IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 68

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The topic of displaying societal concerns and emergencies more on social as compared to optimistic news, has become a debatable due to its detrimental impact on community. However, in my opinion, a balanced approach incorporates both the practices would be an effective manner of news publishing.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In some parts of the world, young people prefer a more practical education, choosing to enroll in work-based training rather than getting a college degree. In my opinion, this alternative could lead to some benefits, although, it also has some downsides.

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some believe that the government should support atrists like musicians painters and poets while others argue that this is a misuse of funds Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is an idea supported by some people that authorities are supposed to help workers of the cultural sphere like musicians, painters, and poets, whereas there is an opposite version which says it is just spending finances aimlessly. I think, if artists need something, the government has to help them and here are some reasons for that.

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Some people think that it is better for high school students to study a wide range of subjects than to focus on a narrow range of subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is argued that high school students need to study a wide range of subjects instead of focusing on a narrow range of subjects. The positives are higher knowledge and a variety of choices while the negatives are overburden and lack of specialisation on a particular subject, both views will be discussed in this essay.

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Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encourage to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified worked such as electrians and plumbers. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Although, society is looking for more skilled gangs everywhere posted for hiring fresher vocational training candidates as the community must be in favour side of this, still some humans like to do their academic studies, to illustrate i will give some reasons with examples in this essay to support vocational study.

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1. Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniforms. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform?

As business requirements evolve in the contemporary world, some authorities implement similar dress codes for their employees at workplaces. In this essay. I will explicate what I consider to be the possible advantages to enforce the staff to wear uniforms, as well as the demerits that likely to occur.

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1. Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniforms. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform? standardized way implement distinct benefits presents challenges fosters equal footing individuality personal expression. personal interaction or self-expression well-being and productivity. feel restricted employees feel unified in their purpose more practical and accessible for everyone. On the downside

Some Multinational Corporations mandate for their workers to be dressed in uniforms. In this essay, I will outline what I consider to be the potential advantage of wearing uniform at workplace, as well as few negative outcomes that I feel are likely to occur.

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Some businesses now say that no-one can smoke cigarettes in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree with this?

It is considered by some entrepreneurs that smoking is prohibited in all their offices as well as the government officials have agreed to follow no smoke policy in public areas. I completely agree with the above mentioned, no smoking in common areas of work or public, which is not only injuries to our health but also to the people around us. Work space can be prone to fire due to docuements and other fire hazardous things, while most public areas are used by elderly people and young children such as parks and gardens.

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Government investment in sports is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that investment in public services is more important than in sports. In my option, investment in both public services and sports must be balanced to attain the well-being of the population.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this fact.

While it is widely believe that tourism is one of the key drivers contributing to incomes, it can negatively cause problems due to poor management. This essay will show that economic and employment are benefited, while environment can be damaged.

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Some people think that the increase in the number of obese people should be the responsibility of the governments, while others think it should be the responsibility of the individuals.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's society overconsumption has moved to a different level by being a part of all our daily tasks, even eating or drinking. Due to that, the obesity rate in the world has steadily increased over the past decade. The victims of this disorder are often blamed for it and have experienced extreme bullying, however some people believe, that the problem is not that person, but the government, which regulated the food industry in the country and it’s harmful activities.In today’s essay, I will discuss the arguments, which both sides believe in and state my opinion on this topic.

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The development of Artificial Intelligence is having substantial impacts on various aspects of modern society. What effects is it having? Will this be a positive or negative development in the future?

With the development of Artificial Intelligence,also known as AI, there is a major concern on the impact of this trend on many aspects of modern society.This trend has a significant impact on declining working efficiency and human imagination. This might be a negative development in the future.

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Only 20% of Tech Jobs are Held by Women. What problems do women face that prevent them from getting these jobs and what must be done to change this situation?

Technology has become a basic need in peoples' lives. However, it is noticed that there are less numbers of women working in technological jobs. Many reasons may discourage women from being involved in this field, such as maternity and work environment. In this essay, I will explain those reasons and suggest solutions that can help increase women's participation in tech jobs.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, online shopping has become increasingly popular, offering people the convenience of shopping from the comfort of their homes instead of spending hours visiting stores. While some argue that this trend could lead to decline of local businessness, I partially agree with this perspective and will discuss both sides in the following paragraphs.

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All around the globe every year many animal species become extinct. However some people feel that government should be concerned more with solving problems of human life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that animals face extinction at an alarming rate. Some individuals believe that official authorities should take this matter seriously as these species are crucial in maintaining life cycle and for curing deadly viruses and illnesses too. Whereas others opine that goverenment should sort out those problems which human beings are facing today such as poverty, unemployment rate etcetera. I think both animals and humans have their own importance, so goverenment should adopt a balanced approach to maintain balance among them.

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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

Small local businesses have to face a lot of challenges, especially since they have to compete with larger shops and online retailers. In my opinion, this competition negatively affects the local economy, therefore, some solutions should be adopted to preserve their position.

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Research shows that some activities are good for health and othe are bad.Despite knowing that millions of people engange in unhealthy activites. What is the cause of this? What can be done?

People are used to many daily habits in their lives. However, not all of them are healthy. Unfortunately, many people are practicing those activities despite being aware of the harmful effects on their health. In this essay, I will explain why people tend to do such activities, and suggest some solutions.

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It is true that many types of animals are now endangered as a consequence of the actions of humans. Various reasons have caused this situation, and measures must be taken into consideration urgently

It is true that many types of animals are now endangered as a consequence of the actions of humans. Various reasons have caused this situation, and measures must be taken into consideration urgently.

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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, a lot of people are overweight and get chronically sick. This epidemic is happening especially in the big city. This essay will discuss my point of view about the main effects of this epidemic and the reasons why it’s occured.

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Some cultures appear to give preference to older people than younger people while other cultures seem to prefer the younger generation. Which do you think is better? Discuss including examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is undeniable that the old are preferred in some countries, while some individuals consider the young is the mainstay in the country. In my opinion, I strongly contend that the younger generation should be emphasized owing to they are more innovative and exploratory than older people.

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