientific research. I completely agree with this phenomenon.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all the shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The Internet is a widely used structure, especially in shopping. The future of classic shopping models is under threat on a platform where many alternatives are available at a fast and affordable price. However, there are so many shops in towns and cities, the Internet is spreading so rapidly that it will become more important in meeting our needs in the near future.

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that there is no need to spend money for public libraries since computer technology can do the same work better. From my point of view public libraries can offer better opportunities for users.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays the number of individuals believe that it is more important to take part in sports which are played in teams, while others argue taking part in individual sports is more beneficial. From my point of view , both opinions are correct and it is better for people to attend various activities in order to achieve wellbeing as well as personal development.

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