IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 636

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reason for this? What are the solutions?

Nowadays, sugar become a significant ingredient of everything we eat, not only food but also drinks. Sometimes, there will be easier to find a sweet drinks than non-sweet drinks. The reason is its sweetness and freshness of drinking sweet drinks. However, sweet drinks cause many health problems, this statement I am going to illustrate how to reduce the problems.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In some life situations, it necessary for the individuals to take some risks for their decisions, for example, changing jobs and investing money. This essay will discuss about how essential to take some risks in life for both of working and private life and describe that stepping out of your comfort zone by taking some risks has benefits over drawbacks.

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Today, people can work and live almost anywhere they want to because of the improvements in communication technology and transport. Do you think that the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The advent of the internet has transformed the way of the public live and work. Nowadays, the advancement of contact method and conveyance provides more choices for the location of residence and employment. In my opinion, this change has more merits and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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With the rise of e-book, come the decilne in paper books. Some people see this ad a good forword step whilw other do not. What are advantages and diadvantages of this trend.

We live in an era where we all depend on digital things. Nowadays, taking an e-book is becoming increasingly popular. For many people, especially young, adults and children. However, there are both pros and cons of e-books as well as paper books. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reason why e-book is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. To what extent do yo agree or disagree with these statements?

Social media is a huge business today and many feel it has changed the world for the better. Others feel the opposite and worry that we do not connect with people in a good way. I personally feel that social media is, on the whole, a good thing as it has improved the way we communicate.

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Some people like to try a new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Different people have different lifestyles, some are prefer to have new experiences, whereas some are prefer to continue with what they have been doing. Trying new things mostly provides a new learning, which enhances one's knowledge base. However, doing same set of activities continuously, developes one's expertise in the specific activities. Both of these view points to be critically evaluated in this essay before drawing towards a conclusion.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

In the world, there are numerous countries which are suffering from overpopulation problem. Researches show that overcrowding problem of urban areas can cause numerous of diseases, pollutions and other problems. There is no denying that this problem can make our life hard as well. In order to fix this circumstance there are numerous approaches by humanity. On the contrary as a result humanity could not solve it yet.

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Some people believe that products on animals should be banned, but others think that it is necessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that, animals are crucial to the world and very important to our nature. While it is commonly had to belief that, we should stop using animals in our testing. There is also an argument that it is for developing and producing new medicines in the future. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree

the adventages of travelling in a group led by a tour guide are varied, and its disadventages are no less noticeable. I personally agree with this conviction and this essay will provide some example.

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The best way to travel is traveling in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that traveling on a tour with family or friends is the best method to have fun and relax. I personally disagree with this conviction and will support my argument in the essay below.

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Some people feel that government should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some people that government should take a higher percentage of residents' earnings to pay for essential needs, such as roads and schools. However others are against of taxes increasing. I believe that changing a fee from people is the best way to develop the quality of living conditions.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The effect of the situation of a misdeed have on the level of punishment is a matter of discussion. While some argue that the situation and the person's intention shall be considered on the level of punishment, others say that this level has to be equal for every person who commits, despite of motivations or circumstances. Both groups have strong arguments and hence devoted advocates.

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Some people belive that culture will be ruined if it used to earn tourism revenue ,but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

A controversial discussion is whether culture should be used to earn money or not.Despite the writer considering tourism to play a critical role in improving the beauty of cultures,some people say it is extremely wrong to use it as a tool for wealth.

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The government should be responsible for providing retirees with financial support and care. While many people think that citizens should save money to take care of themselves when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The retirement age in most countries starts at 65 years old. However, in my country, the retirement age starts at 60 years old. Nowadays, some people believe the government should be responsible for providing financial support to retirees. While some people think individuals should save money to support themselves when they retire. In the following paragraph, both views on this topic will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached.

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Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many people of the belief that culture will be damaged in the condition that it is used to earn money from tourism, whereas others consider that the only way to protect it is through tourism. This essay will discuss both sides and from my isolating view, tourism not only preserves culture but also brings many benefits for locals.

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An increasing number of children are overweight which could result in many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, there is a huge number of children who are overweight. In my point of view, this problem might cause lots of results affecting their health and the healthcare cost when they grow up.

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theie advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there are many companies that produce a huge variety of things and they underline that their products are new because there is a lot of competition. In this essay, I will explain why companies use advertising to improve their product and I will say the pros and cons of development.

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Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that kids should start their education at very young age, however, others opine that toddlers should do that at least 7-year-old. In my opinion, I maintain the second one that children should begin their learning at about 7 years old.

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“Developed countries have a higher obligation to tackle climate change than developing countries” Discuss the extent to which you agree with this statement.

Climate change is a global issue that affects all nations and their people. In light of the newlyreleased global sustainability goals, perhaps we should focus on what actions countries can take to effect a change rather than arguing who should take responsibility. Hence, I disagree with this statement and will be presenting my argument in this essay.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The persistence of poverty in countries worldwide has raised concerns about the effectiveness of developed nations' approach, which primarily involves providing financial aid. In this essay, I will articulate my perspective on why developed countries should extend their support beyond monetary assistance.

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