IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 640

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Ambition is being emphasized in today’s society. How important do you think it is for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

In the realm of accomplishment, today's society values an ambition as a must-have mentality to succeed in life pursuit. In my viewpoint, to some extent, ambition plays both crucial and significant roles as a strong drive for someone to pursue almost anything that they want in life.

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In many countries traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods.This is having a negative effects on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

No one can deny that international fast foods are constantly on the rise in many countries. Even locals population are enjoying international foods more than traditional foods. In this paragraph , I totally agree that this will lead to negative effects on both families and societies in health implications, as well as on environmental concerns.

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Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the fact that it will be the responsibility of the young to be punished at the mature people’s level if they commit some felony, such as robbery or violent acts. I would contend that I partially have a consensus with this conception.

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Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

Expression of oneself through art such as music, dance etc. is considered an essential part of being a well-rounded individual. Although it is important that art should be incorporated as a part of the school curriculum for children, it should not replace other subjects being taught in schools. This essay partially agrees that art should be taught to school children and would discuss reasons it should not supercede the tutoring of other equally important areas of study.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two given maps illustrate the Grange Park in its past form in 1920 and its current expansion.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, it is commonly thought that it is essential to enhance people's life with help of science. I completely agree that science can bring a lot off advantanges such as tackling environmental issues as well as to improve human's welfare.

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In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

A mother's role and a father's role in how to treat its family could be difference in some parts of the world. Cultures of a country where the couple live in, among other aspects, is the main reason of why this circumstance rose. However, as the time goes by, I think this situation might be changed since there are a lof of contradictive stories as references for the couple.

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NOWADAYS, PARENTS ARE ALLOWING THEIR CHILDREN TO USE TABLES AND SMARTPHONES TO ENHANCE LEARNING. DO THE ADVANTAGES OF THIS DEVELOPMENT OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?

Almost every parent, nowadays, not just allows children to use tablets and smartphones as a mean of learning, but also encourage them by giving these devices as gifts, like on their birthdays or on the Christmas. Using electronic machines has many advantages, as well as some harmful consequences.

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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe having a high income is crucial when selecting a job, while others consider having a good working environment is more important. This essay will discuss both views and writer’s opinion.

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In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Since the technology has improved and mobile phones have become more popular among people, payment methods will be changed from using cash to electronical money transformation by means of cards or smartphones. This trend has proved to bring more convenience to people's life and be beneficial to the environment as well, so it can be predicted that paper money will be disappeared in the future. However, lack of knowledge and literacy with regard to electronic devices may have caused some inconvenience for older generations that they still prefer to use cash.

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in many developing countries ,there is a problem with decline quality of air and water from both industry and construction .what measures could be taken to prevent this ?

Human needs and wants lead to new advancements in technology. The developments in industries and constructions cause detrimental effects to the quality of air and water in many developing nations. To avoid such adversities, it is crucial for both the society and the government of the nations to take immediate measures and this essay will explain the solution.

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.

Raising fuel prices is the best way to address the environmental issues facing the planet.Numerous issues affect the environment,and the majority of them are primarily the result of human activity.Same argue that raising the price of fuel is the best way to protect the environment because it would discourage the ownership of private vehicles and rein in unchecked industrialization.In this essay,I will argue that there are many different aspects to the global environmental problems and that raising the price of fuel is not the best course of action.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Recently, the advancement of technology has extended to a vast area in the School curriculum.There is an argument that, while some people believe that History is a vital subject in school syllabus, others hold the belief that Science and technology is one of the most significant subjects included in the school curriculum instead. Although there are opinions for both sides, in this essay I will support the second view and try to draw some conclusions.

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Being overweight has become a major health concern in many parts of the world. Explain the cause for being overweight and provide solutions.

Nowadays, the internet has become the easiest way for sharing information as well as knowledge. Although individuals in developed countries have more awareness of potential risks related to it, new problems have been created because of incorrect use. Yet, numerous ways are capable of solving problems associated with the internet. Even though required factors might sometimes seem hopeless, however, it must be strongly believed that plenty of positive aspects exist. As a consequence, the responsibility lies with each one of us. Nevertheless, this essay will thoroughly discuss the main causes and consider what practical solutions are available.

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In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

Nowadays, some people believe that the roles of a mother and a father differ in some ways in some countries. The reason is the nature and character of each parent. In order to develop parental roles in future, there is a need to think as a kid and accept him fully.

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Some people think It's better to choose friends who always hav the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In our world, nowadays, it is evident that governments and intities all over the world treat the rich class better than the poor one in everything, especially in earnings. In this essay, I will be discussing my point of view on this matter.

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In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative impacts?

Nowadays, living in a single household has become a choice for certain people on how they want to live their lives. This essay will discuss the reason behind this, and also both sides of the consequences.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the essentials of history. While some people hold a strong view that one of the most significant school subjects is history, the opposite side makes a statement that history is not as crucial as science and technology currently. While each opinion has its own redeeming features, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned elements.

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The time people devote to the job leaves very little time for personal life. How widespread is the problem? What problem will this shortage of time cause?

The contemporary men and women are spending more time at work. This is not restricted to a single society and prevalent in many nations. The magnitude of this prevalence will be discussed in this essays while also underscoring the reasons for the same.

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Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of producer to avoid extra packaging of products? Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience

Majority of the population are preferring to buy goods through online rather than offline shopping considering their busy life. It is the responsibility of the producer to deliver the items without damage. Packaging the products considering the different modes of shipment and handling diverse unforeseen situations, packaging needs to be done in multiple layers to avoid issues. This over packaging is causing more issues to environment as it is very difficult to diminish the waste considering the volume of packages delivered each day. My personal view is that both consumer and producer should consider reducing the packages and thus help reducing the hazardous impact on the environment.

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