IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 68

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Funding has always been a concern among creative artists in order to sustain their sustainable development, while many governments are keen to invest capital in the industry to preserve domestic culture and heritages, some people believed that capital should be given through other means. This paper aims to assess opinions from both prespective with personal insights added.

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Many cities have areas where cars,taxis and buses are only used. Is this a positive or a negative development? What are the effects of this on individuals and society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

Many people are suffering from poverty worldwide. In my country, Japan, the reason why poverty becomes popular is due to low wages and educational inequality. I believe that government should provide citizens more sufficient welfare system and financial support.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governmnents must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The government fundings which are given to arts, like theatre and music, is considered a bad financial decision. Instead, it is a much better decision to allocate the money to fund public services. I partly agree on this statement and I will explain below.

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Schools should teach children good behaviour and introduce ideas of "right" and "wrong". It should not only be left to parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It hard to deny that school plays an impotant role in teacing children good beahviour and introduce ideas of "right" and "wrong". Therefore, such an opinion is gengerated that school should take responsbility for the moral education. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be exaimed meticulously. As far as the values of children, family relationship and educational effectiveness are concerned, I strongly hold that parents should attend moral education.

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Some people think that competitive sports such as soccer can help to reach cultural interaction among people of different age groups and nationalities, but others think that it would cause problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Soccer has become one of the top sports in the world. Soccer is conquering the world. It became a daily topic of discussion for few individuals. Some of the citizens have opinion that this sport is helping to interact between divergent nationalities and age groups, but few citizens believe that it also creating issue. This essay will discuss about both views.

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Education should be accessible to people of all economic background. All level of education from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion.

Across the globe, imposing excessive price of every item has increased inflation of every part of the earth and people are unable to pay their children's school fees, therefore, some people argue that education should be free of cost and this essay agrees with this notion because of equality and opportunity as well as for people who are under poverty.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that non-academic school subjects like cookery and physical education should be excluded from the school curriculum, because of the intense pressure which is about accomplish academically on teenagers and make them fully focus on school work. It is totally disagreed with that opinion because pupils can release their stress owing to that kind of subjects and they are necessary for manintaining their daily life.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Without a shadow of a doubt, the current century is the era of data and communication. A group of people put this idea forward that sharing significant information is good for researching areas such as science, enterprise, and scholastic, while others disagree saying profitable knowledge should be free and available for all pubic. Both schools of thought, due to prominent values they carry, are apt to be taken into account.

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Some people believe that teenagers should focus on all school subjects, while others think they should concentrate on the subjects they are best at or find most interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Schools are the Mecca for education and learning diverse subjects. Recently, it has been the topic of discussion whether concentration on all school syllabus is a good idea or not. This essay will discuss both notions and reveal my orientation towards this statement.

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Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while the others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Environmental damage is a pressing issue today. It is worth noting that although the question is multifaceted, contamination with the plastic wastes occupies a significant part in this regard. For that reason, people have divided into two groups: the majority declare the production and selling of plastic bags just as well as packaged products must be reduced to an absolute minimum, whereas the minority shift the responsibility to the ordinary consumers, calling them for acquiring less those packed merchandises. In this essay, the both viewpoints will be represented.

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Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What is the cause of this damage? What should be done about this problem?

Nowadays, environmental damage is a pressing issue that affects many countries around the world. Unfortunately, politics, just as well as many scientists tend to pay attention only to a small part of the whole dilemma – the global warming. Whereas the other noticeable factors such as deforestation, air, water and soil pollution, spreading of invasive species etc. are left behind. For that reason, multiple steps must be taken in this regard. In this essay, the mentioned factors and the comprehensive solution to whole question will be represented.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of cell phones?

Today is modern age of science. So mobile phone is blessing of modern science and day by day it is more thrived. Using a mobile phone has many disadvantages, but we khow it has lot of benifits.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The question of the most pressing environmental issue of the current times has sparked the debate, with some asserting that extinction of certain animal species has led to this situation, while others argue that broader ecological problems should take precedence. Although it is evident that the cooperation of versatile do harms to environment more than extinction, I will discuss the both sides of controversy in detail.

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Many feel that common educational system of teachers and students ina a classroom will be replaced by the year 2050 do you agree with this view give your opinion?

Many people believe that class based educational learning will be replaced by modern methodology by 2050.This essay will discuss this statement and give reasons as to why class based learning could be replaced by advance methods of learning in upcoming years.

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It is too expensive to look after and repair old building. This money should be spent on building modern buildings instead.

There are many arguments about whether money should be spent onf maintaining and repairing previous buildings or used to construct modern ones. Some belive that the cost of preserving old structures is expensive and that invseting in new infrastructure is a more efficient option. While I understand the advantage of modern buildings, I totally disagree with the idea that old buildings should be neglected.

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some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country they wish.

Many people argue about wheter or not professional jobs, such as ductors and engineers are obligated to work in their training country. Eventhough some individuals believe that these people with professioanl jobs should work in their own country in return to all of their training, this essay believes that people who work in these fields should have their own right to choose their own workplace.

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In some countries, the number of shooting massacres is on the rise because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

A huge number of people are in possession of rifles, which caused shooting massacres to rise in an unprecedented manner in a number of nations. This essay strongly agrees with the statement because some countries give permission to people to have guns for self-defense; moreover, armaments companies make huge profit out of this business.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people are gradually awared of the high levels of sugar consumption, which is not healthy at all, leading to the argument that sugary products should cost more to decrease the consume of sugar. In my view, I agree with this method to prevent people from over-consumption of sugar.

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Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambition. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Undobtedly, the school is a place which prepares individuals for adult life. Therefore, there have been many voices that its main purpose should be helping people to become successful as well as to achieve their dreams. At the same time, however, others claim that its the most significant role is socialisation. Each of these views has both pros and cons.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is often said that the government should spend some budget for the development of the country on the railways more than roads. I agree with this statement because train tracks has more benefits services for large scale populations.

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