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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all schools subjects .But other Believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or they find the most interest .Discuss both views and give an opinion.

It is true that different people have different perspectives on an education curriculum. Some people think that youngsters should focus on one particular subject. However, I support those people who believe that all subjects are necessary to learn.

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Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution do you agree ?

I am writing to refer to your care Ms Naomi Barnes, who has had Diabetes Mellitus type 2 since 2015. She requires your management and monitoring.

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Some people believe that happiness and emotional maturity are more important than physical health, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some communities believe that being happy and having emotions play a pivotal role in everybody's life compared to having good physical health. I strongly argue with the given statement because without proper physical fitness communities cannot be happy with their emotions. In this essay, I will discuss both scenarios and then I will give some relevant examples.

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In many countries, people now wear western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent times, thanks to the advance of the Internet, fashion trends have spread widely and are known by numerous people all over the world. Thus, some individuals opt for western costumes for instance suits and jeans instead of traditional clothing. This essay will discuss the factors which contribute to the development.

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some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time .This can benefit teenageers and the community as well .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

More and more schools start to encourage students to do some voluntary activities in the neighborhood,because they believe it will benefit not only teenagers,but also neighborhood in many ways.Personally, I totally agree with this statement,and will illustrate the reasons in much more detail.

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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, wearing western outfits like jeans, suits and shirts outweighs that of conventional costume. Generally speaking, this phenomenon stems from the rooted way Westerners look, fashionable and elegant indeed, and also the social media. Although, adapting new style is a positive trend, it would be tactless to neglect traditional values.

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People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that living in the bustling city have a lot of drawbacks compared to countryside. In this essay, I will give my opinion and state reasons for the same. Firstly, I will discuss about the economic advantages of life in cities. Secondly, I will explore the aspects of social life in cities and rural areas.

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Some people fail in school, but end up being succesful in life. Why do you think that is the case?What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

Some people struggle in academic in their school, but they still end up getting successful in future. I am more inclined towards the statement and viewpoints will be elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The chart provides information about the worldwide sales of the five highest mobile phone brands. The data compares figures in the years 2009, 2011, and 2013.

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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Public speaking is an enormously important skill that can bring a lot of career opportunities to a person. However, a lot of people despite being technically skilled in their respective fields struggle greatly in this area which can be stemmed from several factors, and how this skill is not being taught in school is one of them. I strongly agree with the idea of teaching about presentation and public speaking to kids from a young age and I will elaborate more on this topic in the following paragraphs.

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with the coming of digital education, some people believe that trend of traditional studies may fall down. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In contemporary eproch,the usage of technology is increasing very widely.There are also plenty of digital ways that used in education purpose.Some people claim its beneficial while other declare that due to this the old methods of study is fall down.In this essay we will discuss both ideas with relevant opinion and conclusion.

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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. why is that the cause? Should they be encouraged to utilise their free time in a better way?

It is irrefutable that with the increase in the trend of materialism, many young people love to do shopping in their free time. Socialization and the rise in living standards are the main reasons for buying things. Whereas, I believe that adults should be encouraged to use their precious time in doing better things instead of shopping only.

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Some people believe arts such as painting and music cannot directly improve quality of peoples life, so that governments money should be spent on other things. How far do you agree or disagree?

Some section of public feel that quality of life is not enhanced when the government invests funds on arts like painting and music instead it should be spent on other entities. I agree to this statement to a greater extent with adequate supportive reasons stated below.

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Some people think that all TV entertainment programs should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is an undeniable truth that the world is unimaginable without the entertainment industry. In fact, it is indispensable and spread across the world. Some people hold a point of view that every TV program should give knowledge on social problems and their importance, but however, I differ from them and opine that this concept will not make any justice to the entertainment industry and to the public. I elucidate my stand in the following paragraphs with some suitable examples.

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“Groups and organizations form a vital part of people’s lives. Why do people join groups? What role do groups play in people’s lives? Support your opinion with specific reasons.”

In this modern and hectic world, people need to socialise themselves.Therefore, groups and organisations are the mean that people utilise to socialise themselves. By joining groups, people feel important and in this essay, we will discuss on the pros and cons of joining a group and I will elaborate on the role of groups in people's life.

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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. why is that the cause? Should they be encouraged to utilise their free time in a better way?

Nowadays, shopping is the favorite entertainment for most of young individuals. This essay will discuss is there any activity to do besides shopping.

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what are the pros and cons for children of watching tv

In this modern age, letting children watch television is becoming increasingly popular. Young ones, they can easily be addicted to watching vibrant images and hilarious characters shown on tv programs. However, there are both pros and cons to this matter. In this essay, I will delve into the advantages and disadvantages of children watching small screens.

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Nowadays some people have the anti-social behavior and are lack of respect to others. What are the reasons? What are the solutions?

Today there is a large increase in anti-social behavior, such as stealing, robbery and bullying,in almost every country. Also, irresponsibility and disrespect to others are common. The reasons for the anti-social behavior are both complicated and varied.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Different ages group generally cite that the other ages are happier than themselves. Some people hold the view that the most joyful times in most people’s lives are teenage years because they have a bright future ahead. Others believe that the adulthood stage in someone’s life could be more satisfying than that. I firmly believe that the teenage years are the most pleasant times.

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In many countries people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they do. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?

In this contemporary epoch, the reuse of plastic products has been a major problem in many countries. This leads to environmental issues, as those countries do not know how to recycle these wastes. Thus, in this essay, both the reason for such problem and its solution will be demonstrated.

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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all schools subjects .But other Believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or they find the most interest .Discuss both views and give an opinion.

Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution do you agree ?

Some people believe that happiness and emotional maturity are more important than physical health, while others disagree. **Discuss** both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, people now wear western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time .This can benefit teenageers and the community as well .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people fail in school, but end up being succesful in life. Why do you think that is the case?What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to an audience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

with the coming of digital education, some people believe that trend of traditional studies may fall down. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. why is that the cause? Should they be encouraged to utilise their free time in a better way?

Some people believe arts such as painting and music cannot directly improve quality of peoples life, so that governments money should be spent on other things. How far do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that all TV entertainment programs should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree

“Groups and organizations form a vital part of people’s lives. Why do people join groups? What role do groups play in people’s lives? Support your opinion with specific reasons.”

Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. why is that the cause? Should they be encouraged to utilise their free time in a better way?

what are the pros and cons for children of watching tv

Nowadays some people have the anti-social behavior and are lack of respect to others. What are the reasons? What are the solutions?

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they do. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?

Some people believe that happiness and emotional maturity are more important than physical health, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.