IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 644

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Children these days prefer to spend their time in the day with their smartphones. The main reason for this to happen is because of technological advancement and the new source of entertainment that kids can access, making them develop a negative influence. Therefore, the writer feels that this is a negative development.

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Pollution is becoming a major environment problem. What are causes and solutions to solve this problem?

Human beings suffer from a vast range of problems, the most problematic one is environment pollution. There are several factors contributing to this problem as well as different solutions to overcome it. I will discuss both sides.

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Nowadays, young people communicate with friends and family mostly through social networking sites, rather than other ways of communication like talking on the phone or face to face. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

An increasing number of people nowadays choose to talk to their friends and family online instead of other communicating forms such as phone calls or in person. In my opinion, this is a positive trend which helps increasing family bond and improving long-distance relationships.

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Nowadays, most countries can improve the standard of living through economic development, but some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s time, many countries are tried to improve their life standards by economic growth but meanwhile ,it’s necessary to not disrupt their social values.This development presents some threats but i still believe that the advantages are far greater than those.

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In the future, it seems more difficult to live on Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching another planet to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, the majority of people like to spend more money on moving to other planets to live there, such as Mars. The reason behind this act is that the earth will be an unsuitable place for humans to live. I strongly agree with this statement because it will reduce the population rate on this earth as well as global warming. On the other hand, keep in mind that it is an expensive process that consumes 40% of the world's income.

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around the world, many animals species become extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must try to solve this problem .Others believe that concentrating on problems of human beings is more important than those concerning species. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is an existing trend that in many parts of the world, animal species are going to the edge of extinction. While some people hold the point of view that nations and each one of us have to tackle this problem, others think that focus on worries of human beings is more crucial than those concerning animals. I am of the opinion that we should concentrate our efforts on preserving animal species. However, both viewpoints will be discussed on this essay.

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The increase in the production and consumption of meat has resulted in damage to the natural environment What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

The rise in the amount of meat producted and consumed has destroyed the natural habitat. The problem is attributable to deforestation taking place for grazing grass and untreated waste from production but can be addresed by replacement of environmentally friendly products.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Back in the old ages farmers usually took care of their crops and farmland by hand or with the help of the animals. However, today's technology has improved so much that the people do not even need a soil to plant the produce. Sadly, technology’s advances have not improved the world hunger problem. In this essay I will have a deeper look into this issue and provide a possible solution for it.

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In todays fast-paced world, many individuals struggle with delaying or postponing tasks. Discuss a cause of this and suggest an effective solution to overcome it

With the speedy globe, many are dealing with chronic procrastinating projects. The primary cause of this problem stems from wasting time which could possibly be solved by honing managed time skills.

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Some companies sponsor sports and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present age, whereas enterprises should invest in sports and sports stars has sparked much debate. Some people assert that it may contribute to the success of a business whereas others claim that this type of marketing strategy makes people buy purposelessly and therefore causes harm for nature. I am also convinced that such promotion is of no value for the majority of humanity, as well as our planet.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governaments to make it a legal requirement To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

There are few numbers of people exist who think that the ratio of recycled waste is lower than what it is supposed to be. In the below, I'll depict my idea about this thought.

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Parents should encourage children to spend less time in studies and more time in physical activities. To what extent do you agree?

In the modern world, admission to top universities is seen as a key step to success, and many parents, in order to achieve this goal, force their children to study more. However, some people believe that guardians should encourage children to exercise more, rather than acquire knowledge. From my point of view, Iagree that children should spend more time on physical activity.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are a variety of views about sharing information in the academic world. Some views are that we should share the information as massive amount as possible in the academic world. Nevertheless, some people say that people can not share too much information since some information is too crucial.

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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?

It is broadly believed that academy education ought to provide free of charge tuition for everyone. Although I support this view, somehow, I assume that this could be a problem if each university applies this impractical view due to the government should take the burden. Therefore, there should be criteria for those who could get this benefit and the reasons will be elaborated on the following essay.

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Addiction to the internet is a wide spread problem. What problems does this cause ? What is a suitable solution ?

In recenrt years, teenagers adicting to the internet has become among the prevalent issue around the world. This problem is able to lead to the low efficiency in work and study, and lack of experiences in a wide variety of aspects of life, yet it can be addressed by organizing more public events.

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Addiction to the Internet is a widespread problem. What problems does this causes? What is a suitable solution

In the modern era, the issue about people who are addicted to the Internet is spearded around the world. This problem is effect to the human habits and the affect to physical and mental health. But, there is a way to handle this problem is to force themselves to act more discipline by making a time schedule.

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You recently bought an item of clothing from a shop. You discovered that it had a fault and returned it to the shop for replacement or refund. However, the assistant told you that this was against the store's policy.

On Friday 3 nd February, I bought a yellow long-sleeved jacket from your store.The jacked was medium-sized and made from cotton. It cost $59.95 and it was not special.

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Although many people value public parks, this space could be better used for the other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and build economics. To what extend do you agree or dis agree with this statement.

There is no denying the fact that public parks it is a crucial thing for the community. While it is a commonly held belief that there is another use for the space that will be more important like a residential area, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that public parks have many benefits for individuals and communities.

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People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

There can be little doubt that life quality of those who live in urban areas is significantly worsening. This problem is attributable to air pollution and limited living spaces but cannot be alleviated effectively by persuading citizens to migrate to the countryside in the writer's view.

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Some people do not like changes and prefer to do things they are good at, while other people like taking risks and trying new things. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world half of the human civilization do not want changes in their life and prefer to work at the same things, while other people are risk taker and choose to try new things. In my point of view, I believe it is better to take the risk as many as possible to enhance our career-life in the future. Hence, both sides will be discussed before drawing a reasonable conclusion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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