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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that the percentage of young adults in this modern era outnumbers the senior citizens. I firmly believe that this condition has some positive benefits compared to its drawbacks since Generation Z has a creative mindset, is energetic, and is really passionate about technology.

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Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.

Passing time, individuals grow and get old, on the one hand, some people believe elderly people should live with their sons and daughters, on the other hand, some of them think it is better for the retired community to keep their independence. In this essay, I will consider both ideas and conclude my own.

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It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior?

Punishment is vital to teach children how to distinguish right and wrong in infancy age. I strongly disagree with this statement as I believe that children can learn this matter in other ways with the help of their teachers and parents which I will explain in this essay.

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In some countries, boys and girls are educated in different school rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

Boys and girls study in different schools rather than the same school but education plays an important role in their lives. In this essay, I will outline the positive and Negative sides of this essay and in the end, I will conclude with my opinion.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s dynamic literacy platform, several youths prefer work-based training programs rather than formal tutoring at the university. Despite its leverage on the students and society, the internship has some constraints in several areas.

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

Many people argue that men are equal to women . On the other hand, many people argue that men and women are not equal . I believe that men and women are not equal. In some ways, men are better and in some ways women are better. For example, in construction and manual labor / physical labor, men are better. In contrast, women are better in memorizing and effective communication. Therefore, EVEN THOUGH men and women are not equal, they are each better at certain things.

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In some cultures, children are often toldthat they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of given children this message?

Parents in all worlds wish good things and high opportunity to their offspring and try to explain that the value could be reached only by being persistent. On the one hand, this can empower the young kid, however, it can bring up some mental health problems, which can be carried to their adult lives.

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Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Government and local councils, nowadays, have more attention on the community spirit. They spend their budget to offer great local facilities which encourage people to be more productive and have more interactions among their community. I completely agree that it will give some positive impacts.

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are a lot of individuals who strongly think that social media platforms, for example (Facebook), have contributed to massive disadvantages among citizens and communities. I deeply support this opinion, and this essay will explain practical reasons for this negative effect.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music has been believed to be a means of connecting people regardless of how old they are or where they come from. This is true to me as well since music has no tangible border as it is assumed to exist, such as languages or generation gap.

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Plan A shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how a health centre has changed from 2005 until now. Overall, the centre has been expanded with more buildings and facilities for serving residents. Besides, there is a completely new entrance and more space for parking.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world area now "one big traffic jam". how true do you think this statement is? what measures can governements take to discourage people from using their cars?

Some people argue that the number of people who have cars has increased dramatically since thirty years ago in many cities around the world. As a result, these areas currently experience one big traffic jam. I strongly agree with this opinion because people who have cars tend to use their own cars rather than public transportation. In this matter, governments can take action to reduce the number of people using their cars by making a rule of add and even.

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advances in technology give some benefits to our industries. How technology brings advantages to ads and makes them easy to launch for kids. However, more people believe that advertisement has more drawbacks and should be banned. From my point of view, there are several reasons why we should stand for disagree.

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Some people think that money is the best give to give to youngster while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Under education, children always think that money can do everything. While some think money is the best gift for adolescent, I find it disadvantages. This essay will discuss why the benefits of giving money as a gift to youngsters outweighs the drawback.

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In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviours. What do you think the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

There are an increasing number of problems regarding students’ behaviours at school around the world. This essay will discuss the causes of this attitude and suggest some possible solutions.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people claim travelling or working in another country, are the reasons to obtain foreign language. While some other people argue about that learning a new language can be caused with various reasons rather than vacation or business purposes. In this essay, I discuss both views and finally represent my viewpoint.

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It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Children should be taught in infancy age to distinguish the good and bad. it is argued that in this way considering penalties is vital for them to comprehend this difference. I partially agree with this statement as I believe that there are other ways besides punishment to address this issue. Teachers and parents play an important role in bringing up kids and they can use banning and fining to punish children.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.

Nowadays, youngsters tend to spend most of their time on smartphones. This might be the problem the many parents are concerned of, and it has caused an argument of whether it is beneficial for the adolescents, or it has an abominable impact on them. In my perspective, the world has developed, and there are numerous advantages of the smartphones. Especially, in terms of education, it is very noticeable. In addition, it can assist the children to enhance their creativity using a fascinating method. There are reasons to substantiate the claim.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

The investment in training professional athletes are worshipped by some people for a country to outshine others in international sports, in addition to building facilities for general people to do exercise. In my perspective, whilst providing environments for individuals to practice sports could enhance public health, there are more advantages derived from cultivating professional sports players.

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Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that while the internet has brought numerous positive changes and advancements, it has also given rise to various challenges and problems. This essay will show that this statement is completely correct due to the fact that internet causes cyberbullying and online thefts.

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