IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 69

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that nowadays majority of the population of the world depend on technologies and use them as a mean of reducing their hurdles, which is effective for humans and a time will come when too much relying on technology will ruine human's lives. I completely agree with the idea and will support my opinion with examples in this essay. I will quote different means of techonologies that slow down the human difficulties and also I will mention how each of them effect the man's ability to think.

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Most of the urgent problems can only be solved with international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Many matters in the world that are considered as emergencies and extensive in scale. While some people believed that these issues must be solved hand in hand internationally, many serious challenges were solely relying on relavent local authorities to react rapidly at a domestic scale. This paper aims to assess different facts and prespective, and provide personal insights regarding the statement.

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In the past, people used to travel to see the differences from their home country. However, the sceneries in places around the world seem similar nowadays. What are the causes of these similarities? Do you think that the advantages of these similarities outweigh the disadvantages?

In the past, people planned a vacation to see a completely new scenery. However, the differences are no longer available as many countries have similar scenery in today's world. This essay discusses the main reason of these similarities and I believe that it offers more advantages to vast majority of people rather than disadvantages.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

With the popularity of smartphones among children, the debate on whether this can jeopardise children's mental and physical health has attracted many parents' concerns. From my perspective, this phenomenon is a double-edged sword, which on the one hand helps children to connect with the colourful world; on the other hand, exposes them too early to a world filled with emotions than reasons.

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Ordinary people try to copy famous personalities by seeing them on TV or reading about them in the newspapers. What is the reason for this? Is it a good idea to copy famous personalities?

In this modern era, while social media is taking over all the world, influencers and idols have more impact on viewers' personalities. Some individuals tend to intimate famous lifestyle by following them on broadcast or newspaper. This essay will discuss the causes and the disadvantages and advantages of this situations.

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In some city’s, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office building so people can build whatever they like. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some cities, the minimum controls regarding the construction and design of houses and buildings are giving the freedom for people to build as they desire. As much as it satifies us to be able to have our dream buildings to be constructed, I argue that it has the possibility of ruining the natural parts of the city which might causes a potential danger in the future.

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In some schools and universities, girl tend to choose art subjects(e.g literature) and boys tend to choose science subjects(e.g physics).Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?

There are some institutions where females tend to choose more literature related subjects and male students prefer to study science subjects. In this essay, I will explain the reasons of this trend and why this should be changed.

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Increasingly, many young people are deciding to work or study in other countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

It is becoming a trend that recent generations prefer to taking a job or pursuing an education outside of their states. The potential of international relation is mainly reason for this phenomenon and I personally believe that it is a burden condition that need to be solved.

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Many countries want to host international sports event, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits. Discuss both views & give your opinion.

Playing and watching games is popular rejuvenating activities among most of the masses. Some countries believe that contests should be conducted at the global level, whereas others argue that it leads to the wastage of the resources rather than the positive outcomes. Upcoming writing will shed light on points discussing both the viewpoints along with my perspective.

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Write about the following topic: Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

It is undeniable that to help students understand the lessons better, they use may different styles to studying. Some prefer and believe that learn in a group is more beneficial for them. While others prefer to learn alone at home. In my view, study together in a group in person may help children understand better than when they are alone and doing it online.

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Overpopulaiton in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. what are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

It is common to find crowded places in cities all around the world, and this is a crucial issue for society. Some of the causes of these are that huge corporations such google, and apple are attractive to stablish business in the center of cities, and the second issue is that government gives permission to build vertical building in the center of the city. One solution for these issues is that government need to allow constructions only in rural areas, so huge corporations might feel attractive to more as well.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

It is undeniable that in this digital era phones have become a necessary for everyone, including children. However, some people believe that using phones, especially during school weeks may disrupt their studies, thus suggest to banned it. Others believe differently. This essay will try to explain both beneifts and drawbacks.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Animals far beyond human existence have lived on earth. However, most of the fauna that have been on this planet does not exist anymore. What is inevitable is that the effect of man in this disaster is not ignorable. Years of exploiting the nature and destruction of it has led to the extinction of many of animal species. In this I will discuss the causes of what has happened to these animals and I will also recommend some measures to tackle this problem and prevent it from development.

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Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide the best care for their children. Others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both view and give your opinion

The is a strong debate wheather childcare centers or family members can provide the best care for children of working parents. Nowadays, a lot of fathers and mothers do not have enough time to take care of their children specially in the morning and afternoon time due to working hours. In my opinion, the best way to improve children is childcare centers. However, this essay, will discuss both views and clarifay why childcare centers is better than any family members.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individualwellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

A person's job is a crucial aspect of their life. People want to have the best occupation in order to be relaxed in their lives. There are numerous factors that can contribute to job satisfaction.

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Young people today spend too much money on fashion and technological items. Some people say that this trend has negative impact on the society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The most life expenditure for juveniles is for fashion and technological facilities in this modern world. That is to say, youngsters spend their wages on styles and electronic equioments extremely more than other items. Individuals believe that this way has negative aspects for population. I strongly agree with this idea and in this essay, I will elaborate my own views.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In contemporary epoch, companys make use of advertising to strengthen the point that their products are innovative. There are several reasons contribute to this phenomenon, and I think it is a positive development.

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Volunteering is a valuable way for people to give back to their communities and make a positive difference in the lives of others. What are the key benefits of volunteering for both the volunteers themselves and the communities they serve? Provide concrete examples to illustrate your points.

Engaging in an acitivity a volunteer is a meaningful approach for people to contribute to the society and has given a positive feedback to other people's life. There are many advantages that can be taken by being a volunteer both for the civil society as well as to individuals who serving as a volunteer.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Somepeople say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,there is no doubt that people have longer lifespan than before.While i accept that it is beneficial for society,i believe that it may more likely to cause huge stressful on government.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One half of society believe that people should compete with each other in different aspects of life such as at work, at school and in everyday life. When another half prefer cooperating together than struggling with each other. Each side has advantages and disadvantages, however in my opinion competing is better than cooperating with others.

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