IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 68

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that professionals, such as doctors and engineers should work which country they got their training, while the others believe they should be free to choose which country they want to work. Both views have own valid reasons and this essay discuss about each of them before expressing my own opinion.

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More and more people are buying a wide range of household goods. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

A growing number of individuals tend to purchase plenty of household goods. Although this matter both has merits and demerits, I hold a strong belief that it is more beneficial.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work? Do you agree Or disagree

A growing number of artists today tend to have low income, and plenty of individuals believe that the government should fund money for artists to continue their work. Although it both has benefits and drawbacks, I strongly disagree with this issue.

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With the increase of digital media available online the role of the library has become obsolete University should provide digital material rather than textbooks Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this position and give your own point of view

In the era of technology, online availability of books has increased around the world which somehow takes over the role of a traditional library. It is also argued that in institutions, internet books should replace hardcopies which has its own pros and cons but everything will unfold as we move along in the essay.

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Some people think that the success of life is based on hard work and determination. Others, however, believe that there are more important factors, such as having money or a good appearance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about whether some individuals consider that hard work and determination are necessary to succeed in life , others believe that having money or an attractive appearance are more vital to gain an achievement. I will discuss both perspectives before presenting my opinion,justifying the first view.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In today's world, it is common to see children spending several hours daily on their gadgets. This issued has attracted both positive and negative sides. This essay will give reasons why this is happening and negative for young generations.

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It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct. There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

The opinion whether human should prevent a natural process that animal species become extinct has sparked heated discussion in recent years. While some people argue that there is no reason for people to prevent from happening, I believe that people should take actions to preserve endangered species because we cause a lot of environmental issues.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The opinion on whether young students should be demanded to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old has sparked heated discussion in recent years. While some people argue that full time education is unnecessary to some extent, I strongly believe that full time education leads to positive effects such as offering sufficient academic knowledge and opportunities to communicate among peers.

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Some people believe that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree

A widely held opinion is that most crimes are caused by the lack of financial means. Being aware of consequences of poverty, which lead to deterioration of mental and physical well-being, the essay agrees with that point of view.

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Today credit cards are easy to get in many countries, but some people who use them struggle to pay their debt. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries today, credits cards are widely available to pay their debts, however, some groups of people have difficulties. The principal advantage is to get a wide range of rewards and cashback after paying through a card, which outweighs the main disadvantage of the stack of transaction fees.

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Some individuals argue that educating children at home is the most effective method, whereas others believe that traditional schools provide greater benefits. Discuss both perspectives and express your own opinion.

Many people agree that home schooling children is a better way to educate them whereas the other segment of people think going to an institution and getting education traditionally is still the ideal method. Both the opinions are equally objective and depending on the child's requirments , parents can continue to choose one of the choices. After elaborating on both the perspectives, personal thoughts would be given at the end of the essay.

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some say that these are the best people to talk to school students about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A general trend can be seen amongst citizens who have been prisoners that they choose a path to be good citizens after serving their time in jail. This essay agrees with the statement that these people are one of the best to talk to school going children for giving an opinion on the consequences of committing a crime.

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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. Several Nations have observed an enormous increase in crime amid youngsters.

Youth becomes the backbone of every country but when they start to choose a path of commiting crimes, it highly disrupts the nation's working. It can be seen that the most common reasons due to which there is a surge of illegal activities amongst teenagers are neglecting parents and glorification of goons and gangsters on social media.

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Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, some have argued that social skills are qualities that are as vital as academic cirtificates. In my opinion, I firmly agree with the statment since these abilities not only help polish communication skills but also contribute to individuals’ mental health.

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Some people think that we learn best through in-person interaction with a teacher in a classroom. Others believe that online learning is more effective. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Teaching learning is one of the most vital processes of all human life. Throughout the history, we have witnessed the evolution in learning also. Learning habit of humans is as old as the human itself. Thus, as man evolved from the primitive man to modern man, learning techniques also underwent significant changes.

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People today are surrounded by advertising. Do you think the positive effects of advertising outweigh the negative effects?

A widely heated debate regarding whether the merits of widespread advertisements outweigh the demerits has received accumulating attention from the public. As for my perspective, I am convinced that it brings more negative impact rather than benefits, and the reasons will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.

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Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this problem? How can it be addressed?

In contemporary,one of the issues is an insufficient level of a physical activity which really concerns doctors worldwide. In this essay, I will touch on the main challenges of this trend and suggest solutions to address this matter.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative devlopment?

Younger older people nowadays can not be separated from their smartphones because of the improvements in technology. This situation can lead to many cases or even problems. In my personal views, the daily use of smartphones by children is a negative development.

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Some people think that the government should put a tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to eat food that is good for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?

People’s opinions differ on the necessity of levying on processed food to keep consumers away from convenience food. While there is logic behind the idea, I still disagree with the mindset.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Many people had to move from there country for work porpuses which keep them away from their friends and families, there re advantegas and disadvantegs , i will discuss booth of them , and i held believe that the advantages are more outweigh the disadvantages.

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