IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 567

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. lisa

Many people believe that that there should be some spaces for graffiti in the cities, whereas others think that it should be forbidden. Although i gravitate to the first camp, both views will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

There are debates on a course selection for university students in terms of their necessity. While others might think it is essential to focus on mandatory subjects that are beneficial in their future career, I believe that people should take additional courses, since it can expand their knowledge as well as skills.

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Some people think that it's always better to live in the rented accomodation. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it.

In recent years, there have been people who arguing that is better to rent than buy accomodation for living. As such there are benefits and drawbacks to this idea, although I opine that its demerits outweigh the merits. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant facets based on factual premises.

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Do you think that education and training should be completely free or it is better to require fully paid tuition? Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Education plays a crucial role in people lives enormlously. Whether it should provide without cost or fully paid this is a debatable issue in the world. I consider education and traning should give freely without any cost from the government. This essay shall discuss it for the subsequent paragraphs.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it doesn't solve poverty. therefore developed countries should give other type of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answers with examples.

Offering help to the needies is always a good virtue all human beings should uphold. However, how to best provide the assitance to those disadvantaged is deemed as a really complicated and difficult question. Rich countries often support the less developed countries with financial aids, yet their poverty issues still persist. Therefore, I strongly agree that the more developed countries should not offer help purely through pumping money.

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Traffic jams are considered one of the major obstacles that face large towns around the world. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this problem and suggest possible solutions that can be implemented to handle it.

In large cities traffic congestion is a prominent issue, and the main cause of this problem is not only overdependence on the car vehicle but also not sharing private automobiles. A plausible solution would be adopting bikes and sharing the transportation.

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Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued about whether we should use technology in our school instead of printed books. From my point of view, I agree partly with this statement, I believe we should merge technology with books.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, there is a belief that science should be implemented by improving general conditions of human’s lives. I agree with this idea, because science is related to our health and participated in physical inventions that play significant role in our lives.

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In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Following a vegetarian diet is becoming very popular in some nations. Although without meat it is hard to get the required amount of protein, I believe that the benefits of consuming high fibre and low saturated fat while on this diet far outweigh any drawbacks.

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Some believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific and academic work others believe that some information is too valuable to share discuss both sides and give your opinion

It has been a controversial issue: some people think that sharing knowledge about business,technology and education is beneficial while others disagree due to cencerns about private data.Although hidden informations and methods have many pros for development and growth of nation and companies.I believed that this is a positive step to share knowledge and discuss globally for the betterment in technology.

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Many people say that providing access to clean water should be the main focus for international aid organizations. Others say that there are more important uses for international aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people advocate the idea that international help organizations should first concentrate on providing people with clean water, however others argue that more vital need should be met by them. Both sides of the argument present rational ideas which will be elaborated.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Recently,people who want to buy famous brands in terms of clothes cars and other items have increased significantly. in my opinion, there are some causes of this situation which are finding a good opportunity for a job, some fines for a famous person and getting some respect .

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in team sports, like football. While other people think that taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that sports is a physical and mental activity. Some people concur that a person should play in the team and others disagree with that and say players should take part in individual sports. However, I quibble with them and propound that it is better to work in team sports. This essay will further elaborate my reasons for the same in my upcoming paragraphs which will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Many feel that going tp the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

For staying fit, some people prefer gym and some prefer other effective options. From my perspective, there are several effective methods which can be more suitable for different people.

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Some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

With education evolution, many individuals believe that history is the most essential course whereas, others favour the vital subjects like science and technology in the modern era. As far as my opinion is concerned, I favour the latter statement and will discuss both the viewpoints in upcoming paragraph.

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Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can benefit teenagers and the community as well . To what extent do you agree or disagree

There are different opportunities that designated as a volunteer position to build a society by using the young population and some people have proposed that It is a good way to empower society without a huge amount of expenses to pay to workers , however, it seems they don't want to see the harmful aspects in a long time ,because, teenagers must familiar with the cost of living and economical life as a human ,so, I disagree with the volunteer working for our young part of the society , because , it would growth unawareness of economical issues in their mind ,so ,I will explain in following sentences .

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There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities. Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.

Living in the big cities could be a big dream to vest majority of people, while some of them stand opposite this idea. This essay will try to identify the positive and negative side of this topic.

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

At present, a lot of news agencies are more likely to inform the story that concentrates on negative aspects rather than positive aspects. Some argue that it is damaging both the person and the overview of the community. I partially agree with this reason, because I think that there are both positive and negative sides. I will provide my point of view in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In certain countries, the shooting has experienced an upward trend, for the number of weapons at home has risen. I partially agree with the aforementioned statement because it depends upon the individual, who is keeping the guns at home. In this esaay, I will illustrate both perspectives and at the end will ultimately express my own opinion.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

During recent centuries, humankind has invented lots of things , accompanied by or due to the rapid progress of science and technology, such as cars, planes, medicine to cure cancers and various equipment used in factories. These have brought dramatic changes to our daily lives. People may have different ideas when arguing about which is the most important one, but as for me, I should claim that computers outweigh all others in their importance to us. Should computers not come into reality, it is extremely hard to imagine what today's world will be.

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