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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which can not be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged . To what extent do you agree?

The modern health issues causing deteriorating health are consequences of this technologically advanced modern era. Proponent advocates that modern medicines can not resolve such disastrous health issues. Hence, Proposing the idea of shifting to traditional medicine is being highly entertained among them. In my opinion, traditional medicine and treatment methods should be encouraged as modern medicine is designed for resolving the symptoms only, not curing the disease or illness.

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Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this day and age, there are many factors that help people more straightforward to find a profession.It is believed that education is more essential than social skills when looking a job.In my opinion, I strongly support that both social skills and qualifications are equaly necessary. The ideas to clarify these views will be illustrated in this essay below.

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-Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Learning Marth seems unimportant at school for some people and they think that it is redundant subject so government should reject it from the school and not let teachers teach for the children. However, others believe that this subject will be useful for every fields in life. Today's essay, I will shed light both of viewpoints and give my own opinion.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, car and other items. Why is this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people have been choosing to buy based on the brands which are popular for the items of clothes, car and so on. In this eassy, the reasons behind this trend happening and negative impacts on this development will be discussed.

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Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagr

The news is the most important element for people to gather knowledge about the world. The prompt notes that the information has no correlation with people's everyday lives, and this is considered not worth while reading it in the newspapers or following it on TV channels. I, however, would disagree with the prompt, and this essay will provide reasons before presenting a conclusion.

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Modern children are suffering from diseases that were once considered only meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?

At this time, children are suffering from diseases that used to be adult’s illness. One of the most diseases is obesity that attack children. In this essay, I will explain more about the causes and the solutions about this problem.

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Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a 'gap year', before they begin work or univeristy and see it as a chance to broaden their hoizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The spare time before beginning work or university can be a valuable time for travelling to obtain numerous of experiences. A few people think that it can be an opportunity to leverage it by strolling around to varied destinations while others assert that it won't result in any advantage but throwing the money away. I believe with careful consideration, the expenses they pay will pay off with the life lessons.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

After the first penalty, criminals perpetrate more offenses. According to my personal thoughts, the main cause of this phenomenon is severity of punishment, and it can be solved in case the government take the resposibility.

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The amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

The pie diagrams revealed funds that young children gained and expended in social action in the given year.

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Some people regard video games as a harmless, fun, or even as a useful educational tool. others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effects on the people who played them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

Peopl`s opinions differ as to whether video games are beneficial or not. While some people might regard it as a complete negative way of gaming, I still believe it brings far more benefits than its drawbacks.

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Many people choose to work or live abroad be cause of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?

In the contemporary era, many are migrating to foreign countries whether for the purpose of finding a job, or having a high quality life.

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

E-book becomes more popular than printed books. Even though almost every individuals support this trend, however, somehow I disagree because it still has a few disadvantages.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment . What can the government do to address the problem ? What can individual people do ?

Some individuals believe that humanity is the reason for destroying the natures. In this, essay I will provide my points of view on whether the government should handle with the situation and how individual people protect the Mother Earth.

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Present a case arguing either for or against the following statement: Training for work is far more important than providing a broad-based education. You should use your own ideas and experience and support your argument with examples.

Nowadays, work practices is more valuable than extensive education. I believe that training for work can make the employee ready for a specific role at work.

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Some people around de world think that be owner of a house it is better that to rent a place for living

It is believed for some people around de world that be owner of a house it is better that to rent a place for living. The need of resting can appear because of the need to have a place where living but the low income to buy a house. This situation is negative for people in term of saving money and life satisfaction.

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Parents should encourage their children to spend less time on studying and more time on physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, various pedagories are proposed to parents in order to find the best way to grow their children. Some specialists recommended that children should be encouraged to spend more time participating in physical activities instead of studying. From my point of view, I do not totally agree with this opinion for some reasons.

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The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

With the fast development of civilization, people spend a lot of time in commuting when they live in suburbs while their workplaces are in cities. Living in cities is of course a good way to release the traffic pressure as well as to save time, but it is more harm than good. I have considered this topic carefully, and eventually I think living in downtown is not the best way to face the complicated situation.

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Nowadays, people are living an increasingly longer life and in many countries there are more old people than young people. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The rapid growing of technology and knowledge, are one of many reasons that allow people to have a longer life, because people can get the right treatment and get the information of health more easily. As the reasult, in many countries, the number of old people are more than the number of young people. Having more old people than yaoung people in certain country can have their own advantages and disadvantages, which will be discussed further as follows.

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Some people believe that money is one of the most important factors in a person's happiness. To what extent do you agree withh this?

Some people believe that money is the most important thing in their life, but some may not think the same way. I do believe that money is important in my life, but I don't see money as the key to my happiness. There are many factors that can bring happiness in this life.

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes Do you agree or dis agree?

Although, many people believe that buying few expensive clothes is better, I think in a reverse manner spending less on the least expensive will be a great deal . I strongly disagree with the statement. My inclination is justified in the following paragraphs.

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